Oceans bunch of stuff

[Oceans Dream]

A sprite


A colored drawing of the previous sprite


A combination of Tifa and Lulu, just for fun


Summoned beasts for my current project. I think they're 4 colors each, excluding black.


Sakaki tall sprite


Vivian Pixel portrait. I don't remember the color count for this, I think it's around 10.


Sabrina from Island Sky


A remade version of an old drawing of mine.

[Grandy]

 Really cool. You've got talent, you know? The only flaw I see is that the summoned hand has... weird fingers, like as if it was broken.

[Desimodontidae]

I'd say you're better with pixel art than actual pencil and paper... its just... on the larger works, the edges look out of place. They take away a lot from the overall image. Also, the bodies look slightly disproportional. Very slightly. To me anyways.

[SaiKar]

Hey, this is nice. I like your style.

[Oceans Dream]

Thanks for the comments.

Yeah, I'm still trying to work on proportions. It's not perfect, but I've improved a lot from like a few years ago. I get that comment a lot about my pixel art being stronger than the drawings, I'll still work on them both as I would still like to improve.

[Moosetroop11]

I agree with Desi. Some of the sprites are fantastic. The drawing is pretty good too but you need to work on the heads, the faces look a bit odd sometimes.

[oooog]

I liked the Sakaki one, particularly because I loved Azumanga.

You do have potential, keep at it.

[Meiscool-2]

Your last art picture is amazing. I really like that. Everything looks perfect.

Most of the smaller sprites are good too, but the larger ones could use some work. The Sakaki one has some issues with the legs. They kinda stagger oddly with the three pixels down/one over, then two pixels down/one over, ect. The hand could also use more shading with colors. Using a small ammount of colors is great, but for larger projects, don't be afraid to use a few more.

[Archem]

Mebe it's just me, but all the women look just a little... Wide. They're great, but... Wide. Just a little.

[Bluhman]

I don't really agree with Archem. The bodies look okay. The heads are too wide, that's true, but the bodies seem fine.

To your credit, they're much better than anything I can do.

[Moosetroop11]

Originally posted by Archem2
Mebe it's just me, but all the women look just a little... Wide. They're great, but... Wide. Just a little.

Anorexia? More like anor-sexy-a!

[Ben]

The bodies arent wide, I dont think....I think the curves could stand to be a bit exxagerated though. The body proportions are almost bang on for a anatomical reference, but in Manga you have to exagerate proportions.

But not with your boobs. The boobs are big enough.

The work is really nice. Its nice to see other artists here. Nice nice nice.

Do you ever work with a tablet?
Some of the pixel works have very hand-drawn looking lines..if those lines were made with a mouse, Id love to see you work with a tablet.

Keep it up. Very nice.

[Dominicy]

everything looks really good except the heads and the shoulders.  the shoulders' bends look to soft, and just alittle bit wider shoulders would help, and the head's look alittle small.  eh, its just my opinion.

I notice its very similar to how I draw, alittle creepy actually. o,o

[coreystranick]

Very nice.
I don't agree with Dominicy though, the shoulders look fine for the way you draw. But I can see how in some drawings they could stand to be a tad wider not too wide since girls typically don't have wide shoulders.

[Oceans Dream]

@Meiscool: I haven't worked with a large sprite like the Sakaki one before. I see what you're saying, if I get around to making another large sprite like that, I'll take that into account.

@Archem2: The women don't seem wide to me. Also, I don't like it when girls are too skinny.

@gemini: I was thinking of first getting down the normal human proportions before going and play around with exaggerating them. I'll get to that, though, as the next few drawings I want to do are in a style that doesn't use normal human proportions. I'm too poor for a tablet... ;_;

I don't really put much thought into doing the shoulders, maybe I should.

Thanks for all the comments. I'll take them into account for future drawings. Well, here's some more stuffs.

A sprite of Angela (from Island Sky)


A small beach landscape


A sprite of Sabrina from Island Sky