Fantasy Predators

[Vapeteus]

So my game is called Fantasy Predators (i have no idea how the name os related to the game but it sounded kinda cool thought).

Little bit about story:

There's like two main stories at one story.
 At first there's these 7 armies that all wants to find this "Black Rune" that holds amazing powers, but no one has no idea what it looks like or where it is.

Secondary, there's the games main guy Axl who is in journey looking for some kind of treasure with his friend Stad. At one point they engage one of these armies. The leader of this army kills Stad and almost Axl, but he manages to escape. When he's safe, he promises himself that he wont rest until he has revenged his friends death.

So in this little mission of his, Axl gets involved in this whole Black Rune hunting and there just might come couple of big suprises...



That's just the basic stuff about the story, i haven't think about it much cause im just collecting resources... But its a start.

[Saintsword]

Sounds... stereotypical so far.
But hey, don't let me stop you.
It might come out as a good game, hell Chrono Trigger sounded crappy and then it turned out to be one of the 3 best games ever.
Guess I'll have to wait till it's finished to find out.

[Vapeteus]

Well its just the basic line, it can chance a lot in time...

[Saintsword]

Yeah well just dont keep throwing big surprises, remmeber to throw in little surprises so that if poeple arent  payying attendtion they have no idea what's going on. Then they'll keep playing it again to understand it.  Like make a guy turn out to be a girl and then never metion it again.  Because in real life it  noone would really care. Realism (if it's a real word) is important.

[DragonBlaze]

So we have everyone going after this powerful object, and the hero is going off to get revenge. I'm sorry to say, but plots don't get much more cliche than that  

[elementalhero76]

Hmm sounds ok to me.
We'll all see how it comes out as a demo.

[Yhtomitsu]

Sounds good to me, I mean what are most games about now days anyway Revenge, Love, Hate, Trust and Power. Those things make a good game. Taqke Critizism and use it to your advantage. I like the Story keep up with the good work.

[MrMister]

Take Phonics and use it to your advantage.