My song

[Noobpwner]

I don't have anything for recording so i had to use the power tab editor for this song, Its not that great but i need some feedback on what i should do better if anyone wants the tab I could post it here.

            You need at least 2 guitars for the song.
                   regular electric
                   electric jazz
                   and a distortion pedal
           
              Its midi and sounds crappy though so don't blame me.


EDIT: For any stupid people out there the attachment is the midi file in other words you listen to it.

[Desimodontidae]

What is everyone's deal with the pentatonic scale? Meh, not that its completely bad... Some of those chords sound horrible. And in my opinion the arpeggios are too bland.. Not enough structure either. Overall not too great.

[Noobpwner]

thanks Ive been working on the arpeggios also im fixing the bad chords as we speak cause they sound horrible... What im talkin about is the stupid one bout halfway threw. I used the blues scale cause i like it lol. ill be postin the updated version in a couple minutes

[Noobpwner]

k heres the new version of the song.

[Desimodontidae]

Slightly better. Slightly. Do you actually play guitar? Because that solo (or whatever the hell it's supposed to be) just looks like random notes you typed in.

[Noobpwner]

oh ya i play guitar the solo was a parts of a blues scale that goes like this  

                       
                   E    -----------------------------1-4---
                   B    -------------------------1-4-------
                   G    ------------------1-3-4-----------
                   D    -------------1-3-------------------
                   A    ------1-2-3------------------------
                   E    -1-4--------------------------------


                  I cant figure out how to make the scales diagram on a comp so i just made a tab.

        But I have to admit to fill in some spaces in the solo (or whatever ya wanna call it (mess)) I put some open strings.... I didn't know what to do but I can garenty you every note there goes in place in the scale...It might be confusing cause i liked to jump from e to g or b to d though..  Im attaching the blues scakle bellow.

[Desimodontidae]

I see. I think you could utilize your scale a lot better. I just took that scale and improved up something pretty cool (I used the key of C, though...) but still. Some parts are ok. Like I said before, musically it just seems really bland. Nothing that special. Work on your style, and the flow of your music. Thats why I cant make songs because I suck ass at transitions from theme to theme.

[Noobpwner]

ya i need to practice theme changes origganilly the song was like this

           I liked to bend the strings in this song mainly at the end of each time i played it.
         B=bend
 Tuning- regular. It wont sound right out of tune although when i wrote it my high e and g were off by 1 fret.( i used difrent notes then someone helped me rewrite it to normal tuning)


        Part A
------1--1-1-1-1-1-0-0-0-0-0-0-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1B
-T----3-3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-1-1-1-1-1-1-3B
-A----2-2-2-2-2-2--2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2B
-B-------------------------------------------------------------------
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           Part B
-----------1----------0-----------1---------1--------0-----------
-T------3----3----3----3-----3----1----3----2---1----1--------
-A---2----------2----------2----------2---------2---------2B-------
-B--------------------------------------------------------------------
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  It repeatd in this order A B A A B A B B A

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