Cry of the Devil

[Lord Sisoro]

SORRY!

This thread can be locked or something cause I erased this game, it made a huge mess...

I ma gonna see if RPG Maker XP will work on my comp. If not I will just stick with RM2K3... Sorry....

[Bluhman]

Macko? Like the reactor sort of? Fargoth, like that annoying woodelf dude in Elder Scrolls III?

Well, I suppose the story is.... Decent. I don't know if I'd start trying to fight against what I supposedly see as only a dream. Really, I think there should be some minor event in his life that hints that his dreams are true, like in his dream, he might notice how the devil looks, and when he wakes up, he'll notice how... I don't know, maybe how gargoyles on a church look similar to him when he wakes up.

Just a thought. I think it'd be a nice little touch to the storyline.

EDIT: GOD FUCK, I CAN'T FUCKING READ.

Ahem. Excuse me.

So, yeah. Your story is just fine. Not the best I've heard, but it'll work just fine. Still, I'm noticing a few names that I recognize, especially Fargoth. Heh.

[Moosetroop11]

No, what he means is that he had the dream, then it actually happened, then he set out to fight the devil. Maybe he feels responsible for not warning people?

[Vidian]

I think I've read this before...


Oh yeah,
It's been copied and pasted over and over again, Ever since this Forum topic started.

[Vidian]

Originally posted by lucas_irineu
you must improve the story.

I agree  

[DragonBlaze]

Yaeh, the story is very cliche. Standard good vs evil plot, theres nothing that makes this game stand out or be special.

[Lord Sisoro]

Well I have changed something, well actually a whole lot. I changed th ewhole story, and I hve added the choice of being holy or evil. Each character will each have a set of different skills and story. So.. yea...

I can't make my mind, first i chose this, then change the name, and change this... blah blah freakin blah...