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Deathreaper
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #60 on:
August 04, 2009, 03:47:40 AM »
So then he went. Dick Gumshow ran fast out of door, but then he forgot his gun and files so he ran back to get them. Dick Gumshoe got his gun and files and dounuts and coffee and ran out to get to his detective car to gather evidence. the statue of limitations would end in 4 days so had to hurry and get evidence. He fund out that his first clu was the mofia because they were involved too and probably tried to rub Richard Gray out
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Darkfox
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #61 on:
August 04, 2009, 04:26:40 AM »
So Dick Gummshoe go to see mofia peeople to talk to them about Richard Gray but wen he get there he get stop by people that were like mobsters with anger eyes and hats and wepons in hands "We hat cops and you look like cop" but Dick Gomshoe was smart but not alot and say "I am not cop, I am donut delivary" and they lok at each other and let him in to place that is where mofia are. "Why you let cop in and..." say boss but he stop and see donuts so Dick Gumshoe gav him soem "Okay, I talk becas I liek donut and cop hav good taste" and Dick Gumshoe ask how Richard Gray were killd and he lok back at guys and guys shrug "I do not no who kill Ricark Gray but mabey he was killd by some body else, mabe he hav enamies he make because he detective and haev many!" say boss and they threwd him out but really. Now Dick Humshoe hav to think of other clus becaus he have not long time to find out but he still confident and have donuts and coffee still.
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_JeT_
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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August 04, 2009, 04:35:23 AM »
Dick Gumsho than think go place where Ricardo Grey was fund dead and he want to investigate for clues to help solve mystery of Richard's death and why or who doned him in. So Detective Gumshoe ate a donut and drank a coffee and drove off to the city harbor on other side of town. Dick Gumshoe drove and gut there and he thought place smells fishy. Dick Gumshoe go to scene of crime, but it cold because investigation been off for awhile due to long time. So Dick Gumshoe had be careful to find what little has left. Dick Gumshoe loked in the trash can and found a note which sad, "531 Door Drive" and Dick Gumshoe thought this was good clue and he got in auto and drove off to 531 door drive and find criminal and avenge Rickard Gray. Dick Gumshoe gut there and find a house, which was on story but still green. He knock on door and an old lady answered door and opened it and was there standing in front of Dick Gumshoe as she in house and he knock.
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Darkfox
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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August 05, 2009, 10:26:47 PM »
"Why you knock on my door then my head?" say the old woman, and Dik Humshoe take off hat and scratch head then put it back on "I am sorry miss, I not see you there, I find clu and it say to come here and now I am here to where the clu had led" said Dick Gumshoe and woman allow him in "What you want to talk officeer?" said old woman "I came here becaus I found clu in trash can on the deth of Richard Gray" said Duck Gumshoe and the old women was statled and hesitatored "I remember crime you speak of, it was bad and herd noise" she said in scar tone. Dick Gumshoe turned fastlike and loked at the woman becas she may know wat happened "Could you tell me wat you know?" said Dick Gymshoe out loud but not too loud and she was scared but not a lot. "Yes, but please do not talk loudly becas I has poor hart! I herd gunshot from gun and saw him die out my window, it was man in cloak and black and hat and he ran away" say old lady, Dick Gumshow was shocked more and now shok fist becas he now having led "Man in black with hat? I hav seen him before but only in shadows and darkness becas he hides identy that way!" yelled Dic Gumshoe and walked fast out door but as he did bump into some body and it was man in black with gun and tried shot Dick Gumshoe but Dick Gumshoe act fast and throw coffee which went splash fast on man and burn him and he drop gun and run away into darknees "That was close, but now I have no cofee and that is too bad" say Dick Gumshoe nervosly becas he nearly get shot with gun that was now on grund and he piced up as evadence.
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_JeT_
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #64 on:
August 06, 2009, 02:45:51 AM »
"This gun almost shot me and now I have it to use as evidence!" said Dick Gumshoe as he place it in poket. I now must go find register for gun and find owner and track down owner and find Rickard Gray's killer and avenge his death before statue of limitation expire and case end with no answer and killer get off free and not face punishment because no crime happen legally. Dick Gumshoe jump on car and drive to precinct and got on computer and searched gun's serial number and see it belong to man who was dress in overcoat and hat and is named Drew Krimnall. "I must track down this bub Krimnall and avenge Richard Gray's death and to avenge me almost get shot by him when in coat and hat and run down alley after I threw coffee at face!" Dick Gumshoe yelled to no one and got stairs from other detectives. Dick Gumshoe ran by Blue Badger who dance with self and he gut into car and drove off down a street.
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Deathreaper
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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November 02, 2009, 02:59:55 AM »
So then he went. Dick Gumshoe had no time to go and drive carefully. it was emergancy so softey was of no concern of Dick Gumshoe. he dodged trucks and trash cans and cars and bikes and food stands in the road. he then saw that there were children playing ball in the middle of the street so he then went faster and then pressed on brake and car did a front flip and he went over children and he was happy and said "that was a close one!" so then he ended up in Krinmalls mansion which had a fountain and statues and gates and said "he is rich from killing! I must find out who he works for and avenge Richard Grey!" so then he ran to the gate and rang the bell
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #66 on:
November 02, 2009, 03:46:18 AM »
When door open tall man stand there with scar on cheeck, he see Gumshoe and say "I know yu are cop but I not do anything becaus I do nothing all day!" but when he say that a grin grewd over his face, Dick Gumshoe nearly turn away but then seed coffee stain and burns "I see you have coffee stain and burn there that is like when I got attack by dark guy who try kill me but not and took gun from for evidence that belong to you so I think you are guy that I now am after and are guilty of murder and now be revenging!" said Gumshoe in lowd voice. Gearing this Krimnat got shocked look on face and start run inside.
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_JeT_
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #67 on:
November 02, 2009, 04:53:45 AM »
Krimnall ran inside and ran up stare. Dick Gumshoe followed and ran inside and ran upstares. As Dick followed Krimnall up stares, he nocked over fish bowl aquarum on stares at gumshoe, and Gumsho puts arm up and blocks it but get wet at same time. Krimnall keep running up stares and then through old clothes lying on steps at Gumshoe but Gumshoe kept follwo, bt with sock on shoulder and rest clothes fell. Krimnall then get up onto second flor and off stares and throw down bookcase at Gumshoe down stares. Gumshoe strong as maybe put arms up and leeped over bookcase which slide down in way. Krimnall rant in bathroom and lock door behind. Gumshoe try knock on door and he try bust at door but no prevale. He hear skid mark outside and run down stares, over clothes fish bowl and bookcase and run out door and see car missing and see car drive off with Krimnall insde. Detectiv Gumshoe then took a bikke from kid and petal after Krimnall in car. Gumshoe follow and keeps up and still follow and corner Criminal in alley, which he drove into. Gumshoe get out bike and Krimnall off of car and Krimnall un up and climb fence but Gumshoe see he still have sock and he roll it into ball and threw sock ball at Krimnall, wich distract him and hit in face make him fall of fence but then he get up and see fire ladder and he climb and get on roof of a. Gumshoe see this but try climb ladder and part brakes so GUmshoe dangling from ladder abov ground and in air some. Gumshoe tihen took gun donut fromhis pocket and ate it and said 'I cannot die here, I must catch Drew Kimball and avege Ricky Gray and save the day!" So he swallow donut and had nurishmence.
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Grandy
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #68 on:
November 04, 2009, 01:09:38 AM »
Gunshoe then traveled far to fufil hes quest to sdo what he must do. Ricky Grey will be avengd!" screamed him toi the top of h8is breath, and then went to do so. He faund Drew in front of his House and said "Drew I found u in front of this house, now you must be avenged Ricky Gray!" and proceded to shot Drew but Brew dodged the bullets and said "Cunshow you are nbot strong enuogh to defeet my mater plan. Come back when youre stronger and ill be waiting for that day of revenge of your friend revenge day"
Gumshoe was sad but then looked up and vowd to do so "I vow to do so" he vowd, and went back to his place to get stronger. he traind for days and days but his stronge didnt get moer so he decided to call for help, he went to the public phone just outsdie his hausde and used his cell to call the one person he called the only person taht coudl train him in before the deadline Drew had said befoer.
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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Reply #69 on:
November 13, 2009, 01:48:40 AM »
Dick Gumshoe get onn phone and call person who is only person taht coudl train him bfore the headline Drew befoer said. He call and person on other end say 'You ar pathetic you foolish folly fool! I com now' and Gumsho wait and wait and wat and wait until he wait sommore and then person who held train came and was and said 'Fool, I be foolsih train fool fools!' and whpped Gumshoe in head and make bleed come out. 'Hey pal you back from book modeliing with Laurece?; and he snicker his. 'Fool I no fool of fool fools!' and he whip Gumshoe agan. 'Well, nice see ya Ms Von karma!'
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Re: The Epic Fanfiction Game
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November 13, 2009, 02:04:14 AM »
*insret tairning montaje her*
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I general I'd say I agree 98% with Grandy's post above.
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