A Science Fantasy

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Okay, i've thought about it, i've taken old stories, adn i've got a lot of those, adn i've eventually compounded a 14 page plot. Then i scrapped that and wrote this:

Deep in space, a civilization of humans rests on the surface of the planet Morgana. It is there, that the maniacal Nase Chernabog has secretly been studying the mysterious ORA fields that surround the people of the colonies.

Soon, he discovers a way to invoke a small virus within the human bloodstream that has been dormant for more than a millennia. This has sparked a great epidemic, and soon, the ORA has gone far from Chernabog’s control.

A former lab assistant of Chernabog, Dr. Soala Shax has contacted Juan Kaizer Jr. (also known as Johnny) to search for the source of the ORA. At that time, Johnny was overseeing the upbringing of a small girl named Aylla, who was the daughter of Johnny’s friend.

When the ORA and Chernabog come to the city where Johnny and Aylla were living in, Soala’s old friend chooses to save the girl’s life and escape the town before ORA sweeps away the life of each human in the city.

When the two are separated during the chaos, Aylla finds herself saved by a boy named Deak, who is able to defeat the strange creature that was created by the ORA. His impressive skill helps her escape the dying city, and hopefully reunite with Johnny.

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Obviously a female lead is soemthign i've never done before. I'mgonna turn this game into a mega Charas blockbuster (omg, i just got what that word means) not for graphics for features, but for story. There will be at last 6 playable characters and HOPFULLY a sort of mecha aspect to the game, like AGWS or ESs from Xenosaga.

On story: It'll fallow a group of charecters from dffeent backgrounds who eventually come together and  atempt to stop the threat of the ORA. There will be at least 8 main storylines, eachn dealing with different charecters.

On graphics: no maps yet, but i got charecter disigns and what not for a few people, i'm trying to do all the charecters myself, but of coarse i'll need other help.

On sound: i'm expecting to use some small sound effects for major things, trust me, it'll sound good. And the music will be don by somone, i'm sure.

So, in other words, i'm doing somethign that would normally take a lot of money for, well, nothing.

Expect the demo, that is, don't expect it soon, but expect it to blow you away.

If it wqorks out, i'll hope to do a 3 more parts to the seris.

[Emerates]

Sounds more original than other's works...
I commend you for that.

[Ryos4]

If you need help making original charsets ill help ya out.  

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Notes:

Names will deffinatly change.

Skills will drasticlly affect battles, even though it's the DBS.

I'm bound to have a tital for the first instalment, but the name of the entire project is still pending.

Things to expect:

Clones.

Laser swords.

Religious conflcts engulfed in politics and complete warfare.

Over 20 hours of game play.

[Shadowless1]

intersting, sound a little Resident Evil'ish tho, but i like it

[Lighting Half Dozen]

I am 100% sure that there is nothing similar to resident evil

Anyway, i bet you guys want to see some screen shots right? To bad. There are no good sci fi chipsets. I have no map. So, if i don't get a decent chipset in 5 days, i'm quiting the rm2k3 buisness once and for all.

Cheers.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

"The Horizon of Dusk"

I did some rethinking. Please read all 5 pages and give your opinions.

[PlasticNinja]

Wow... that document is very different from this thread. However, I must say that the new idea sounds much more entertaining. I had fun reading the names! I don't really like the whole Elves & Wolves thing, but that's just me. It sounds like it would make a better anime than a game though.

Good stuff, I'm going to read it again tomorrow when I'm less tired, and then perhaps really make some comments.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

heh, thjnx

[aboutasoandthis]

It was better than the other one. What happened to the other thread? If it was cause of me, I sorry. I didn't mean to make you or anyone else mad.

About the 20hr game thing, I'm trying to accomplish this too. On another forum someone gave me this little trick. Label the major events in the game by the alphabet
A.
B.
...
Y.
Z.
Then in between each letter you put 10 sentences for long time stuff (like minigames, dungeons, missions). So far it's working for me. I hope it helps.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Thanks for the feed back guys, the names and thigns have been changed up a bit this past weekend. I'll probably start an official thread sooner or later.