Gems of Divinity

[Mikagami]

A new game I'm making... Here's the storyline...

Gems of Divinity - Plot
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Once there was two Planets, Gaia and Terra. Both of them were peaceful and there was a warm friendship between them. Then came Apocalypse, the Spirit of Darkness. Apocalypse was going to destroy The Planets, but they made the mightiest miracle of all, The World Fusion. So, Gaia and Terra became one, Aden, The Planet of Hope. Aden defeated Apocalypse and sealed him to the Final Dimension, The Crystal World. Later born the races and Kingdoms, and source of Aden was created, The Crystal, made by Adenius, the Leader of Aden. He made it from the souls of three protective stars, Elenium, Serenium and Holynium. Crystal is located in The Crystal World, the same place, where Apocalypse is sealed.

In the year 2149, young man named Rodney Haegen completed the test to join Crystal Knights, The Protective Force of Aden. Rodney goes for some test fights, and after that he goes to the Training Center of The Section Elenium. There Rodney meets a new friend, Rin. Rodney hears some rumours from Rin, that Apocalypse has risen again. Rodney doesn't believe such things, but suddenly, an army beyond the grave attacks to The Training Center. Thousands of Zombies and Skeletons attacks to The Training Center and goes to kill everybody. Section Elenium fought well, but they will lose for sure. The battle continued, until only Rodney and Rin were alive. Suddenly one Skeleton kills Rodney with his sword. Rodney just hears Rin screaming, and then, everything became darker...

Rodney awakes in a shiny room, and front of him stands a man in white suit. The man tells Rodney about Apocalypse's new weapon, an Ultimate Sword called Omega. It is powered with Pain, Fear, Darkness and Evil. Apocalypse had gathered that power for ages and ages, and finally, he has gone away from his prison, and he is now trying to break The Force Wall, what protects The Crystal. The only way to stop him, is to load The Force Field with Gems of Divinity. There is three of them, one of them is inside The Star Elenium, one inside The Star Serenium, and one lies inside The Star Holynium. Rodney has to collect The Gems and power up The Force Field and save it from The Eternal Evil...

What do you think?

[Mikagami]

Name: Rodney Haegen
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Degree: Crystal Knight
Skills: Sword Art, Summon
Weapon: Sword
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Black

Rodney is the main character of GoD. He wants to learn this, but sometimes, he finds hard to take any responsibility in life. He thinks, that he cannot defeat The Eternal Spirit of Darkness, but he wants to fight it to the very end, and save Aden once and for all.

Name: Rin Kirino
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Degree: Crystal Knight
Skills: Dragoon, Summon
Weapon: Spear
Eye color: Red
Hair color: Brown

Rin is a spear - user in Crystal Knights. He was a spy6 first, but during the Omega Wars, he become The General No. 2 in The Crystal Knights. Rin wants to learn more about using his Dragoon skills. He wants to be honoured, when he gets old.

Name: Hikaru Kagero
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Degree: Ninja
Skills: Ninja Skills, Black Magic, Summon
Weapon: Katana
Eye color: Blue
Hair color: Black

Hikaru is a shady ninja from The Village of Kyuu. She likes winning, and she has never lost any fight. She is dangerous with her katana, wich she calls Hiryuu, Flying Dragoon. She knows the art of using Shurikens, Smoke Bombs etc.

I haven't designed any more characters by now.

[Red Giant]

The storyline has good potential, even if it is cliched.

[RPG LORD]

Good, Goo, Go, G

[Shady Ultima]

I agree, weaknesses, strengths, what they enjoy. Imagine if you were to describe EVERYTHING about yourself, then create a char using those ideas

[Mikagami]

Thank you for your comments! Yes, I like the storyline too. It took me 2 hours to finish it. Oh darn... This is the thing what destroyed my other projects... Who are the characters...? If someone would like to help with their personalities, PM me. Help is appreciated.