~Chaos Generations~

[Sion Suncrest]

Yeah, One of the guys helping witht he game pointed out the grammar issues, I didnt even check. I was in such a hurry to throw it all together. Well voices are voices, theres not much I can really tell you.

So the plan for next time, is proofreading.
Everything else I geuss falls in the opinion category, in which at this point I'm not concerned.


@Dinkler: I found the facesets off a japanese Rpgmaker site a long time ago. I couldnt tell you...

[Sion Suncrest]

Here are some of the other characters. I have yet to even create all of the characters able to join you.
But this is what I have thus far.  
Some can join your party. Others cant, You should be able to tell which characters cant.
( *cough* Chumi, Kaiza *cough*)


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Hazel
Age:16
Class: Redfang Mage
Likes:Alex
Hates: Seeo

Hazel had always been by Alexander's side, having strong feelings for him. Feelings she usually calls love. Alexander doesnt have any problem with Hazel expressing herself but he gets upset when it causes the team to slow down. Alex, always being a loner usually encourages Hazel to try harder. However when Seeo joined the party, and eventually leads it. Hazel's anger begins to erupt. She has a pretty short temper, which seems to counter her love for Alexander on a balanced level. However, when it boils down to raw elemental spells. Hazel is your girl.



Ken
Age: 13
Class: Swordsman
Likes: Learning new skills
Hates:Losing

Ken is a just starting swordsman from the village of Kimel. Hes been practicing for months trying to hone his skills, to go out and fight in the war, He wants a purpose. Seeo sees alot of himself in Ken, and allows him to join the Sirdeka Knights to live up to his name. Kens parents died in the war. And the monsters are his true enemies. He also lost his Sister Jelta, when he was very young and was torn away from his family. His true goal is vengance and he'll do whatever it takes to win. Ken is young, however his swordsman and party improvement skills make him useful when trying to get the upperhand on harder enemies.



Garret
Age:19
Class: Gunner
Likes: Women
Hates:Walking

Garret meets the Sirdeka Knights a few times before joining. Riding his horse.
Garret likes to spy on people, and pop up out of nowhere to surprise people to boost what little of a personality he has. Known to peek at women any time he gets. Most of the girls in the party give him bad remarks. Once Falice comes into the fray, Garret begins to invest all his time in impressing her. However in the end, Falice decides to upgrade his weaponry in return for him leaving her alone. When will Garret live up to his true potential?



Nergal
Age:20
Class:Archmage
Likesrotecting Cheska
Hates: Being alone

Nergal was always a loner. Hes kept a lid on his past, and traveled many years until he met a boy named Cheska who only spoke of revealing his past. Intrested, Nergal treated him to a night at an inn he stayed at. On their way to the Rosebead Inn, a murder incident takes place. Together Cheska and Nergal take out the killers. Nergal is quiet sometimes, but is very wise, and is also taking it upon himself to study the Originta. Along with his magic Nergal uses two Scythes. Fighting with Cheska is the best opporitunity hes had. He's up against Seeo, but for some reason Nergal cant fight him back...




Rukeon
Age:24
Class: Dark Knight
Likes: Being Away
Hates: The RedFang

Rukeon is a legend in the Chaos Kingdom. He was born fighting,
and ended up turning to the Darkness, honing his dark skills. Rukeon began to stay away from civilization to travel the world and go wherever the stars took him. However now the stars point in one boys direction. But is the Legendary Rukeon a freind or foe? Ever since his birth, he's had hatred for the Redfang warriors. But why? And what old business does he have in store for them?



Rema
Age: 20
Class: Blue Mage
Likes: Being Normal
Hates: Her curse

Rema, has the unique skill of absorbing the skills of monsters she comes by. This skill is very special and could aid evil doers anywhere. So in fear of her falling in the wrong hands, her father brought her to Leafa, where she became a tour guide for the residents at Leafa Tower. Although she couldnt keep her skills secret for long. Once monsters tried their hand at attacking the city. Once Rema was exposed during the vicious battle, she had to start a new life, and use her skills either for the better of mankind or the bad.
 



Remiel
Age:68
Class: Swordsman
Likes: Solitude
Hates: Wars

Once an S class Sirdeka Knight, Remiel has incredible talents that he uses to his prevail. Now trying to live a normal life, he passes his skills on to Seeo, Somthing his son could never do becuase of his death.
Seeo being in Sid's Division there was no telling how much strength he would need in thoes front lines. Although he and Seeo's Mother were seperated from Seeo after the attack. Maybe an old knight will return to battle, for Chaos' Sake. He keeps a lid on his son's past.


 
Sanders
Age:22
Class: Gunner
Likes: Science
Hates:Flaws

Sanders is an Engineer who works at Leafa Tower. Head of weapon developement Sanders is steadily trying to increase the power of Chaos' Weapons. Yet, he'll soon find that guns and runes arent enough to stop the Datalion Kingdom. Once Seeo explains about the Data's goals, Sanders becomes a believer and joins Seeo to further inspect the Data kingdoms strength.


 
Falice
Age: 34
Class: Plasma Gunner.
Likes: Data's Weapons
Hates: Primitiveness

Falice at first glance is a direct enemy to Seeo's cause. But, He will need her help in the end. Falice is an immigrant from Datalion who came before the war started to visit Leafa Tower. Once it began, however. Falice was not able to return to Datalion. For it could give away their plan, as time passed and she saw the death going around she decided to aid the kingdom. This information is leaked to Seeo after encountering this woman several times on mysterious occasions.



Jelta
Age:16
Class: Swordsman
Likes: Boys
Hates: Anthrotites

The Anthrotites are simply monsters with greater and higher humanic capabilities. Jelta lost her parents and was seperated from her brother in the war. She had been training before this incident but now fights even harder. Not to participate in the war, But to find her younger brother Ken.



Kaiza Briune
Age: 34 ( at death)
Class: Flame Originta
Likes: Family
Hates: Vespuleth

Kaiza was Seeo's father. He was killed when Seeo was 2 years old. At the hands of an Originta who almost caused the end of the world. 15 years ago, An evil Originta named Vespuleth killed and fused His Originta powers with the Wind Originta to become the most powerful fighting force in the world. Kaiza fought him multiple times but failed each time. His final attempt was to take his life to use the Incredible Originta power to its maximum. Before his death he asked Chumi to hand the Originta power to his sons. Chumi could only grant this to one of his sons. So Kaiza chose his second born Seeo. With that Kaiza saved the world, And left Seeo with his mother. During the game Kaizas fate is reflected multiple times. This is influenced on Seeos part. However, soon after Kaiza's death His first son dissapears...
 



Chumi
Age: 2043
Class: Mana Messenger
Likes: Life
Hates: Vespuleth

Chumi is a Mana Messenger who was chosen by the ancients to choose the Originta who could hold the power of the elements. When the world was in peril, One of these Origintas chosen was Kaiza. And because of his commitment and his kindness. Chumi granted his request to allow his son to become the next Originta. Chumi triggers Seeo's memory loss. And is the one who tells Seeo about his destiny, to finish what Kaiza could not finish. And to team up with the most unexpected person he'd ever think of to be a Originta... Chumi plays a keyrole in Seeo's Quest.


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I also bring you the second battle song created by Reone known as In our Burning Hearts, He really impressed me with this one. I dont know where he gets his ideas!

 015- In Our Burning Hearts

[ZeroKirbyX]

Remiel sonds like Drachma from SoA to me.

[Sion Suncrest]

Oh really? Never heard of it....

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by Sion Suncrest
Jelta
Age:16
Class: Swordsman
Likes: Boys
Hates: Anthrotites

Bout time we had a game with a homosexual.

[Linkforce]

Wow Meiscool, that was anal.  


Anyways, this game looks promising.  I personally like the voices.  Anyways, keep it up man.  Looking forward to a demo whenevr.  

[Sion Suncrest]

@Meiscool: Your last post has to be the most ridiculous remark I've seen on this forum, And thats pretty bad. I dont understand why your increasing my topics post count to make yourself look retarted... I just cant find any reasonable explaination for that.
  You have to have sense to some degree to give constructive critiscism. I laugh at this, not because your post was funny. But just because you went through the character list and just....
  Excuse me If I'm being rude, I've just been dealing with a few more assholes than I'd like today. And I come here and this cuts the cake... I cant say anything else, because I'm afraid I'm going to lose it, please just have some form of decorum from now on...

Oh and, thanks Linkforce, I appreciate it.

[ZeroKirbyX]

He does have a point. Swordsman implies the being having male genitalia. Liking boys when one has male genitalia translates bluntly to homosexual. So, he could be right. But of course you refer to the character as "she" so one could believe we are dealing with hermaphrodite. That'd be a first for an rpg most definately.

[Linkforce]

Wow....c'mon guys.  He obviously made a grammar mistake.  Stop getting so damn technical.

[Sion Suncrest]

Oh I didnt know there was such a thing known as "Swordsgirl" or "Swordswoman", I didnt make a grammar mistake. And Zerokirby thats really gross....

Thanks for the comments Clockworkroutine.

[Noobpwner]

Originally posted by ZeroKirbyX
hermaphrodite

NO way ZERO KIRBY CMON WE ALL NO YOUR SECRET.
well any way this game is sounding realy good and I like it so I think that you should just tell Miescool that you dont want her/his (hermaphrodite LMAO)  Input in this thats what i would do.

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by clockworkroutine
It doesn't even matter, nobody says swordswoman.

I say it all the time, so that people don't get mixed up with MEN. The only thing I never used woman/man with is Marksman, and that's because Markswoman just sounds crappy.

However, if he wrote: Swordsmenship, then that would be different, because in that case, men pertains to all humans, but Swordsman pertains just to males, because Swordswoman is also a word, and they wouldn't have the word Swordswoman if Swordsman ment both genders.

ZKX: XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sion: Dear God, it's the internet, lighten up.

Clocky again: it's qUOte. Just trying to be helpful so that another grammer mistake isn't made ever again

[coasterkrazy]

Off-topic: Well Meiscool, I just have a question. Weren't you kind of contradicting yourself saying "lighten up it's the internet" after giving that whole explanation about the man/woman thing? There are some things I can't help but point out, sorry. :p

On-topic: Well I can at least tell Jelta is supposed to be a girl. Character bios look ok, though I'm too lazy to read through all of them. I really can't say that much else about the game yet. Good luck!

[ZeroKirbyX]

Originally posted by Noobpwner

quote:

Originally posted by ZeroKirbyX hermaphrodite

NO way ZERO KIRBY CMON WE ALL NO YOUR SECRET.

GASP! How did you find out about my funny shaped potato chip collection!?

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by coasterkrazy
Off-topic: Well Meiscool, I just have a question. Weren't you kind of contradicting yourself saying "lighten up it's the internet" after giving that whole explanation about the man/woman thing? There are some things I can't help but point out, sorry. :p

On-topic: Well I can at least tell Jelta is supposed to be a girl. Character bios look ok, though I'm too lazy to read through all of them. I really can't say that much else about the game yet. Good luck!

ZOMG!!!!!!!

Off-topic: Well Ck, I just have an answer. I wasn't contradicting myself when I said, "lighten up, it's the internet" after explaining the whole man/woman thing. Thankyou for pointing that out, but it seems that Sion takes the internet so seriously that he thought I couldn't use the simple logic that everyone else uses to see the grammar error, and couldn't put 2 and 2 together to see that I was making a joke or mild "crack". Because people took it so seriously, I then changed the attitude from it's original intent to clearify to people that what I said was not only a joke, but it's also politically correct. There are some things I can't help but make clearify, sorry. :p

On-topic: Quit your whining peoples, I know it's a girl, not an it, or a both, or a guy. Well I can tell Jelta is supposed to be a girl, because I have eyes and can read!. Character bios look ok, though I'm too lazy to read through all of them, and will probally never care enough to read through em. I really can't say that much else about the game yet, except that it has bad grammar so far. Good luck, and if you're having issues translating your original language into our language, use a free translator off the internet, but make sure to not take what they say to seriously, because if you click one of those popups, you won't get nothing free, even though it says it's free.