Desolation - The Last Mage

[ThexXtremeXx]

Thank you, new pic up of Marzui City/ your home;

[Rahl]

I like the system graphics.

[ThexXtremeXx]

Thanks Rahl,

STORY UPDATE:

Four men rode the nights silently across the lands whispering chants amongst the orb of lament(a relic known to posses powers),
their eyes glowed red to those watching their stride. The men reached the king's kingdom of Dartmouth and wreaked
havoc in their wake. The kingdom fell while a new rule began. The lives of many would be claimed, but in the process
saved. The people believe in a man these days, that man; is you.

[ThexXtremeXx]

The mage looks like a perv...

[fruckert]

I'm not too fond of that zoom in.
It almost looks like just a blob of pixels.
Everything else looks nice, though (not talking about the title screen, just the overall game)

[ThexXtremeXx]

I'll wait for a few more opinions before i change it.

though what would you recommend?

[fruckert]

Hmm...I'm not really coming up with much, honestly.
Maybe you should try just the clouds and the title words?

[ThexXtremeXx]

ok, lets see...

[fruckert]

I was thinking the words more being in the top/middle.
But whatever, it's your game, do what you want.

[HobomasterXXX]

That DEMO frame is really unnessecary.

[zuhane]

Seems to have an eery atmosphere freom what I can gather from the 2 screenies.

That's good. I'm sick of games where you just go in castles and overworlds and stuff, they
lack any form of atmosphere. I like it where you travel around, get stranded, go to weird
places.

Anyway, nice mapping!

[Rahl]

The mage looks like a perv...

I liked this one better.

[ThexXtremeXx]

That DEMO frame is really unnessecary.

I needed a frame so that cropping the screenshots would be easier.
It wont be there in the actual demo of the game.

[fruckert]

I needed a frame so that cropping the screenshots would be easier.
It wont be there in the actual demo of the game.

That's actually a fairly nice plan. Although the 'DEMO' word part is still kind of unnecessary.

[ThexXtremeXx]

I probably should start working on this again.