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AsakuraHao2004
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A Time to Love
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Just typed it for school, though I should share. Kinda gory, though.
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A TIME TO LOVE
Kosmek waved goodbye to his mom and dad from the bus as he drove off to school. He turned around and sat himself down. He sat in the back seat of the bus, alone, until it finally came to a stop several minutes later at his school. He got his bookbag and followed the line of kids off the bus and headed directly to his class.
He was relieved that he was the only one in the class when he first got there, for you see, little Kosmek was in love. Lucy was her name. Although he was only eight years old, he really admired the shy, quiet girl in his class. Kosmek was a very shy kid himself, especially in the case of the girl he likes.
He sat quietly, doodling on a piece of paper until the class slowly started to fill up. No one ever talked to Kosmek; he had no friends. He kept to himself, and didn't talk much to people. Sometimes the kids would pick on him for being so quiet, but he didn't let it bother him. He found other was to occupy himself.
Before long, the teacher had started taking roll. He was happy to hear Lucy's voice acknowledge her presence. He loved hearing her speak, it was such a rare occasion, and yet a beautiful thing. Kosmek decided that he wanted to do something to show her how he felt about her.
The next day, Kosmek came to school, only to hear the class respond "absent" when the teacher called out Lucy's name. He couldn't help but smile. He went on his day as any other day, doing his work quietly as the teacher haded it to him. Without Lucy around though, his mind wandered to other things. Namingly, the charm of Jenna. She was an energetic girl, and very beautiful.
As time went on, Kosmek started focusing more and more on Jenna, eventually forgetting about Lucy completely, but just as well, everyone else had. Most people presumed she moved. She hadn't been in school for quite a while. Kosmek decided that he was in love with Jenna, and in fact, they had become friends.
It all started about the third day that Lucy moved. It was recess, and Kosmek was sitting on the cement sidewalk doodling. He looked over and looked at Jenna, and she caught his eyes and came over to him.
"Hi there." She said enthusiastically.
"H-hi." He said nervously.
"What'cha drawin'?" She asked.
"Just a spaceman." He said, slightly blushing.
"That's really good."
"It's nothing special." The two eventually started talking more and more, and before long, they were really close friends. Kosmek was sure this time. He was really in love with Jenna.
He wanted to prove it to her.
The next week, Kosmek came to school to find Jenna absent. A single tear rolled down his cheek, but that was all the sadness he felt. Immediately after that tear separated itself from his face, he felt happy. He had seen the face of a new beauty. Her name was Veronica. She was very beautiful with her long black hair.
Two weeks later, Kosmek decided to prove to her he loved her.
It was a normal day. After attendance, the teacher sighed and said "I guess Jenna has moved as well." Kosmek smiled lightly, but his anxiousness was overtaking any other feeling he might have. Tonight, he would prove to this girl that he loves her. That day, he stared at her the entire time. Normally, he would only try to steal quick glances as to not let her know he was admiring her from afar, but today he showed no fear of consequences and freely admired her beauty. Sometimes she would look at him and he would merely smile and continue his staring.
When the school's end grew near, he was shaking with excitement. The last bell rang and his heart jumped. He knew he had to act quickly. He quickly took out the bottle that had been in his bookbag, and poured a bit of the contents into a cloth that had also been in his bookbag. He hid behind the school building, and quietly called out: "Veronica, come here for a second." As she curiously turned the corner, a hand came over her face and with that, she passed out.
Veronica awoke a few hours later in a dark room. She was sitting up against a wall. She didn't remember what had happened, but she was now in a dark room light by nothing but a few dim candle lights. A figure was before her, but she couldn't make it out. She could tell that it was a person, though. Amidst her sudden confusion a voice sounded. It was the figure, a somewhat familiar voice.
"Finally, you're up." It was a very warm and friendly tone, one that Veronica immediately recognized.
"Kosmek? Is that you? What happened? Where am I?"
"Why, we're in my secret clubhouse." He said. She still had a hard time seeing him. Although her eyes had adjusted to the lighting, the candles were behind him, and only produced a silhouette. "I wanted to tell you something."
"What is it?" The lights flickered and she saw an object shine in the figure's hand. She was still very confused, and a little afraid.
"Y-you know..." he said, "I think you're.. really pretty." The girl blushed, and giggled a bit. "And I also think that I love you."
"Kosmek..." she said.
"But I have to prove it to you." He said, slightly raising his voice. Suddenly, the room brightened. The girl screamed at the sight she saw. Blood was smeared and splattered all over the walls. Bones littered the room. And on a table in the far right corner from her were two object that which upon seeing them made her want to scream, and run, but she was too horrified to. The heads of the two girls she had though moved.
She slowly turned back to look at Kosmek, her face white, and her eyes wide and fearful. Kosmek was holding a knife, and had a friendly smile on his face.
"The ultimate way to prove my love to you is to become one with your body." The girl couldn't speak. She couldn't move. He walked towards her, leaned down on one foot, and kissed her lightly. Then he pulled his knife back over his head.
"Don't worry, my love. We will be one soon." With that, he swung the blade quickly over her throat.
She died.
Kosmek tasted some of the blood as it came from the wound. He loved the taste of war blood. After a few minutes, he then cut off her entire head. He took her head and put it next to the other ones. Then he stripped her of her clothes and put her on another table. From there, he cut open her body and removed her organs, and disposed of them in a small trash can. He kissed her heart and put it up on a shelf. He worked for several hours on the body in the dimly lit room. When his work was over, fresh bones lay on the floor, blood and guts were everywhere, and he had made a pile of her extracted muscles. He was please with his work. He turned back to the head and kissed it gently one more time.
Kosmek then took all the organs and the emptied out body outside. They looked so vibrant and beautiful in the sunlight of a summer's day, almost as if they were still in the body itself, working away to keep the beautiful host alive. He piled them up into a patch of land that had been cleared away. When he was finished, the sun had started to set. Kosmek then took some lighter fluid he had kept in the building and sprinkled it on the pile of body parts. With that, he threw a match into the pile and watched in glee as it started a wondrous fire.
The boy went back inside and found one of his longer knives. He stabbed through a piece of muscle he had taken from the body, and then went outside to the pile. He then propped the knife up to where the meat would be hung over the fire.
For the rest of the night, Kosmek proved his love to this girl. He became one with her, by consuming her physical being.
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June 21, 2005, 07:21:01 PM »
Well that was... freaky...
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June 21, 2005, 07:27:06 PM »
What's so freaky? Seemed normal to me.
Oh wait, wrong window.
Anyways, very descriptive. Very good. Like it.
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June 21, 2005, 07:29:19 PM »
Yeah, it really was written well, but the fact that it was an 8 year old was kinda freaky. It's usually the 26 year old pedophile.
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June 21, 2005, 07:29:58 PM »
sweet...
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June 21, 2005, 07:30:41 PM »
Yeah, this is all going on in like 3rd grade. They grow up so fast..
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June 21, 2005, 07:31:17 PM »
nice text mate... took some time too read it through but it was good.... Keep good grades in school !
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June 21, 2005, 09:33:32 PM »
AsukaraHaro:
You have a very discriptive manner of telling your story.
The element of Irony was presented late in the story. I liked the way you kept the beginning secretive and then in the end, very. . . Revealing.
Congratulations, a nice story it was, I rate it 10/10.
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June 22, 2005, 01:59:24 AM »
Why, thank you.
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