Birth of the Phoenix REVISED

[BlackIceAdept]

Okay story is kinda wierd right now but I'll fix it later...

The rain is falling on a dark city, a small goblin walks out of a alley and looks back on the poor human he just mugs and starts to wistle and walk away. He does really care about the humans of this city and sees them all as potental targets for his next payday. But while he walks on he bumps into a girl selling tickets to a play. A small stroke of kindness hits him and he helps her up, and asks what the hell a girl like her is doing in the slums of a city. She quickly answers him and runs off droping a ticket, our hero picks it up and walks off.
The goblin goes to the play only to be interupted by a false act and witnesses the play being torn apart and notices that the ticket lady is being held prisoner; and with out a second thought the goblin rushes up to the stage to save her...
(Thats about all I got for story)

Onto the heroes of my story,

Lucifer (Yeah hes still kicking in my head)

Race: Goblin
Age: 18 (Goblins only live like 50 years)
Class: Rogue
Elemental Affinity: Shadow
BIO: Lucifer like most goblins was mistreated by larger beings so now he is a ruthless killer and thief, but theres room for change being that he is only so from lack of choice or so he thinks.

Alisha

Race: Half-Elf
Age: 49 (Half-Elves have their elven parents longevity so their max age is well over 200)
Class: Knight (Yay for girl power)
Elemental Affinity: Arcane
BIO: Alisha is a simple girl from the slums, very sweet in nature she typically goes out of her way to help others in ways such as giving them tickets to giving up her prized possisions to help them out in a tight spot...Will this be too much of a hassle or will she one day learn that sometimes you gotta be a little stingy to live in this messed up world?

Alex

Race: Human
Age: 47
Class: Magus
Elemental Affinity: Air
BIO: A master librarian who has learned through his scholory studies most of the vast world. Alex is a little cocky though from his knowledge and will do anything to learn what he doesn't already know. Most will find him arrogent from his persona but underneath he's an alright guy.

Mist

Race: Human
Age: 28
Class: Blademaster
Elemental Affinity: None
BIO: A trainee that beat her master, Mist is now a wandering sword for hire. She is a ruthless warrior however and will almost never go against her orders.

The Twins Regol and Tenal


Race: Half-Elf
Age: 56
Classes: Paladin of Flame and Paladin of Ice
Elemental Affinity: Fire and Ice
BIO: Regol with the red hair and Tegal with the blue hair are both holymen of the Blue Phoenix, the supposed god of the world. They are in many ways a great duo when they combine to use they're Fire/Ice spells. Both are now wanders trying to convert the world to their religion, but they also are starting to get curious of why their god demands one sacrifice each year...

Okay now for some good screens (2 Currently)

Lucifer and Alisha in a test battle.


Title Image

Well this time I'm not gonna let it die so have fun checking it out.

[Beck Skyler]

Hrmm....not many people use non-human types as main characters. unique it is being
I think you should change his name from lucifer. But then again its your game.

[Linkforce]

Hmm...this looks real good.  Very interesting and fresh.  Keep it up.  I'm behind ya all the way.  ^^

[DragonBlaze]

Well your screens didn't do a whole lot, a title screen and a 'test' battle doesn't really show us you games.

Thats besides the point though. This sounds like a good idea. I agree that naming the main character after the devil is kinda iffy, but it may work out.

Yeah, having a non-human for the main character can be pretty cool, and personally I like it.

[BlackIceAdept]

*sigh* Lucifer isn't a name given to the devil first, it was orginally a hebrew name meaning glint of light or morning star. Its just from poor translations and the royal famillies that "Lucifer" became to mean devil or "falling/fallen star". And I know the screens are a little iffy but I'm working on it...

[Meiscool-2]

ya, but people don't know that luci is actually the wind god, not the devil, and it's actually this, and it's actually that, and it's: I don't care. It's over used, and to famous, hence, no matter the origin, it should be changed for originality perposes.

I like the recolors of the rudra characters. Mist (I forget her name in the game) looks a lot better green then pink and purple.

[BlackIceAdept]

Well I can't think of a very good name right now...so I'll work on that later... but for now its lucifer k?