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Off-Topic => All of all! => Topic started by: Almeidaboo on February 09, 2006, 12:14:31 AM

Title: Help, I need a story...
Post by: Almeidaboo on February 09, 2006, 12:14:31 AM

Hm, GM please forgive me if this' the wrong place, cause this isn´t a storyline request for my RPG Maker game...So if it´s gonna be moved, I just ask you to kindly notify me of it. :)

Well, starting next sunday (not the upcoming, the next one) I´ll be the GM of an RPG, using that system I created a topic about and no one really cared hehehe...

Anyway, this system aplies to any genre, and I wanted the story to be a modern one, school-ish theme, in the best of Shin Megami style (involving the occult and scary stuff...mistery and murder. Persona like game).

Thing is, my head is completely empty, for real. I can´t think of anything! It needn´t be 100% original.

So I though I should come here and ask if anyone has a plot that fits that description and If I could use it in my RPG as the story (with proper credits, even though it's not gonna be...published.).

Anything will do. I can adapt anything to the system, so no worries.!

Thanks in advance!

EDIT: Where is DF? He´s a Shin Megami fan, he´d be really helpful...

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Post by: Grandy on February 09, 2006, 12:17:37 AM

 What you mean by "school"?

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on February 09, 2006, 12:17:41 AM

What exactly is Shin Megami? I could google it, but I choose not to.

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 09, 2006, 01:14:38 AM

Well, school I mean: the players will be students...I wa thinking of strange merders at the school...(university, whatever...but university sounds like crappy scary movies...I wanted something more...Jaopanese school style).

Shin Megami is an game maker (is that right?) that has his own style, whick is his "trademark"...The Megaten (he likes to be called that...?) series are famous for their peculiarity, dealing with the occult and monsters, possession and so on...

Well, you needn´t bind yourself to that, I bet you people can make something awesome up! Anything will help!

Title: I'll help
Post by: chronoman on February 09, 2006, 02:32:13 AM

well I am a little new at writing. I am writing 2 stories right now.(On 75% and the other about 12%)  But they both are on hold. Let me know if you would like my help in writing or anything along those lines.

Also shin megami tensei means some thing like The goddes will rain down destruction or something like that and the mascot is jackfrost. The one I played was nocturne which is kickarse and people should play it.

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Post by: Drace on February 09, 2006, 05:51:19 AM

My suggestion, watch movies. From Comedy to Drama to Horror. You'll get loads of ideas and mostly, they'll hump each other in a story.

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 09, 2006, 02:44:08 PM

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Originally posted by Drace
My suggestion, watch movies. From Comedy to Drama to Horror. You'll get loads of ideas and mostly, they'll hump each other in a story.

Yeah, I tried that, but I ain´t got much time to make a story up...I have watched tons of movies and played tons of games, but I can´t think of anything I could use without being repetitive, obvious or a copier.

I have the basis: 4 students. Strange happenings (involving demons and so on). The decayed part of the modern world (gangs, organizations in general. Urban violence).

But I need the trigger, which would also work as the core. Because all I mentioned above are discriptive elements, per say, how I´m gonna show them our world.

But I´d like to introduce something with the dark side, dar rituals, something to make the sessions scary. Just like Persona was.

Lemme say something about Persona 1:

"Guido Sardenia, the president of Sebec Lunarvale Branch, has been plagued with vicious rumors since they opened their doors months ago.

It's not safe to go out alone in Lunarvale anymore. Shadows and substance have formed new alliances. Suspicious looking men in dark suits roam the town. What is their purpose? Mysterious sounding machines squeal from deep beneath the earth. The spirit of a little girl, dressed in black haunts the company. This is just a hint of the rumors emanating from Sebec.

What does Guido think when he looks over the city with those dark beady little eyes of his?

You and your friends, Mark, Yuki, Nate and Mary, (who incidentally has been very ill), are well aware of the rumors. This doesn't stop you from playing the one game you truly enjoy, "Persona."

Weird things have started to happen since you began to play the game... " - Excerpt taken from the game booklet.

Anyway, Guido was Summoning devils by opening dimensional portals. When the characters are at the school, somethig happens and the school changes completely, monsters attack people and kill them.

The whole game is macabre and dark, but also awesome because the characters are all students, that go around town grabbng guns and swords and killing the monsters, all to get to Guido SArdenia and stop all that.

That´s the kinda thing I´m looking for...but all my friends played persona already, so I cant just adapt it...

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Post by: Drace on February 09, 2006, 05:46:22 PM

Dude, Buffy The Vampire Slayer. Watch it. It has students, demons, a big story, action, violence etc.

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 09, 2006, 05:55:28 PM

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Dude, Buffy The Vampire Slayer. Watch it. It has students, demons, a big story, action, violence etc.

LOL, sorry, the whole group is 20+years old...=D

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on February 09, 2006, 07:11:22 PM

In my experience, Student RPGs are BAD. But that's just me. *Mumbles something about cruddy FF8 characters*

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 10, 2006, 12:08:08 AM

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Originally posted by Moosetroop11
In my experience, Student RPGs are BAD. But that's just me. *Mumbles something about cruddy FF8 characters*

But it won´t look anything like FF8 cause it´s no videogame RPg ím making, it´s an actual "paper" RPG...

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Post by: chronoman on February 10, 2006, 03:16:01 AM

Well you could try to have it set up like the main character is dreaming about random events in the game such as a dark ritual and as the day goes on he/she starts to realize that what was in the dream is actually happening to the world/school/university/ect. what ever you are thinking about using as where this will effect. Once you have some  of the following factors you will only need to fill in gaps with your story.

1.where is the game placed?
2.where is this happening/will happen?
3.how disastorous is this if at all?
4.what is the main point?
5.who will it effect?
6.who did it(If anyone)?
7.How will they stop it or return things back to the way it was?Or can they not turn it back?

I find these to be the main points in the story.

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 10, 2006, 09:53:22 AM

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Originally posted by chronoman
Well you could try to have it set up like the main character is dreaming about random events in the game such as a dark ritual and as the day goes on he/she starts to realize that what was in the dream is actually happening to the world/school/university/ect. what ever you are thinking about using as where this will effect. Once you have some  of the following factors you will only need to fill in gaps with your story.

1.where is the game placed?
2.where is this happening/will happen?
3.how disastorous is this if at all?
4.what is the main point?
5.who will it effect?
6.who did it(If anyone)?
7.How will they stop it or return things back to the way it was?Or can they not turn it back?

I find these to be the main points in the story.

ok, let´s go...

1. A fictious city, in our world (modern world).
2. The weird happenigs start all over town, but what interest us is that they begin inside the school.
3. People are being killed goddamnit! Call Maloney, let´s get inside that building!
4. MAin poist is: every character, GOd knows why, gets interested in things that gen get them in trouble...So the players want to find out the cause, since the murders are grotesque!
5. Everyone, if the "curse" is not stopped.
6. That´s what I need help with: who did it and why. I want to insert in the game the mafia (the rich one and the underground one, leaning towards cyberpunk) and people that are invoking through dark rituals, the creatures that are messing things up!
7. Same as above...the players will do it, but i need 6. to make 7. up.

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Post by: chronoman on February 12, 2006, 09:39:43 PM

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Originally posted by Almeidaboo

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Originally posted by chronoman Well you could try to have it set up like the main character is dreaming about random events in the game such as a dark ritual and as the day goes on he/she starts to realize that what was in the dream is actually happening to the world/school/university/ect. what ever you are thinking about using as where this will effect. Once you have some  of the following factors you will only need to fill in gaps with your story. 1.where is the game placed? 2.where is this happening/will happen? 3.how disastorous is this if at all? 4.what is the main point? 5.who will it effect? 6.who did it(If anyone)? 7.How will they stop it or return things back to the way it was?Or can they not turn it back? I find these to be the main points in the story.

ok, let´s go...

1. A fictious city, in our world (modern world).
2. The weird happenigs start all over town, but what interest us is that they begin inside the school.
3. People are being killed goddamnit! Call Maloney, let´s get inside that building!
4. MAin poist is: every character, GOd knows why, gets interested in things that gen get them in trouble...So the players want to find out the cause, since the murders are grotesque!
5. Everyone, if the "curse" is not stopped.
6. That´s what I need help with: who did it and why. I want to insert in the game the mafia (the rich one and the underground one, leaning towards cyberpunk) and people that are invoking through dark rituals, the creatures that are messing things up!
7. Same as above...the players will do it, but i need 6. to make 7. up.

That sounds like it will turn out good. you could always make up a clan or search the internet of some info on occults and try to find a good one to base yours off of. As for mafia mobs you could have some small families and street gangs involved, they can pretty much go in anything. As for who is causing it and why I think you should just start the game basics first and just work your way to it(Unlike nocturne when you know hakiwa did it at the beginning to create his world of stillness). SO you shold focus on the beginning right now and just brainstrom some possible ideads on that subject.

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Post by: charaman on February 12, 2006, 09:41:54 PM

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My suggestion, watch movies. From Comedy to Drama to Horror. You'll get loads of ideas and mostly, they'll hump each other in a story.

thats dirty

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Post by: artoni on February 12, 2006, 09:45:41 PM

Alright, here's an idea.

How about a good friend of the students happens to become possessed...but they don't know that they're possessed. Anyway, this possessed student got on the wrong side of a demon/happens to be a conduit for spiritual energy/something or other, and that's why they're possessed. Now they're murdering people in the most painful (and long) way possible to harness their spirit, so that the thing possessing them can become more powerful...or even gain entrance to our world.

Now, the good friend will be completely innocent at first. No idea of what's going on, because they don't know what goes on while they're possessed. However, as the story goes on and on, more and more clues point to them...which the players will either dismiss outright, think is an attempt to frame them, or whatever.

But then, at a crucial time...DUNDUNDUN...they catch them in the act!

But yea. Just an idea.

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Post by: Almeidaboo on February 12, 2006, 10:41:01 PM

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Alright, here's an idea.

How about a good friend of the students happens to become possessed...but they don't know that they're possessed. Anyway, this possessed student got on the wrong side of a demon/happens to be a conduit for spiritual energy/something or other, and that's why they're possessed. Now they're murdering people in the most painful (and long) way possible to harness their spirit, so that the thing possessing them can become more powerful...or even gain entrance to our world.

Now, the good friend will be completely innocent at first. No idea of what's going on, because they don't know what goes on while they're possessed. However, as the story goes on and on, more and more clues point to them...which the players will either dismiss outright, think is an attempt to frame them, or whatever.

But then, at a crucial time...DUNDUNDUN...they catch them in the act!

But yea. Just an idea.

Dude, this' awesome!!! I swear, I love it! Just, gimme some more details!