The 4 Spirits

[blaman]

This is about the third post on this game, but the other ones are old, and it would be a topic kick if I posted them... so...

The game's story goes starts like this:

 The spirits of the elements, fire, water, wind, and earth dissapeared and their spiritual orbs were glowing dimly.
Alex, the main character, (I started this BEFORE I came to Charas for my first time.) and her sister, Carol, went to the Spirit Shrine, to simply honor them, when they noticed this. It was told in the legends that if they grew dim, the spirits are in the Spirit Realm. It may be for a good reason, it may be for a bad reason. Nobody, except them, know.

The game features:
4 playable characters, and 1 secret.
A huge world to exlpore.
Many dungeons and enemies.
Some minigames to keep the player side-tracked.

I'm HOPING to finish this before school starts.                               If not, I'll put up a demo with everthing I've got at the time.

Unfortunately, I have no screen shots, and the graphics are RTP... except for a few monsters, but I hoping to change that.
I'm open to comments and suggestions for some features or the storyline. (or anything else)

[DragonBlaze]

This alex and coral wouldn't happen to be the rtp ones would they? *cringes*, if your far in the game it may be too late to change their names, but you could always build a new character in the generator (or simply find some) and replace the rtp graphcs with those.

As for the story, anything with 4 whatevers holding great power, and someone is after them is increadably cliche. Again, it may be too late to change that part, but try to find a way around the 'searching' of these spirits if thats what you were planning, or at least get as far away from that as you can.

As for your deadline, unless you can make 30 minutes of gameplay everday from now untill school starts, its not gonna happen. Don't get me wrong, you should keep working on this and all and you should finish it, but even if your already half done, a month is not enough time to finish it. Its better to take your time and make a quality game then get it done as fast as you can and make a poor game.

[blaman]

I have gotten quite far, but it's not too late for me to change the graphics, and it's not 4 objects of intense power, it's four people chosen by the spirit master, to be the spirits of the elements. I work hard on the game when I can, so it's fairly far in progress. I've done it with the OLD version, about 2-3 years old now. (Completed, but  rarely ever played and kinda sucks.)

 I would need some help to change the outfit of the characters a bit. So far, RTP, unfortunatley is what I'm stuck with because I'm not at home, and I can't download.

 Any help would be nice, and I would add anyone to my credits. As for the story, again, I am going to get help with that.

BTW: Carol isn't the RTP witch. She's the Alex's sister in which the graphic, at the moment, is the one beside Alex.

Now, to the CHARACTER PROFILES:

ALEX SWORTIAN
Age: 15

Alex is a young swordsman tought by a famous swordsman. He's been trained by the best for his motive to protect his home town. However, before, he was thought as a fool and was laughed at for such thought.

CAROL SWORTIAN
Age: 14

Carol is a young mage since birth. She, too, was tought by the best. She always was a little annoyance to Alex, but the two make an great team.

SLIK ELFININ
Age:18

Slik, a dark elf, has known Alex for a while now. They've been childhood freinds and he owns a casino. (dates back to an older version of the game "The Spirits within")

WINTARU
Age: 17

Wintaru is the spirit of the element, wind. He was borna spirit, not a normal human. The Spirit Realm has always been his home.
Wintaru is the smartest of the four.

WATELLA
Age: 16

Watella has been emotionally depressed ever since the age of 6 because of the death of her family. Because of this unfortunate loss, the Spirit Master brought her in as the water spirit.

FIRAH
Age: 21

Firah is THE most destructive man known to ever exist. He detroyed everything in his path. Nobody, not even the Spirit Master, knows how he was picked.

TREMORIAN
Age: 19

Tremorian is the spirit of earth. She is always caring for nature.  She was picked because of this.

ETHIS
Age: 25

Ethis  is a very powerful prison gaurd, and is told by Sinai, the spirit messanger. He uses spears.

EILEEN
Age: 18

Eileen is Alex's girlfreind. She met Alex at the age of 9. She uses staffs, like Carol, except she's a preistess.

SINAI
Age: 30

Sinai is the Spirit Gaurdian and Messanger. He has done this for about 20 years and is familiar with the legend.

That's all I got for now. (Wow, that sure was alot of typing.)LOL!