My game (Final Hope)

[jes-fest]

Story(It's not very good so bear with me):
It starts off with The villian casting a spell to change the timeline of the villages to prehistoric(sp) times, but backfires. Instead, each village get transfered to different time periods and such. After a small intro scene (will grow larger in the future) you're man character tells you to get some rest. You don't have to right away, so take your time. Once you set you character to bed, however, Your character gets awakened by an earthquake.

 Thats all I can put right now, exept that I have rtp chars but dont worry Im going to take them out very soon: I am currently developing them.


Oh and I have a few Pics on my site ( www.freewebs.com/jescomics ) but I will give you one on this site  

[drenrin2120]

Well, the screens arent' bad... could definitely use some work and proper use of the chipsets. If you're gonna use RTP, atleast use it right. The story actually sounds interesting. It just needs some salt and maybe a little spice. :p

What I mean is, motivation, what's the Main villian's Motivation, and if the maine hero is gonna do anything, please don't let it be because of revenge.

Other than that, not bad for a first post, goodluck.

[DragonBlaze]

I actually kind of like the idea of towns being sent to differant eras or whatever in time. Its kinda unique, but it could turn out to be really bad if you don't work with it right.

I'll be honest, that map sucks. You don't even have tops for the pilars the soldiers are standing in front of, the map is really empty, and its kinda just blah..

So yeah good luck. I'm glad to hear that you'll be switching from rtp charsets, but I suggest doing that asap. Trust me, its harder to do as you get further in the game.

[Meiscool-2]

Maps really stink.

I like the plot, it's not very well constructed by the sound of things, but it's more original that you normally see on here.

[jes-fest]

Yes i suppose my maps need a lot more work, So I will try to get that done soon. I also can't choose between the rtp sized battle chars and the sprite sized ones   . but I am going to fix it up
The villain? um, well he tries to send them all into an era(I believe I said b4) and makes a mistake in saying the words. war eventually breaks out and the main character joins the army. After the first victory however, he realizes that these are just normal people, just as confused as everyone, so he quits and tries to get to the bottom of this.

Some of the feature will include:
-clothes and hairstyle changes to your perferred style
-party member changers
-complete custom fighting stances(ex main char can change to a street fighting style and so fourth by visiting the dojos)
-multiple endings(maybe)
-voice overs(big maybe)

Thats all I can think of at this moment. I will post when I make the maps look better or something.

[Desimodontidae]

Hmm... the time travel part makes me feel like it's DW 7-based... even thought it's not that related at all. But anyways, story and maps need work, but it can be hammered out into a good project.