BLUEBIRD

[Brieg]

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Story

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 [] Prologue

The world has always been at war. Currently, The Jade Elves, whose skin is lime and emerald, have begun to occupy the Holy Land of Gon. The country of Lunamon, has begun a crusade against the Jades in order to retake the Holy Land.

However, archeologists had spent years uncovering one ancient prophecy, that of a goddess who has yet to be born. However, it was just before the wars began, that it was discovered the truth about Raina, the unborn goddess.

When she is born, she will appear in the Holy Land, and end the conflict by slaying those who were unkind to her people. And so it began, the race to keep Raina from being born. And the war has not ended since.
 

Volume One

When the House of Bluebird was found slaughtered, there was no sign of their assailant. Yet one survivor, a bluebird named Daxon, fled from the town of Anturuk, in search of the fiend who slaughtered his entire family.

One day, Bluebird met Brieg, a mysterious prophet who brought forth the prophecy of Raina:

Her name shall be Raina
Without you she shall not be born.
With the cross of paths
You will become the Herald of Raina.

He then said “Modus Operandi” before slipping into the forests. These mysteries bring Bluebird to the small town of Izeno, where he meets several people connected to the stories and rumors of Raina and the Fair Elf, Reain, who slaughtered the Bluebirds.

All but one.

[] Characters


Daxon Bluebird – Modus Operandi – A cold hearted fool, born into the House of Bluebird, and raised in the Port City of Anturuk, he spent most of his life studying and doing schoolwork. This resulted in him not being able to socialize with people outside of his hometown.

A mysterious man named Brieg called him “Modus Operandi” and “Herald of Raina” referring to the prophecy of Raina, the unborn daughter of the goddess Watarkin. What the man meant by this is currently unknown.


Reain – Fair Elf – A wise elf who was bitten by the vampire Newroc. Apparently he slaughtered the House of Bluebird, leaving only one survivor, who originally sought revenge. After meeting a man named Brieg, that individual changed his mind and began to search for Reain for other reasons.

Gami – The Crusader – Born in the country of Lunamon, Gami’s father started the war against the Jade Elves, who currently occupy the Holy Land of Gon. She is a skilled archer, having been forced to study in the way of the Elven Chosens, who were the elite of the Jade Elves.

Brieg – Forge Prophet – A mysterious man clad in orange armor. He carries a giant sword named Fridugonge, and appears to be connected with Raina, the unborn goddess.

Sato – The Gloom Hunter – Member of the HERON Organization, Sato is a secret agent who specializes in the mythological and religious cases. He was assigned to investigate the rumors about Raina, the unborn goddess who will supposedly be born soon, through a traveler from the House of Bluebird.

June – Sweet Little Flower – Cousin of Sato and member of HERON. She took up the Raina Project in order to stay with Sato, although she seems to be infatuated with the wellbeing of Daxon.

Andros – Burn and Scarlet – A young cadet from the Phadus Family in the country of Menos Tiran. He is very energetic and is an old friend of the Bluebirds, having worked with them for many years. He is also a cousin of Gami by marriage.

Yai – The Masquerader – Leader of HERON and organizer of the Raina Project. He has met with an individual known as Brieg, and is currently in contact with him. He also has the power of manipulating time and space.
 
[] Features

Well, there is nothing really to say here. I have been focusing on plot and characters for a while, so i onlygot a few ideas for features, which i'll keep to myself for now.

Screen shots? Well, the only maps I have are pritty bad, but i figure you'e heard enough of the story to make an opinion without seeing typical forests and towns.

[Daetyrnis]

Overall it seems really good. ^_^  My only problem with it is the fact that a mysterious [prophet] appears, says important stuff, then leaves.    It seems too random and unrelated.

[coreystranick]

My only problem....is why would he say Modus Operandi? YOu do know that is your MO or why you  commit a crime right?

[Brieg]

The "Prophet" is actually one of the most iportant characters, not random at all.

Modus Operandi is a synonym i got for the word "Method" and "
Technique"

[coreystranick]

Well, yeah, I learned it in my Criminal Jsutice class, it is basically you motive for doing something, so I could see how method would fit.

[Brieg]

Right. Now, as you may have noticed, the 'prophet' is named after my user. Technically he is the main character, trying to make sure Raina is/isn't born. His method of doing that is: Daxon Bluebird.

[SonicChaos7]

Modus operandi means "modes of operation." Crime shows have used it, but mostly NCIS (as far as I know anyway). Modes of Operation means how someone does something regularly. Like if you cut someone's throat from back to front, and there are several deaths done that way, then that is a person's M.O.

[Brieg]

Heh, now that i think about it I should call the whole series Bluebird: M.O., Thanks for the clear up, Sonic.