My 2nd Game

[Adjuma]

I think it was pretty silly putting up the "Want some opinions about my character" just for getting opinions about Faw. So I decided to post up a little topic here with information about the whole game. Any opinions are sure welcome.

The game has no name yet. My sis suggested Pirates Of Jaros, but I think it sounds to much like Pirates of The Caribbean (not sure i spelled it right). As you se my sis often came with suggestions. That way she's really usefull.


The story of the game is like this:

Fawromian and his friend Ranasan has decided to start an inn together. They lended money from various rich and important persons to make their plan came truth. One stormy night a tree beside the inn got struck by the thunder and the whole inn burns to the ground, and when it's time to pay back the loans the friends have no money. Soon their hunted by every iportant person in whole their town. The both friends change their identities and hides in a little hut outside the town. Soon the find a small ship and they us it to transport persons and goods to difrent places in their world for a small payment. One of their tasks is transporting an young masked woman and a noble man to just somewhere outside The Isle Kingdom (where they live)

Strange things is going on in The Isle Kingdom. The Lord of Rozzo Isle (where Faw and Ranasan lives) has sudden became verry ill and he's going to die. He has one young daughter, Moriade, and two brothers, Narunu and Mestiamon. Untill Moriade turns 18 Narunu and Mestiamon will rule Rozzo Isle. Mestiamon takes the command over his brother, who is weak, silly and afraid of everything and so on.
It's soon clear Mestiamon doing this for his own winning. He don't care much about the people of Rozzo Isle or Moriade (In fact, Moriade's father became ill because Mestiamon poisoned him). Mestiamon gives Narunu high posts and fine titles to make him belive they share the power. But Narunu can't decide anything from his posts. When Moriade suspect Mestiamon is going to kill her to, she takes her beloved uncle Narunu with her to leave The Isle Kingdom, dressed in a long cloak and a mask over her face.

Soon before the ship is about to leave Ranasan dissapear. Faw can't find him and understand he have to do the journey alone with the two travelers (of course it's Moriade and Narunu). When Faw understand whats going on he finds out it don't just helps hidding Moriade. They must defeat Mestiamon befor he takes over the whole world and ruin it.

Fawromian, Moriade and Narunu is involved in both sea robbery as well as heroic achievement, and known as pirates. They find the mysterious old pirate ship Jaros, which is filled with evil spirits, souls of dead pirates and undiscovered dark powers. They keep on fighting against Mestiamons power while gathering their own army.


Any suggestion for a name to the game is welcome

[Adjuma]

Thanx! Now  I'm about going to school within 5 min. I'll post the personalities when I'm home again

EDIT: My computer clock is going wrong. I've 25 minutes left. Here comes the first character:

FAWROMIAN

Age:   Between 16 - 18 years

Race:   Hiphar (some kind of half animal/human with the skill to transform)

Weapon:   Sable

Skills:   Most condition skills (Silence, Berserk, Paralyze etc...)

Good at:   1) making up difficult plans
   2) take fast decitions
   3) sailing
   4) navigating after stars
   5) think about other things than he need or should
   6) awake early in the mornings

Bad at:   1) controlling his anger
   2) beliving the fate
   3) beliving unnatural things
   4) sleep while things is going on around him
   5) listening to others (except for Ranasan)
   6) read (that Faw can't read makes real problems for him)

[Adjuma]

Fawromian is not really finished yet, I'n about thinking deeper about his personality, and filling a 5 page form i use for main characters.

I don't see any troubbles in pronouncing Fawromian, maybe because I pronounce it the swedish way. The both a's shall be pronounced like in spanish madre, the o like in door and the i like free.

I lended the word Hiphar from a novell I read once, but Changeling is sure a better word.

Faw isn't beliving in any religion, and about what happens when a person dies, Faw hasn't thought about it yet, but i think he will have to durring the game.

Faw always does as Ranasan tells him, and he has never really been on his own, and he had never needed to listen to his own inner voice, which of course means great troubble when Ranasan dissapears.

It's many reasons why Faw tries to help Moriade to stop her uncle:
1) Get Moriade's attention
2) Get Ranasan Back (he disappear when Mestiamon finds out they're going to transport Moriade away and capture him)
3) Revenge the death of his father who died in Mestiamon's earlier war.
Yes, Mestiamon has started wars eralier, but not in The Isle Kingdom. Fawromian was born under a war in The Arlayan Kingdoms, which Mestiamon and his Father was keeping agains the Arlayan people. When Fawromian was 3 year old, his mother asked Ranasan to take Fawromian away from The Arlayan Kingdom. Fawromian's father died in the war, but the mother, named Arissa, is still alive, but Faw doesn't know much about her.
When Faw brings Moriade from The Isle Kingdom he does the same thing as his older friend dis once. That make Faw feel he is such a hero as is friend, and it makes Faw grow from a pretty weak person to a stronger person. I think I'll reunite mother and son again in the game.

[Adjuma]

MORIADE

Age: (not decieded yet)

Race: Elf           ( this is changed )

Weapon: Spear (often with earthquake effects)

Skills: Earth

Good at:
1) try and try untill things work
2) being selfish
3) teaching new things
4) disappear suddenly

Bad at:
1) doing things quiet and discreet
2) wait (Moriade hates doing nothing)
3) realize people can be evil

Her reasons to stop Mestiamon:
1) To prove she's worthy being the ruler of Rozzo Isle
2) To save both her and her uncle's life
3) To have a reason to leave Rozzo Isle and see the world (she is living under hard protection by her parents)

A note about Moriade's mother:
She joins Mestiamon, and later in the game, efter her husbands death, she'll marry Mestiamon, because she wants to be the queen of the empire he's trying to build. Mestiamon finds it usefull to controll Moriade's mother.

[Red Giant]

This sounds really good. The plot is great, I enjoyed just reading it! Good luck with it.
And I like the fact that Fawwawhatever and the other guy run an inn at the begining, and aren't just some lone destined heroes with no job and yet seem to have enough money to make a living.

[Adjuma]

I know Fawromian is a long and strange name, but he's mostly called Faw (except for Mestiamon who always calls him Master Fawromian, just for annoy Faw)

[Zeigue]

That 3D picture...Very Impressive... What program did you use to make that. I would would appriciate it if you would tell me because I am making an RPG and i need to find i nice prog. that will allow me to make 3D Characters...Thank you.

[Adjuma]

Thanx for your comment. I use Poser4 to make the 3D characters.


Just a note: Moriade charset is complete.

[Adjuma]

NARUNU

Age:   Above 50

Race:   Elf

Weapon:   Twohanded Sword

Skills:   (not decided yet)

God at:  
1) Sneak  
2) Teach people things
3) Talk about himself

Bad at:
1) Follow his own inner voice
2) Decide good from evil
3) Make his dreams come truth

His reasons to stop Mestiamon:
1) Protect Moriade
2) Save the honor of the family
3) Don't be forgotten after his death

[Zeigue]

Where exactly did you get this "Poser4" at...Kazza?

[Adjuma]

No, I bought it.

[Zeigue]

Damn...Thanks anyway though.