Lafarna II: Akasenshi's Treachery

[Deminicus]

Hey, i'm working on a project called Lafarna II: Akasenshi's Treachery ( this is really the first one). THis is my first attempt  at creating a game with any rpg maker so it isnt that good yet.

(I attached the file at the bottom. it only features an intro so far)

If you have any questions or would like to help or have suggestions, please post them here.

Edit 1: I plan to change the intro in the future.

Edit 2: Oops! i forgot the storyline!
The year is 1524. You are a boy who was abandoned by his mother at age 8. He was taken in by a man named Akamori who owns an inn and his son at age 10. He is now 12 when the story begins. He is captured by Lord Zenokaze. That is where the intro stops. If you want to know the rest of what i wrote ask me ( i dont want to spoil it ( nothing to spoil really) ).