Tales of Draconia

[loftyD]

Hey! After the unsuccessful quadilogy of the KJ series, I've decided to make a new game. I haven't started it yet, but the story is simple!

Quote from my site:

You take the role as Clive,a young boy that lives in Draconia. Folkspeople believe that the Seven Myths of Iwur {Draconian: A Pyramid} are true as 2 years ago the Flying Dragon of Ecliol burnt down a city. Each Myth is in a pyramid which will teleport you to a location. When you meet Professor Ozhai he tells you to solve all seven. If you fail then the Flying Dragon of Ecliol will create havoc upon Draconia.

What do you think?

[Dominicy]

Mmm... You don't explain the story too well, so I guess I'll save my comments until it's out.

[loftyD]

ok... Maybe playing just what I've done so far will do that.

Ignore the RTP ness in it. I'm still making it

http://www.loftyd.net/exe/Tales%20of%20Draconia.zip

[Moosetroop11]

I agree that you explained it awfully.

Also, Hey! I didn't know you lived in Reading!

[loftyD]

lol

a) How can I word it better, I'm crap at writing ideas onto paper.

How about this:

"The land of Draconia is under threat. You must see if the myths of Iwur are true by getting the seven discs of Kyshalshiz in preventing the Flying Dragon of Ecliol from wreaking havoc..."


b) Do you live in Reading?

[Moosetroop11]

Well I think a plot like that needs more lines to explain itself in. Like:

There has long been myths that speak of seven disks of untold power, which have lain dormant over centuries. They also speak of a powerful dragon which will arrive and wreak havok upon the world - a dragon that only the disks can defeat. These stories are often dismissed as fairytales, but when the land of Draconia comes under threat from a giant dragon, the fearful people begin wondering whether there was some truth behind the tale all along.

Determined to protect his homeland, a young hero sets out to find the truth. Along the way he'll meet friends and enemies, and uncover the secret of snow white and the seven disks.

Characters:

Clive
Age: 2
Weapons: swords
Clive is the commander of a large army.

Jeff
Age: 30
Weapons: sarcasm
Jeff is a very old and wise man.

Snow white
Age:
Snow white is a woman. She'll probably end up bonking Clive.


Naw I live in Kent. But I assumed you were american.

[loftyD]

thanks for that. That is so much better than what I could do.
I'm predicted a D/E in English Lang + Lit  GCSE and it's hard

[loftyD]

just like to say. I havent really progressed in Tales of Draconia and its status for now is unfinished ...

But on the bright side, I have my own RPG dedicated to it.

http://www.loftyd.net/rpg {Browser Based}

I am currently developing a new system {based off the one im using atm}. This new system will replace the current rpg game.