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Ephiam
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Valcon Sky: Children Of The Sin
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**This is a story that me and some other people have been working on. It is now in the very early stages of development, but I decided to post it anyway. I did the story and most of the character's while the others gave the character's personalities and such.**
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Valcon Sky: Children Of The Sin
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Some days made one feel as if they were worthless, others made it feel like the world revolved around them,a variety of things all mixed into one. Each passing day had been something different, a new adventure. However, for the young boy by the name of Lance Willaims, time seemingly stood still, making him suffer in the longing pain in which ate slowly away at him. Lance's parents had been brutaly murdered, their remains found scattered upon the floor of their small home. Everything had been drentched in the red liquid which secreted from their mangled corpses. It had been Lance's brithday, supposedly one of the most happiest days in his life. The young boy was told to go out for a while to gather a few things while his parents readied their surprise for him...for his birthday. And it was...it had been a great surprise, one to surpass all the others that he was to encounter in his life. Within the red room he found the present that he was supposed to go to him; his fathers magnificant sword. It had been a great sword which had been in many battles through the ages and was passed down through his family and was about to be given to him .Lance had stood within the same spot in that home for the longest while, finding it quite difficult and more overwhelming than anything to accept the reality that he was unwillingly forced into accepting.
Since that day the nightmareish image of his parent's mangled corpse lying upon the blood stained carpet hung in his mind, forever haunting him. Lance, now, had been running around as a mere street theif. he stole from anyone, no matter who they were or what their social status was. He had no 'friends' or 'family' to look after or care for him, all he felt was hatred and suffering.
After a few years, the government started to go against the actions of the cooperation known as Eclipse. Eclipse, you see, had been using their funds to research more about the legends of 'Creta' and the "spirit plane". Their leader, Mistress Einte, refused to give in to thier order's. She told them that "It was for the good of the people." and that getting their hands on the ancient technology would help them greatly. They could use it to cut down the energy costs, forge much better weapons and increse their technological knowledge greatly. However, the government still did not give in to their pleads of continuation and thretened to shut them down. Einte still refused and shortly after began their mining expidition. Einte, using the coorperations new-found knowledge,her knowledge on the creta and of the spirit plane, and killed the local residence under her control and, using their high-tech equipment, used the dead bodies to form the special stone called Creta. With this, they began to round up more and more people to use in order to form a larger, more powerful version of it and amplify it's power in order to breah "the gate' and open a small hole to the spirit plane. However, having enough of Eclipse's mindless violence, began to attack back. However, Einte began to recruit more and more people for her growing army...Lance was one of these people. She told her troops to take the dead bodies of the victims of war in order to make more Creta for her to use.
Once they had enough, Eclipse forged a massively powerful piece of creta and used that to open a small breach in the gate and to harvest more souls. They later found out that without any back up help, the creta's other effects would go to waste. Eclipse then develpoed an 'amplifier' in order to give their fighting soldiers a much needed bit of help. Using the amplifier, the creta was able to reach it's full potential and allow the soldiers to cast certain ammounts of damaging 'magical' attacks before the creta broke and the souls within returned to the spirit plane. With that, the mighty war between a powerful coorperation and the perishing county..and maybe even most of the world and beyond began.
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-Now, time to start naming of some terms that you people who are interested should know.-
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Creta:
Creta is a special stone that is composed of human souls. When combined with an amplifier, it can be used to cast decetly poweful magical atacks. No magical powers of any kind can be used without the help of a creta. However, there is a downside; With to many uses, it breaks and the souls within return to the spirit plane again. Creta can also be imbuned in special equipment, allowing higher preformance such as speed, strength, etc.
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Spirit Plane:
The place where a soul goes once it's host body dies or expires in any way. Countless souls reside here and are formed every minute. However, untill they are claled upon to take place inside a human body, it does not go into the human world.
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Gate:
The gate or 'Soul Barrier' as some like to call it, stops the souls from going into the outside world and stops anything else from getting into the spirit world. However, with a large enougha dn powerful enough chuk of creta, it can begin to fade and develop a small hole. When this hole forges, the souls within the spirit plane try to fix it but are absorbed into the creta which created it.
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Amplifier:
A device designed by the scientists in Eclipse to help reveal the full potential of Creta. It forces the souls within the go into crazy spasms, causing the energy within the greatly swell and allow the use of magic. An amplifier can be used on a piece of armour or weapon to increse it's value and power.
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Eclipse:
A powerful and mighty organization run behind the scenes by Einte, the soul founder of the organization and it's leader. It cares not about the world, but about the future and technological advancements in which no one else can seem to grasp through the useage of creta. Their soldiers are powerful and wield special armour and weapons powered with an amplifier and Creta. Eclipse will stop at nothing to become all poweful and help the 'growth' of the planet.
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Resistance:
An underground military grop that sends spies into the Eclipse reigon in order to gain information on how to help in the war. Some of the members, espicially the leaders, have high-tech and poweful armour and weapons to help them fight. Some are more unique than others, however.
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The Seven Sins:
This fierceome group is the most powerful weapons that Einte has under her command. They were made using many, many dead bodies and many souls. Because of this, each one has a unique ability that they can use without the help of an amplifier or Creta. They consist of the Seven Deadly Sins; Lust, Greed, Sloth, Gluttony, Wrath, Pride and Envy, as seen in "The Divine Comedy".
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The MAIN Character's
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Lance Williams:
Gender:
Male
Age:
15
Bio:
The...well, main character. His parents were slaughtered and he was forced onto the street. He had no 'friends' or 'family' to take care of him when he was young, so he is useually quiet but agressive. He was tossed out of and forgotten by the eclipse after the mistress thought it wise to do so. He now travels country looking for a 'home' of some sort. HIs attitude may not have changed much since his childhood...but he is quite a bit more talkative than he was back then.
Aika Toria:
Gender:
Female
Age:
15
Bio:
A young girl who lost her parents due to Einte's reign. She was stopped from being killed when Lance helped her away from the soldiers. For now, he has persuaded Einte into not killing her. She is kind, but can be cruel when she wnats to. Her and Lance get along....failry well, but she gets annoyed of his silent treatment. Aika, along with Lance, was thrown out of Eclipse's custody. Why Einte did not have them both killed was a question that was never answered. However, she did seperate the two, thinking it was just as good.
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The baddies >: D ( For the beginning. I shall introduce more as it goes on.)
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Lust of the seven deadly sins.
Gender:
Female.
Age:
Unknown. Looks to be about mid 20ish.
Bio:
Created through the bonding of many human souls and corpses, Lust is a devilish woman indeed. She is manipulative, can change her shape and apperance and is one of the mistress's favorite's. She is useually put in charge of most of the missions the mistress sends them on.
Envy of the seven deadly sins.
Gender:
Male
Age:
Unknown. Looks around 25-26
Bio:
Created through the bonding of many human souls and corpses, just as the rest of the sins were. He is a pyromanic and loves the smell of melting flesh. He is also a sword loves and is envious of those who have better weapons than he does. He also dislikes the fact that the mistress put's Lust in charge, but follows anyway. He and Gluttony are always pestered by her to do the things she does not want to do.
Gluttony of the seven deadly sins
Gender:
Male
Age:
Unknown. One can't really tell how old he looks and/or acts.
Bio:
Made the same way as the other sins, Gluttony is a glutton for human lives. He loves to devour people, but only does so if Envy or Lust allows it. Gluttony has many special abilities, some are as followed: Being able to fuse with his environtment, eating people, having immense speed and strength and using his mouth as a giant vacuum to suck up things. He is almost as childish, if not more so, than one of the other sins but loves to fight .
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The beginning of a growing nightmare
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Scene 1
Young boy:
"mom, dad, i'm home!..(
the young boy goes to the front of the house then to the doorway, smiling happily.
)
Young Boy:
"Mom, dad?..." (
His smile fades and his eyes open, his face expressing great shock
.)
Young Boy:
"m..o.m?" (
He drops the bags that he was carrying, causing them to crash upon the bloody, wooden floor. He then takes a step back, still in great shock, his face pale.)
(The room shows. It is in a terrible state: there is blood everywhere, a mans body lying in a bloody lump on the floor and blood everywhere. There is a banner on the floor which is partially covered in blood with the words "happy birthday" written on.)
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Scene 2
*A young man lays lying in a small, single peson bed within a hotel. He had shoulder length brown hair, wore a pair of black, baggy shorts and a white strap shirt. However, the peace ends abruptly when he shoots up out of the bed. He looked as though he had seen a ghost, sweting. He looked down to the bed then out the window which was by the bed.*
Young Man:
*in a low, calm voice he began to say something "So...it was a dream, huh..."
Younger Voice:
*coming from bellow the bed* "What was a dream...?"
Young Man:
"AH!"*Jumps up, looking down to the side of the bed*
Younger Voice:
* A young boy with hair that reached down to his waist stood up. HIs hair was colored black and he wore a dark greenish colored t-shirt which was dirty and a pair of baggy black pants. He looked to the young man, rubbing his eyes.* "The hell is wrong with you....?"
Young Man:
"Ah! Wra, wr.....Ren! you stupid little.." *Kicks the young boy, sening him toppling to the floor.* "Your supposed to be out in your own room!"
Ren:
*Lies there on the floor, having a flat(angry) face* "AH! the hell was that for!?" *the young boy said this as he sat up, looking back to the young man.* "It was gettin a tad lonely in there...so I decided to come here! ^^" *smiles* " Besides...if you didn't get up in time, I would have had to wake you up anyway. Right, Lance?"
Lance:
"Sure...? why not -.-" * sits up and sretches*. "What...you gettin scared already?" *he said with a evil grin*
Ren:
" I'm not a baby!!! >.<" *he exclaimed, flailing his arms all over the place.*
Lance:
"Ahh! jeez..calm down! I never called you a baby >.>' " ^^
Ren:
"mhm... <.<" *stands up* "well then, c'mon, get ready!"
Lance:
"But whyy?? T.T I'm sick of moving around so much.." =(
Ren:
-.- "you know why! so get up!!" *pulls out a stick and whips Lance with it*
Lance:
"GAH! son of a-" *turns his head as someone abruptly enter's the room.*
Woman:
"Is everything alright in here? I heard some comotion coming from outside."
Lance & Ren:
*pointing at one and other* "it was him." *they booth glare at one and other*
Lance:
"the hell it was me! YOUR the one attacking me!"
Ren:
"maybe if you were'nt such a lazy a$$-hole then i woulden't have to! "
Lance:
"grrr..." *glares*
Ren:
*glares back*
Woman:
"So......I guess everything is good in here?" *a confused look on her face*
Ren:
"Yup. Now that sir sleep's alot is up."
Woman:
"ok then. ^.^" *exit's the room, shutting the door gently.
Lance:
"I'm not lazy you cry baby!"
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(outside the hotel room of Lance and Ren)
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*The young maid stood there. Her normal, innocent smile changing to a devilish grinn as her skin warped to a plae color and she regained a completely new form. The argueing of Lance and Ren could be heard coming from the room still.*
Woman:
"Seem like their both enjoying themselves...." *takes a few steps away from the door* "but we all know that that's not how to enjoy one's self." *let's a slight chuckle sescape her breath, wiping her long, blonde hair from her eyes. She then vanishes before she reaches the stairs, fading from view.
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(Within the hotel room of Lance and Ren)
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Lance:
"Whatever...we better get down and pay for this crap...i'm gettin hungry!" *grinns.*
Ren:
"your ALWAYS hungry. There isn't a time when you aren't!" *Stomach rumbles. He backs away, turning a tad pale* o.o'
Lance:
=P "haha...can't say anything now!"
Ren:
"hmph!" *crosses arms.*
Lance:
* Get''s off of the bed, walking over to the door.* "are you comming or are you just going to sit there?" *he opens the door and walks out, moving down the hall to the stairwell to the right.*
Ren:
*jups up, running after Lance.* "wait up! Don't leave me up here!!"
( A few minutes pass by.)
* A distortion could be seen upon the wooden floor as a human-like figure emerges from the seemingly melting surface.*
Woman:
" heh...hear that Gluttony? their getting something to eat.....
Voice:
"ohhhhhh...." * a bloated, short man emerges from the shadow's of the room, nearing the woman. "so they food?"
Woman:
"not...exactly." *she said with a snicker* "However, there are more people down their besides them. Maybe you could have an
almost
all you can eat buffet, hmm?" * she said, patting the man on the head, watching him as he drooled all over the floor.
Large Man:
"ohhhh...so Gluttony able to eat everyone else, hm? that good! that goooood!!!!" *the man laughed*
Woman:
"Not yet though Gluttony....their still more to do before we can let you have a lunch break. First we have to find Envy and make sure he's not setting fire to anything important -.-"
Gluttony:
"So THEN we eat them.....?" *he asked, giving the strange woman a hungry stare*
Woman:
" ugh...Yes, yes, after that you can eat." *She said before melding back into the floor.*
*The large man jumped up and down twice or more before melting into the shadow's
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Scene 3
(Lance and Ren stand next to a reception desk, speaking to woman behind the desk. A few people passed by and then, guys and girls, old and young. They just stood there, talking)
Woman behind the desk:
"Hello you two. Are you here to pay for your time here?" *smiles*
Lance:
"Yup." *Lays the money on the counter.*
Woman behind the desk:
"Thank you. I hope you have a nice day."
*Lance and Ren turn around and begin to walk to the exit. Lance counts how much money they have left.*
Lance:
"Man...I don't think we even have enough for something to eat... o.o" *chuckles nervously*
Ren:
O.O "What!? How in the HELL did you use all the moeny we made!?"
Lance:
"ugh.....well, I might have-" *Thinks back to when he used the moeny to get his sword polished.*
Ren:
-.- "you used it to polish that, that rusty thing!"
Lance:
"Well..it's not rusty any more >.>"
Ren:
-.- "why now!?......." *takes in a deep breath and exhales.* "Are you sure that there is not enough to buy some food ?"
Lance:
"umm....well" *counts it again* "there could be enough...for,um...one person maybe...?" *nervously laughs*
Ren:
"and that one person is me <.<"
Lance:
"like hell it is!" *Glares at Ren*
Ren:
"Yes, it is!" *grabs the small bag of money and runs through the door.*
Lance:
"AHH! get back here with my money!" *takes off after Ren.*
(Ren manages to lose sight of Lance and finally enter's the restaurant around the turn. on his way there he passes a strangely dressed man with long hair who he paid no attention to. The man appeared to be gazing into the window of the weapons store, drooling over all the fine object's on display. After a moment though, Lance finally catches up, stopping for a moment to face the man)
Lance:
"hey.." *Lance said, panting* "did you...happen..so see a..stupid kid run by here?"
Man:
*looks away from his constant gazing at the weapons and looks to Lance.* "well...I see alot of thos elately. Which kind of one you looking for shorty?"
Lance:
---.--- "small kid, long black hair...uh...carrying money.."
Man:
"Ohhh....that one. I think he went into the restaurant jus-"
Lance:
*before the man was able to finish speaking, Lance takes off in the direction of the restaurant.* "Thank's mister!!" * a memnet passed by after he finally managhed to come in view of the restaurant.* "ugh...Ren, that little bastard! he coulden't just buy something small to eat now could he!?!" *runs over to the building.*
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(Back at the location of the strange man.
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(Another kid approaches the tall manwho had been looking at the weapons with somone accompanying her. It was a large, fat man wearing a back coat and glasses.)
Man:
"oh god...did you have to make him wear that?" *He said, looking to the large, bloated man.*
Child
"And do you HAVE TO let wrath slip by you?"
Man:
"Wrath was...here?" o.O
Child
"Envy...do you also have to be such an idiot." *transforming back into the tall, blonde haired woman. She looked at the tall man and gave him a smile.*
Man:
"Oh yeah...." *he said chuckling nervously* "yeah, I thought he looked familier."
Woman
"Oh well...if it wasn't for your sword obsession we would not have to cause a ruccus." *sighs* "Well, I suppose everything can't work out perfect." *looks over to the restaurant with a grin* "then let's just get this over with..."
To be continued.....
(Sorry for the smotion smilie things such as : T.T, -.-, o.o, O.O being in the story, I just use them to shwo some sort of emotion. I know it's not the best spelling and grammer but I tried my best to be careful. The reason that some of the underline and bolding things are not working either is because I just took it from the other site I had it on. Thanks for the time.)
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(Sorry for the double post)
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Scene 4
(Lance arrived to the restaurant a little to late, as it appeared. Ren sat there at a two-person table, basically drooling as the waitress handed him the small lunch he has ordered. Ren then gave her the moeny, she said something, then walked away.)
Lance:
O.O "............" *slowly approaches Ren with a comically stunned face. *
Ren:
* Looks to Lance and smiles* "Haha.....hey. 'Bout time ya showed up!" * he chuckled, grinning. He then took a large bite out of the bread roll he held in his hand*
Lance:
*Takes a seat next to Ren* "that's not fair T.T" * He said in a whiny voice.*
Ren:
*Laughed abit, still smiling happily. * "Well...at least next time you'll be more carefull with your money. ^^"
Lance:
"I was careful!" *glares at Ren "It's just that your a theif!"
Female Voice
"Does it really matter? Heh. No wonder themistress threw you out Lance, your nothing but a bothersome child."
Lance:
"huh? what!?"
(The blone-haired woman emerged from the floor, causing it to waver and mutate. She stood there, beside the table, looking to Lance then to Ren, grinning.)
Ren:
"l-l-l-lust!!" *he finally managed to yell, falling out of his chair and scampering out of the way, nearing one of the other tables.*
*The people looked in bewilderment as the woman named Lust appeard.*
Lust:
"Oh, Wrath.....you remember little ol' me?" *letting a slight chuckle escape her icy breath.* "Gluttony..." she said, changing her tone dramatically, sounding more serious this time.*
(There was a loud explosion: The wall of the restaurant caved in, in one mighty blow. Debris flew everyone accompanied by the chorus of many screams. There, standing in the growing dust stood Gluttony, a large grin of pure please on his face. Many people lay dead now, others ran screaming and some were to petrified to move. The ones screaming attrated attention and more people gathered around the ruins of the restaurant. Lance jumped back next to Ren as he glared at Lust.)
Lance:
"You bitch! why the hell did you come here!? We are not doing anything to affect your 'mistresse's' plans!" *he growled, barring his teeth.*
Lust:
"My,my,my....such language coming from one so young as you. How does your mother think of your behavior now?" * asked, chuckling*
Lance:
*growled more as he was thrown into a blinding rage.* "Don't talk about my mother!!" " *He yelled, drawing his sword and quickly assaulting Lust with it. However, she quickly jumped away and formed her arm into a long blade. She came at Lance with great speed, swinging it horrizontally. lance pushed himself away, however, he was still hti and the blade left a large but on his arm. The red liquid then began to form quickly and drip to the floor. Lust laughed.*
Lust:
"Gluttony...take care of Wrath. WE will let Envy have his fun once we get that brat out of here." *she said, looking back to Lance, grinning.* "I thought that you used to be alot better than that young boy. Have you grown weary after being away from us for so long?" *the woman asked, swinging at Lance yet again. Lance, however, ducked under this one and kicked Lust in the stomach. She let out a groan then quickly jumped to the side, smiling.*
Wrath:
*Stood there in shock. He heard Lust speak.*
"t-they came for me!?
" *he thought as he hastely looked back to Gluttony. The crazed figure launched his figure at Wrath. Wrath growled, his hand melting somewhat and forming into a large blade which extended and impaled Gluttony. The creature landed on the ground with a mighty 'thump!'. Blood spilled from the creature's stomach, pouring onto the floor and forming a large pool of blood. However, he did not stay down for long before he moaned, standing to his feet and wabbling slighty. Wrath looked on "Damn it!" * He said in a low voice before leaping over Gluttony, starting his assault on Lust, trying to give Lance a bit of help. He took a mighty swing at Lust with his arm. However, Lust evaded easily and grasped it, driving her claws into his flesh. Blood ran down his arm like a tiny rive from eas of the holes her claw made and dripped to the floor.* "AGH!" *The boy moaned as he launched his other arm at her, attemting the same thing. This time it did not work either. A new figure, the man from earlier, jumped in with a mighty sword in hand and sliced through Wrath's arm. He yelled in pain and dropped to his knees.*
Envy:
"Heh. Stupid brat, wath who your surroundings, you never know what can leap out at you at the last second." *He said, placing a smirk on his young face.*
Lust:
*She let go of Wrath's arm, letting it drop to the ground as she lokoed back to Lance.* "My,my..you don't really seem to be a big help-" *She said, thrusting forward, making a downward slash at Lance. The young boy dodged it by jumping to the side and took another swing at her from the side his sword. Lust's body, however, morphed and she sank into the ground. A sharp pair of claws quickly extended up from the ground making thier way staright for Lance though once she did so. Lance quickly lifted his blade from the ground and took a slash at the claws. It was useless. His blade was deflected by Gluttony. The bloated man held it in his hand, grinning. It was too late now though, Lust's clw penetrated Lance's side, causing him to also drop to his knees.*
Wrath:
"l-Lance!" *The boy managed to muster, trying to go over to aid Lance. Envy quickly made sure this would not happen and took hold of Wrath, preventing him from helping.*
Envy:
"Now, now. Don't go rushing in to help shorty here. You'll only get your self killed. We can't have that...the mistress has to have a little chat with you first." *He grinned.*
Wrath:
*His expression turned to one who was stricken with horror once he heard what Envy spoke of. he could not let them take him back..no matter what. Wrath growled, gritting his teeth, his elbow morphed into a sharp blade and pierced through Envy's stomach. Envy quickly let go, growling. Wrath quickly made his way over to where Gluttony stood: next to Lance. He quickly slashed at Gluttony with his one good arm, causing Gluttony to hop quickly over it
(Lust quickly materialated yet again, taking her physical form, emerging from the floor. She looked to Wrath with a grin. Taking a quick step, she laucnhed herself at him. However, before she was able to reach him Lance was able to take a swing back, attacking from behind, he managed to slice the demonic woman partially in half. She fell but was quickly regenerating and already just about back up to her feet. Lance glanced over the place. Something clicked in then, he had remembered something. He winced in pain as he pulled a small, glowing stone from a small dirty pouch. When he did, he closed his eyes and flung it at Lust. Lust backed away and took a quik siwpe at the object. When she did there was a blinding light followed by a large explosion.
When everything cleared only a part of Lust's bottom half remains along with Gluttony and Envy, who had now fully recovered from Wrath's earlier attack. Lance and Wrath, however, were no where in sight. Only a small hole remained in the floor which led into the sewer system bellow. Leading into that hole was a trail of blood: evidence to immediately give away their posisition.
Lust quickly regained her body again as it pieced it's self back togeather. Envy walked over and Gluttony picked himself up.)
Lust:
"Ugh..how bothersome. I hate dirty old places like that." *she frowned. Looking back to Gluttony, a smile came over her face.* "Gluttony,go after them...make sure you slaughter that child and brin Wrath back alive."
Gluttony:
"Heh, heh. Gluttony hungry. Gluttony shall devour child!'" *he yelled, smashing through the floor, landing in the sewer and quickly running off.*
Lust:
"Come, Envy. We shall meet Gluttony at the exit.." *She said, walking out of the ruins, vanishing into thin air.*
Envy:
"UGH! Damn it all!" *he said in an angered voice.* "Heh. Well, at least I get to burn something!" *He laughed, looking at all the people who had gathered around, he grinned.* There was a massive outburst of flames as people's screams echoed into the morning sky. Envy laughed.* "Ready, Lance? The chase is on!" *He laughed, bursting into flames, dissolving, leaving the area to burn.*
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To be Continued.......
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Chapter 2: Hellfire.
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( Lance and Ren had managed to escape the clutches of the mysterious attackers for now. However, they had been basically trapped. One of Wrath's arms had been removed and the other was wounded. Lance, however, was not as bad but had still been hurt. Wrath left a trail of blood following behind him. The two walked down the twisting path the sewer lay out for them. Now, however, they had to maneuver through it and manage to get out alive.)
Lance:
( He is walking, continuing onward, trying to find a way out as soon as possible. However, he hears a 'thud' coming from behind him and sees Wrath lying facedown on the ground.* "Wra-...Ren!" (He yelled, going back over to the boy.)
Wrath:
(looks up to Lance as the young boy ran over to him, trying to help him up. A river of blood ran from his arms stump. However, the blood had slowed down quite a bit since it had been done. Since he was no ordinary person, this could rarely kill one such as him.) "W-why did you call me Ren?" (The boy was being placed against the tunnels wall as he spoke this.)
Lance:
"Well...you wanted to be called it, did you not?" (Smiles) "Besides...it's better than being named after one of those 'things'."
Wrath:
"but if I didn't sneak out with you...then no one would have gotten hurt.." (Saying in a low, sad voice.) "And I'm one of those 'things' too. We are all the same..."
Lance:
"Heh...that's not true." (Leaning back against the wall, closing his eyes.) "yo-your better than those creatures." (Holding on to his side, looking down to Wrath.) "But...we have to get going." (Looking down into the darkness of the tunnel they had already came from.) "they are bound to...come for us. And if we get cornered down here...then there's no way we can escape."
Wrath:
(Tries to stand up, using his one good arm and the support from the tunnel wall to do so.) "B-but...."
Lance:
"This is no time for chit-chat." (Looks to Wrath, bending down slightly.) "Come on. Hop on...I'll carry you."
Wrath:
(Shakes head.) "No...I'll be alright." (Walking to the side of Lance then continues onward, looking back.) "I can heal faster than you....but not as fast as the other ones."
Lance:
(Just looks at Wrath as the boy walked in front of him. He quickly caught up though.) "yeah...that's a good thing about being like you. " (After saying this he smiles.)
Wrath:
(Stops's moving, clenching his fingers together to form a fist.) "There is nothing 'good' about being like this!" (He yelled, turning to face Lance, tears running down over his beat up face.) "Your not normal...and if you let even one person see you do any of these 'good' things then your instantly labeled a freak!"
Lance:
(Looks to Wrath, slightly shocked by his comeback.) "b-" (He was not able to continue what he was saying before the echoing of heavy breathing filled the tunnel they were in.) "T-they sent-"
(Gluttony's head emerges from the stone wall to the left of them, a large grin on his face.)
Gluttony
" Gluttony!" (Laughs, breaking through the wall he had join with, instantly taking his original, physical shape.) "Gluttony eat boy and bring Wrath back to mistress!" (After saying this, he watches as Lance and Wrath both back away, frightened out of their minds.)
Lance:
(thinking)
"N-no! why here..w-why now!?"
Gluttony
(Attempts a tackle. Lance tries to get in it's way but it happens to work the other way around and Wrath pushes him to the side. Gluttony smashes his head into Wrath's chest. With that, there is a light cracking sound. Wrath spits out blood, his eyes turn a grayish white and he falls to the ground.) "hahaha! Gluttony get Wrath easy now!" (He then launches his arms out to grab Wrath. Lance, however, in a rage thrusts a small dagger into Gluttony's face. The man backs away, trying t remove it.)
Lance:
(Picks Wrath up, quickly starting to run from Gluttony.) "Damn it!" (He yelled.) "Wrath...come on, stay..alive!"
Gluttony
"Hehe...." (Chuckling, he finally was able to remove the dagger. He then wipes the blood from his face.) "Stupid boy!" (he growls. However, something shiny then catches his attention. He reaches down and picks up a shard of some sort of purplish colored jewel and begins to laugh.) "Hahaha! Wrath no live much longer if this broken!" (Saying this, he devoured the shard and launched himself down the tunnel like a wild boar.)
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Lance:
(Continued running. However, sustaining such injuries that he had and carrying wrath on his back made it much worse. Letting out a grunt every now and then, he continued running. ) "c'mon, there has to be some way out of here!!" (Saying to himself in desperation as he followed the many twists and turns of the tunnel. Soon, after a few moments, something caught his attention. He finally saw what he wanted to see, a light. He followed it and finally made it to some kind of exit.) "Yes!" (He raced over to it, exiting the sewer. Stepping through the gunk under his feet, Lance moved to the edge of the pipe sticking out of the large road. He smiled.)
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I Have a Sandwich
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3 words: Quality, not quantity.
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August 20, 2006, 12:01:04 AM »
Ugh..I try. (well, if you mean in the sense of mistakes or in the sense of the number of posts I have made.) I try to use a spellchecker and make things as clear as possible while still trying to make someone want to read more.
Heh, well, it's fun for me to write anyway.
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August 20, 2006, 02:18:32 AM »
I didn't really read much through it.. But now I have to make a new title for my game that I'm secretly oh so secretly (not) making right now!
Oh and FMA for the win!
and the title of my game
was
gonna be called "Children of Sin" so yeah... Need a new title now...
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August 20, 2006, 02:21:49 AM »
Sandwich: What I mean is this type of writing
Sandwich: (Pauses for a second to drink soda) Its just not the greatest way of writing.
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August 20, 2006, 02:34:40 PM »
Hmm..Yeah, I know what you mean by "it's not the greatest way of writing." I figured that out once I finished Scene 3.
That is why i am trying to ease this into a more......understandable way. (I thought the first part of chapter 2 was the easiest to read so far, but that's just me.)
AN no,not FMA, it may remind you of it but it is not linkes to it or a rip off of it in any way. I think by using the sins people started calling it that. before, when I used the same story and definitions, no one seemed to care or meantion squat about FMA. However, once I added the sins everyone started saying it T.T Oh well, they shall do for now..it's not like they will be there forever.
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