Kingdom Shadow

[Big_Duke]

Story:For 10,000 years the great evil Du'kani(A fencer) has remained silent,and sealed from the pure Younmanadi(A samurai) in the Tainted Reality. But,now the untainted,but unpure reality has dangers amung it like never before. The pure Reality has guarded the Neutral reality from the greater danger,but it has been distracted,letting free all evil into the Neutral Reality. A group of friends must defeat Du'kani,remove the distraction,travelling between 4 realities(Good,Evil,Neutral,*Hidden*)
There is a lot of Back and forth action throughout the game. The game begins as Zach gets up,and starts the day,meanwhile it shows Du'kani breaking the seal,it also starts with Jacob and Zach
practicing,and Du'kani escaping. Jacob and Zach are friends. There
is a fight scene between friends,biblical Referances,Hitchhiker's
Guide Referances,and much more.
That's all I'm gonna tell.

Features:
Record-Tape save system
Custom Weapon/item/stat Icons
Steal Command
Map;Towel of Babel
Tutorial
Limit Command
Hidden Reality
Mini-games




Characters:
Jacob:
The Leader and barbarian fighter of the group(Stays in party WHOLE GAME)

Eon:
The reinforcement and thief of the group

Fallon:
The Ninja of the group

Zach:
The Planner and mage of the group(Stays in party WHOLE GAME)

Trevor:
The monk of the group

Cody:
The samurai of the group(Stays most of game)

Tyler:
The soldier of the group(Stays most of game)

[RPG LORD]

I don't get it.

[Big_Duke]

The links would not work,but now they do.

[Ruler of the Dark]

1. You can't show pictures FROM YOUR COMPUTER!

2.If you want that pure samurai guy's name to sound japanese, either get rid of the S at the end, or add a vowel after it.  And cody doesn't so japanese, partly cause the syllable 'di' isn't used in native japanese.

3.Those features don't seem uh.... featuresy

4.Just some prologue and the stuff pretty much saying "some people will save the world(s)!" seems sparse.  Maybe tell us what happens in the game?

[Big_Duke]

It's a mixed Universe,samurai exist because they were trained that way,how about Cody's not actually a samurai
and Fallon's not a ninja
and Trevor's not a monk.
They just know the ways of them.

And Youmanasa is now Younmanasu

[Ruler of the Dark]

I wasn't questioning the existence of samurai, only pointing out that Youmanas doesn't sound Japanese.  They don't speak like that.  Youmana or Youmanasu would be the closest things to Japanese.  I'm not complaining, nor trying to put you down, just trying to help make the name be a bit more effective.  Feel free to ignore that my suggestions though.

As long as you finish the game, any game could be good.  There are many people who use rm2k(3), but few actually finish a game.  Usually due to short attention span, lack of motivation, or something causes them to not make games at all ('retiring' as a gamemaker or actually having a life seem to be good reasons).



Long story short: Change Youmanas' name slightly to make it more samurai-ish, and any game can be a great success as long as you actually make it

[Big_Duke]

Here screen shots.

[Ruler of the Dark]

I have nothing against RTP as a whole.  I just don't use it's chipsets, systems, etc... because I don't like their style.  But still, it's okay to use in one's game.  The only thing is that the charsets, facesets, and battlecharsets (if used) limit you to only those characters.  You can't express your creativity as much as with a custom charset persay.

Anyways, if you really want the RTP chipset to pass on this one, you should put a little bit more time in making the maps look good.  Numerous tutuorials (ex. Meiscool's tutorial) can help you with this.  Currently, that map seems really bad.  Remember though, just because a game is humourous, doesn't mean it has to look terrible.

[Lee_Dragoon]

It sounds cool, when is a demo comming out?

Ps. I could help you with some costom sprites.

[Big_Duke]

Not soon.
No thank you.