Final RPG

[aboutasoandthis]

I think what he means is, your game isn't up to par for someone your age. Your storyline is  really corny. That's almost an understatement. There are games here and out there with more complex and deep storylines, made by people younger than you.

I see a typical plot of young-swordsman hero and his friends go on a quest to defeat evil guy. Evil guy is evil...for no particular reason. You go out to stop him.

You did give some more detail on the characters, but you forgot to add their personalities. I only got to learn about the personality of the girl monk based on your bios. I could only find their classes and what they did in life.

You gave away the main villain. If he is not the main villain  
If he is, get a new "secret" one.

You said you had 3 other finished games in the series. Are any of those made in RM2k or RM2k3? I want to look at those. I don't really know how good you are at making games. I'm not impressed so far.

Please pick 2k 2k3 or RMXP. 2k is okay if you like first person battles. 2k3 is built like a super nintendo Final Fantasy Game. XP is the best but it's ugly, and there aren't that many good resources out there for it.

[Male Haro]

Sorry dude, my only completed games are for RPG Maker 95. I guess I have to change the storyline again, but thanks for the advice.

[DragonBlaze]

Elementalhero76, this is male haro's topic, if you want to post info on your game, make a new topic!

[EXO Muffin]

Yep; your storyline sucks. It's very cliche;"liek teh good guys beat dem evil guys an as long as th good guy re living, the evil cant beet them but ten OH NOES the hero guy dont saves the peoples so the evil guy try takes overing the erth! OMG!!!" In fact, my storyline just focuses on one character, and never goes away from him. There's no,"bad guys," or,"good guys," or,"legendary weapon," just him trying to live life, or death; to be exact(Muhuhwhaha!).
 I might like to see me playing,"evil," in your game. >:

OFF-TOPIC: Why is your name,"Male Haro?" What; is that a misspelling of the RTP battlecharset class?

EDIT:Ergh; I'm really sorry. Just trying to give you ideas. Delet'd.

[I Have a Sandwich]

Exo, for the love of Mike, shut up. This isn't your topic so yo had no need to post your game, it doesn't matter what his name's from, and your games not exactly something I would use to show off "a good story' anyways.