A song?

[Omega Weapon]

We hope this is in the correct forum. Art can be interpreted as music, correct?

Omega Weapon strives to be a musician. Omega Weapon would like the opinions of people here on a song we are creating for a game which does not happen to be RPG (Omega Weapon's RPG project is a sideproject away from the main group of project makers).

http://media.putfile.com/TC-song---beta

That is a link to our song. It is not finished and some instruments stop for no reason at the end when it should be 7 minutes (it is only 2 for now). It is meant to be stealthy 3D shooter fighting in World War 2.

We apologise if this be in the incorrect forum but there is a multitude here. Please to accept sorries and kindly move into proper forum if possible?