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Ellie: I had a slice of ham in my hand. I was going to drop it, so I slapped it hard. It attached itself to the wall
I think you emphasized his neck muscles a little too much, they're kind of scary.Other than that it looks...MSPaint.As you said, your art could use a little work.
NES games can only have 4 colors on each sprite. You have more colors, yet you cant even see them. Bring your contrast up.
You look like my grandmother.edit: when she was young. You don't look like you're 80.
Last night I had a dream that Zerlina and I were pirates. It was... beautiful.
It's not bad. You could use more shading, though. Also, the hair seems to be squashing the scalp rather than sitting on top of it. When you draw your hair, draw the head first, and then the hair (leaving a bit of room for the volume). Have you tried drawing it first by hand, and then tracing it in paint?
It makes it a lot easier. Think of how much more control you have over your free hand, than over a mouse.