Wings of Sorrow (Nuke & Choco)

[sdm42393]

Continued from forum Nuke & Choco

Okay, me and my friend Alex decided to work on this game together so we were talking about the plot of the game Wings of Sorrow (previously entitled 'Nuke & Choco'). We finially have a plot and characters and etc.

PLOT
     A group of people (called the Arbenders) are trying to spready their religion (Areism). Most people are into another religion (no name yet, they worship the land). The Arbenders will do anything so people would convert, and anyone who doesn't would be killed on the spot. The Arbenders consists of several main members and have many minions to do their bidding. The leader of the group is the protagonist's brother.

MAIN CHARACTERS
Name: Eiutah (previously named Nuke)
Age: Around 15-18 (not sure yet)
Gender: Male
Class: (Black) Mage
Element: Light
Bio: He is one who is quiet and usually to himself. He has been through many hardships in his life, including the early death of his parents. He is fixated on killing his brother (leader of the Arbenders), yet his friend Ichi is not aware of their relation.

Name: Ichi (previosuly named Choco)
Age: Dunno yet (probly a bit younger than Eiutah).
Gender: Male
Class: Choco Knight (might change the name)
Element: Light
Bio: Ichi is a young chocobo who's very good friends with Eiutah. They are rarely seen seperated. He is an (somewhat) obnoxious, easygoing chocobo who is fun to be around. Although he knows little of Eiutah's past, he knows that he has been through many hardships.

That's most of the stuff we came up with, so... whaddia think?

 - Steve  

[Vidian]

the plot sounds like Scientology...
They aren't killing people who don't join them....yet.

Well anywayzz
Sounds like a pretty good plot so far

Wait... does that say Chocobo?....
Ewww, Is this a FF knock off?

[Phayre]

Airbender? Sounds like that wretched fake anime, Avatar! ACK! *ducks*
Oh.... um..... I mean............ sounds good. Name changes, though. Unless it IS an FF kockoff, in which case forget I ever said anythign positive of it. *naturally suspicious of knockoffs and will say nothing nice of them until given cause*

[Meiscool-2]

You should probally consider making up different job names.

Arcane Chanter, Dark Magus, Erementar, or something similar could easily replace Black Mage.

[sdm42393]

Originally posted by Meiscool
You should probally consider making up different job names.

Arcane Chanter, Dark Magus, Erementar, or something similar could easily replace Black Mage.

I was planning on chnaging the names of some things, I just haven't got around to it yet.

[sdm42393]

Originally posted by Vidian
the plot sounds like Scientology...
They aren't killing people who don't join them....yet.

Well anywayzz
Sounds like a pretty good plot so far

Wait... does that say Chocobo?....
Ewww, Is this a FF knock off?

To a certain extent... yes, but in most reality no. I'm just using the idea of black mages and a chocobo... I'm hoping i could make creative names replacing "Black Mage" and "Chocobo".

[SaiKar]

So it's a game about trying to get people to convert to a religion and killing them if they refuse? Mmm, nothing like the murder of the innocent in the morning.

Seems a little too dark and evil for my tastes.

[sdm42393]

Um... I decided to make Ichi be an elf, not a chocobo. I wasn't trying to make an FF knock-off but by introducing a chocobo, it spells out Final Fantasy.

And Eiutah (the black mage), i decided to call him a Magus or just plainly Mage (most likely Magus). -_-

[sdm42393]

Originally posted by lucas_irineu
hey... before posting a game thread, try to finish some stuffs.
3 Things to do before posting:
1- Create the characters. And dont keep changing their names and stories.
2- Start making the game. The intro, or maybe just the first map
3- There are only 2 things.
EDIT: (AND WHY THE ELEMENT OF THE FIRST CHAR IS LIGHT IF HE IS A BLACKMAGE???

I'll keep that in mind in the future... and with the Magus (black mage) thing.... why would Square Enix let you be a Black Mage if you're the LIGHT Warriors (just as an example... )...