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Offline Uberpwn_w00t

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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Now with 50% more spoilers!
« Reply #60 on: August 22, 2008, 10:36:40 PM »
Quote from: Uberpwn_w00t on August 22, 2008, 12:41:00 AM
Cool.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #61 on: August 22, 2008, 10:42:07 PM »
I like panel 5
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #62 on: August 22, 2008, 10:47:14 PM »
I smell Buckley.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #63 on: August 22, 2008, 11:28:43 PM »
The text is a bit fuzzy... Maybe not bold enough.

Other than that, looks good.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #64 on: August 22, 2008, 11:35:19 PM »
I agree with Mt11.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #65 on: August 23, 2008, 01:41:37 AM »
Use a more comic-appropriate font, and something a little bolder. Try practicing multi-bubble word format, since one big bubble can lead to a wall of text, breaking the panel borders (like in image 5-6), and obscuring the drawings. Not digging the title, but that's none of my business anyways. And do more actions in the comic, since I was sure his right arm was lame up until panel 5.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #66 on: August 23, 2008, 11:47:24 AM »
... I also just realised I forgot his shoulders on frame 5. >.>
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #67 on: August 23, 2008, 03:15:58 PM »
It looks a lot like Ctrl-Alt-Del.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #68 on: August 23, 2008, 03:21:23 PM »
Quote from: ZeroKirbyX on August 23, 2008, 03:15:58 PM
It looks a lot like Ctrl-Alt-Del.

I don't see it. :/
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #69 on: August 23, 2008, 03:52:59 PM »
Quote from: X_marks_the_ed on August 23, 2008, 03:21:23 PM
I don't see it. :/



Really?
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #70 on: August 23, 2008, 04:08:54 PM »
Quote from: ZeroKirbyX on August 23, 2008, 03:52:59 PM


Really?

They both slump and have brown hair?

Are you implying something?
« Last Edit: August 23, 2008, 04:15:24 PM by X_marks_the_ed »
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #71 on: August 23, 2008, 04:16:55 PM »
...The style is verrrrrrrrrry similar.
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #72 on: August 23, 2008, 05:07:03 PM »
Quote from: ZeroKirbyX on August 23, 2008, 04:16:55 PM
...The style is verrrrrrrrrry similar.

As long as you aren't claiming I'm mimicking them. :/
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #73 on: August 23, 2008, 05:19:12 PM »
I am. I don't care, it just seems too obvious :/
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Re: Ed's general creative arts thread - Webcomic Bandwagon GET
« Reply #74 on: August 23, 2008, 05:52:43 PM »
The boys' got a point! You're too comparable to the worst web comic in existence! Fix it!
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