World of Chaos Overview

[Mortalitas]

I honestly dont know if this is acessable so if its not plz meesgae me.

This is my game so far.  It has many problems please go through it and make a list and comment it, and plz dont put anything twice.

How do I post my game if its too big for a post?


Game Name:  World of Chaos:  Idola

Story:

Background Story:  There are deities on world and most of them become tyrants.  One use to control the islands in this game and more, but was killed a couple generation ago.  Than a dark ruler named Ira took over the area, but Idola stopped her.  Unable to kill her he sealed her in her fortress.    Main land is in a great civil war so to try to not let it spread the island have a trade agreement:  Island leaders will have permits and must give permission to merchant to travel.

Current Story:  Dark creatures are attacking people in forests and gathering unnaturally.  You (Croesus) go to try to figure out and stop the dark creatures.  you go to meet Idola, who lives on island and is leader.  While getting near you meet Canace who joins you but is soon to be attack by Onyx.  Onyx at this time is weak saying he was only prepared for Idola.  You go meet Idola and he tells you what to do.

Extra:  Not to many extra stuff so far.  I got a fight club and an easter egg in the forest of Cretea (second island)

I will Include an alternative final level, but it will only be obtained by a secret way.

Characters

Croesus:
Race:  Human
Gender: Male
Age:  31
Overview:  main character,  who does what he is told and wants to improve the world.

Canace
Race: Elf
Gender:  Female
Age:  27
Overview:  Lives in same town as Croesus.  Leaves to try to stop dark creatures a day before Croesus.

Dart
Race:  Human
Gender:  Male
Age:  34
Overview:  An assassian who worked in a team with Talma and Elly but they left him since they thought he slowed them down.

Idola:
Race: Unknown
gender: Male
Age: about 800 years
Overview:  Lives in a wooden house North of Croesus' home town.  He was alive for about 800 years about the time when he sealed Ira.  He tells you what to do throughout the game.


Natalie
Race:  Human
Gender: Female
Age:  30 years
Overview:  Not much known about her.  She doesn't want to be talked to and stands near Idola almost all the time.


Ira:
Race: Unknown
Gender: Female
Age: about 800 years
Overview:  Sealed by Idola about 800 years earlier.  She acted as a tyrant to the island cluster around the game.  She controls dark creatures and has two die-hard followers Onyx and Shira.


Shira
Race: 
Gender:  Female
Age:  55 (but appears much younger)
Overview:  She is a die-hard follower of Ira.  She is the one who unsealed her and recruited the citzens and all the prisoners on the island Sol.  She has mind manuplating powers to cause realistic hallucinations, as she learned from her teacher, Vale.


Onyx: 
Race:
Gender:  Male
Age:  Unknown
Overview:  He is heavily armored and a die-hard follower of Ira.  He attempts to kill Idola at the beginning of the game.


Crature
Race:  Human
Gender:  Male
Age:  55
Overview:  He comes from the main land and knows Idola.  He helped to try to end the chaos on the main land.  He informs Idola of his information he knows.  (Gonna be main character of second game if this one goes well)

Vale
Race: Elf
Gender: Female
Age:  32
Overview:  Vale is the newest possesion of a deity who just is a conscious.  The diety has no true race and gender.  The age is since the beginning of physical life.


Talma
Race:  Human
Gender:  Female
Age:  24
Overview:  An assassian who works with her twin sister Elly.  They also worked with Dart until they left him.

Elly
Race:  Human
Gender:  Female
Age:  24
Overview: An assassian who works with her twin sister Talma.  They also worked with Dart until they left him

[Prpl_Mage]

You need to upload the gamefile on a site such as rapuidshare.
The game is too big for charas to support.

[Mortalitas]

Thanks its not quite done yet, thanks though it will help when I get to posting the demo

[Nandez]

The Story remind me of A part in Infinite Undiscovery and a bit cliche, but doens't sound too bad.

[Mortalitas]

Current Game demo is located here

http://www.mediafire.com/?vjdwljyzc21

I would be happy to accept comments and insults which I can use to improve the game. 

Btw:  I forgot to take out the cheat in the home town there is a girl who you talk to, dont that is to help me to make sure the switches work.

The demo ends in the Sol Prison

Credit for resources has not yet been posted, please don't get mad if your resources are uncredited I am not there yet