Story for game

[lilsniffs3]

Well, I don't know what it's from, but it seems cliche. Its for a game that I might start when I finish Alex's Adventure.

The boy loved to draw. He would make a little story to go with it. His characters had very creative adventures. After a dream of being sucked into his world, he never drew for months. After getting yelled at by his parents for getting 60% on a test, he writes in his notebook " If only there was a new world, where no one can boss me around. I wish I was there." He went to sleep, and when he woke up, he was in his world. He went to find away out. Its going to be a platformer, but not scrolling and not a lot of coding.

[Greeb]

The part where he woke up and was in a new world seemed very cliche.And the thing that the main hero of the story is a boy who likes to draw seems kinda lame.It might be just me.

[RPG noob]

Being cliche doesn't really matter as long as its done well.  This reminds me of the painted troll world on oblivion  

[Dragoon de Sol]

The aspect is...lackluster.

Try that he gets trapped in a universe he created within his drawings.