My Song

[Weregnome]

Hey guys. I wrote this song for a game called Mystic Chronciles which Gnomescorp is working on. A m8, of mine is actually making the song (the band is called Just About Done). They said it is sweet. What do u guys think?

Unsolved Destiny by Weregnome (Steven Attwood)

I woke up screaming,
This dream tearing apart my soul.
Is this my fantasy
Or memory never yet known.

I go to you to save me,
Someone to fix this pain,
But instead you gave me something more
Instead you gave me something to attain.


Could this be an answer
To a dream worth fighting for.
For me to seek this answer
Do I go falling out the door?

(Chorus)
This is my anxiety,
An untouched prophecy
So many questions
And millions in-between.
This is my dying hope,
Burning with a cause,
I try to gain it all,
Yet, I don’t foresee the loss.

A candle flickering
In the open wind.
Forgotten way back then
I’ll tell you again.
This is my final story,
Hidden far away from me
But maybe I can tell you, thiiiiiiiis,
My unsolved destiny.


All my hopes seem wasted,
Like a life without a cause.
I've been wondering why you've chosen me,
This all just seems so odd.

Everything around me crumbling, dying,
Rotting, lying,
Though I’m trying.
No one assists me anymore.



The darkest steps are yet to come,
But still I'm holding on,
No ones here to right my wrongs
I’m so frail and yet so strong.


Could this be an answer
To a dream worth fighting for.
For me to seek this answer
Do I go falling out the door?

(Chorus)

Feelings tell me
I'm nearing my final path.
My goal has allowed me
To keep on movin' on,
My friends help me
They help me upon my feet
So I can hold my own
Against the fiend, Who stole it all.
Yet I'm face down on the ground.
All I need is in my grasp,
I thirst for vengeance,
I yearn to fix the past.

Maybe now I've found something...
That's worth dying for!

(solo music)

Could this be an answer
To a dream worth fighting for.
For me to seek this answer
Do I go falling out the door?

(Chorus x2)

All feedback wanted!
 

[Weregnome]

hate to double post but my song is nearly complete. My friend's band Just About Done is making the song!

[WarxePB]

...Wow. You wrote that?
That's just plain incredible.

[Weregnome]

thanx man!

I'm workin on another one at the moment. Its called My Loneliness.

[Weregnome]

btw, double posting again sorry.

By the end of this week i should be getting the song. If anyone wishs a copy, talk to me on my msn.

weregnome2002@hotmail.com

[lonewolf]

men i think your song is cool i dj some times and it be cool
if you mix in some birds and the sea and a lady backing singer
as it make the song cool up thats up to you
keep working on it and you go a long way
there a cd i got by mody it natural bule here is a pic of the cd ok
it on his play cd if you thing on this song
it will  cool  for rpg  game  some one may + in to there music
bye and keep work on some thing new

[Weregnome]

ok thanks man. I'll check out that song as well. U said u dj? If u want when i get a copy u can mix it up if ya want.

[VahnGrave]

Thats a sweet song... If you want to hear my brothers band, Go to www.rebirthmetal.com

[Koganei]

Very very good, Weregnome. It could be a hit.

[Weregnome]

cool thanks guys   .

here is the link to some of the music of Just about Done, the band doing the song.

 Just About Done's Recorded Music