i need help with game story

[Shadowless1]

yeh hi im Nathan I need help for my game its called "Another Side"
Here is the intro text:

A tale of great magic’s,
Locked away from people in the form of cards
Waiting to be summoned back into existence
By four seemingly ordinary people,
Dragged from there pitiful lives, to discover
A world they never knew existed.
A world of demons, danger and sorcery,
A world where anything could happen.

Characters:

Nathan
Age : 15

Oscar
Age : 15

Philip
Age : 15

Kefron
Age : 10

I need help/ideas on how the game should start and etc...

I would really appreciate it if you could help me with this

Thanks in advance.

[Seth Mitchell]

You should have posted in my team creative Advisers thread, we do this kinda stuff. But I guess I can help.


This sounds a lot like yu-gi-oh, is it gonna be a card game like as in battle with cards or what?

[Shadowless1]

no i got the card idea from it but the cards are gonna be used for magic and summons etc...

[Seth Mitchell]

Ok well I'll work on a story for you when I'm done, I'm gonna post it in my creative adviser thread so check there for it.

[Shadowless1]

ok but can u tell me when youve posted it on this thread please?

[Seth Mitchell]

I finishe your story, it's in my thread. Remember to credit if you use it. Feel free to change it.

[syro9]

This seems like its kinda been done before, about any object having power to take people into a new world with magic and stuff.  I thinlk maybe you should try something more original but do whatever you want.