Journey of Ages

[Fisherson]

Well it sounds,good.So i say give your best,you can do it!

[Flamehawk27]

I'll just tell the charachter bios, no story or anything, and tellme if it doesn't sound better. Alright, a little story, but just in the bios.

Azrea Erhne:

Age: 22(Suprisingly, he can look 22, but at times look older).
Weapon: Tomes
Class: Mage
Title: Tactition
Azrea is a tactition for King Reyold, and has lived his entire life sheltered in the walls of Castle Reitna. He has no ambition, and is near apathetic,(no emotions). His eyes are those of an older man, and he has seen countless bloodshed. Though he serves as strategist for a peaceful kingdom, many innocents have died because of his plans, though not by his intent. He barely knows how to communicate beyond giving and recieving orders. He leaves Castle Reitna only to protect Leena.

Leena Pharne:

Age:21
Weapon: Bow
Class: Archer
Title: Princess
Leena is a cornerstone in the events that follow the invasion of Pharne. She sees the invasion as a chance to escape the constant cycle of cotillions, dances and parties. She is the rebellious princess of the story, and is not used to taking orders from Azrea, though she reluctantly obeys, knowing her life is in his hands. Her heart longs to just fly awayfrom her worries, but her mind knows it is impossible, so she follows her heart, rather than her common sense, at times. She is the only one who feels sympathetic for the horrible conditions the invaders live in.

Dornel Raist:

Age: 22
Weapon: Sword
Class: Knight
Title: Guardian
Leena's sworn protector, he would dive off the edge of the planet for her, but, only if she asked nicely. He has morals, though few, and Leena finds them scewed at that. The two soon enter a "love-hate" relationship. Dornel is the strongest ally, and he holds the fact over Azrea's head. When Leena is in danger, the duo of Azrea and Dornel is unstoppable.

Innes Valentine:

Age: 19
Weapon: Staff
Class: Healer
Title: Cleric
The only male healer in Pharne, is often teased by knights for doing " a woman's job". The attitude towards women in Pharne is bad, and Innes silently hopes Leena will obtain the throne soon, but only so he won't be ridiculed any more. He is not fond of her, Azrea, or Dornel, though he admires Dornel's power, hoping to someday be stronger than him. His gift in healing is beyond any medic, and he is one of seven-teen in the world who can heal with no medical supplies.

[Flamehawk27]

I think this one is better... More charachters, 22 playable, but these are the most important. Yay 5 pages!

[Fisherson]

I like the new Characters,they look very thoughtout.I would like
to hear your plot soon.22 playable?!Thats alot!Make sure you can pull that off first,man.
Don't just add filler characters whan you do this.Other than that,if you need ideas about
chacters and stuff PM me.

[Flamehawk27]

22 is easy when I've got: charset generator, easily re-colored and modified facesets, but the battlechars will be a headache, but I can handle them. ( Just add tylenol). The plot is basically:

Pharne(my signature country name, in all my games), is at war with the invasive Krona. Hunger, thirst, and fear have driven the Kronan's to invade their peaceful neighbor, and their superior numbers drive the Pharnen's back. Azrea and Leena are in the capitol of Pharne when the Kronan's attack, and Leena seizes her chance to escape from her dreary life. She drags Azrea along with her, as they flee Reitna(the capitol), in search of freedom.
The story follows Azrea, in his quest to find answers. He has, (as posted earlier) lived his entire life sheltered in Reitna, and is very prejudiced against the Kronan's, thinking them barbric, and inferior. Leena is sympathetic towards them, and their two different ideas challenge eachother, leading them into numerous fights, and neither will give in to the other's way of thought.
Azrea and Leena travel at first through Pharne, as Leena soaks up the freedom and joy of her land, until it is captured. King Reyold sinks deeper into depression, thinking his daughter, Leena, was killed by the Kronan's, and refuses to defend his kingdom. Pharne is soon over-run with Kronans, and for her safety, Azrea and Leena flee south, into Krona, the one place the Kronans would not search for her. Leena vows to rescue her country, as Azrea vows to re-discover life. Their goals seem intertwined, and wherever one should go, the other will follow.

[Flamehawk27]

This whole idea slammed me in like, 3 seconds. I HAD to get it out, you know? I stil think it's better, but hey, I can't exactly abandon this one. But Fisherson, yeah, charachter ideas would be very good, i've got like, seven charachters done.

[Flamehawk27]

Actually, I can post the opening scenes, and one battle, as the games prolouge. Ive got the prolouge done, I just fixing typos and such, i'll put that up everyone to compare.

[Flamehawk27]

Heres the opening scenes and one battle. I know the battlechars are bad, but it's my first attemptat spriting ANYTHING.
Here's the link to compare:http://www.megaupload.com/?d=2Q1938EJ

It's a .rar file, so it opens with WinRAR, for those who don't know.

[Felix-0]

nice job flamehawk!

[Fisherson]

The storys good,i like it very original.
Keep it up i'm looking forward to this.

[Flamehawk27]

Yay! It's better than the first one! Yeah, i'm gonna finish Journey of Ages too, but my new focus is on the other one.Thanks guys!

[IceStorm13]

U never showed me that game! =O It looks kewl.

[coreystranick]

Wow topic kick.

[Flamehawk27]

This forum is over. Dont reply.