Project Roan Part one: Trial of Illusia.

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At the beginning of the game, the hero who's named Gareth, and is around 16 years old, wakes up in what appears to be his room, but it's all destroyed, and there's rubble everywhere. After crawling through a whole in the wall, he sees that the outside of his house isn't anybetter. Than he notices a hut to east, so he decides to enter it. Inside he sees the heroine(Charsie) being attacked by a monster, and after fighting it, she leaves the hut. Than outside, she tells you she doesn't know how to get through the forest, but Gareth does, so she decides to follow him. This is basically the very biginning, but I've made a ton more than this. Does it sound good?


Here's the title screen, is it good?