Hold on Hope

[Drace]

One kingdom that conquered another.
One leader who wants it all.
One army which is superior to all the others.
One force who wants to take over the army.
One group of people who believe in freedom.
One man who tries to achieve it.

This is a story which can remind peopel of WWII.
Story:
The kingdom of Dimosum has a new leader after 30 years of crisis.
This leader builds up the country, give people jobs and rules without a doubt. The people believe that if they follow him they'll ones be the greatest kingdom again. But what they don't know is what there leader, Rahin, wants them to do. After 5 years of getting the country to it's old state he tells people that he can get them more land. They believe him and as his people is behind him he declares war on Strichar, a much smaller neighbour kingdom. They resist but it's all over in 3 days a part of Dimosum now. After this great victory Rahin commands his army to take over the rest of  Lorom, the mainland. All other nations fall under the superior army of Dimosum. Only one country can hold them off, Verrisy. The sqaud under rule of Rodinn wants to take over and rule all themselves. In Strichar the bravest men and old soldiers have gathered and formed a freedom force called Earthquake. One man of Eathquake is Garcer, he believes in the resistance and wants to take it to a new level.

The game has 3 main characters.

The first main character is a normal soldier of Verrisy called Darsiss. He fights against the superior army.

The second is Rodinn. He and his squad have had it with taking orders and are secretly taking over piece by piece.

The third is Garcer and the resistance. He attacks small forces and tries to take back the country.

They name is optional, it can still be changed so post ideas.
I also want to make quest appearance.
Post for which  side you want to fight. Verrisy, Rodinn's sqaud, the resistance or for Dimosum.
A small bio can be usefull but I will change it to fit.

[Shinomori_Aoshi]

Sounds good man. Nice storyline - Out of the different groups you mentioned, I'd be inclined to use Garcer and the resistance becasue of the 'brave old soldier' thing.

[Moosetroop11]

Earthquake...

Avalanche...

Nice plot, what happened in WW2 was strangely RPGish- You wouldn't expect someone like Hitler to exist in real life! Nice name, too.

[Drace]

come on, need a little more comments before i begin or else it's time waisted

[AsakuraHao2004]

Very nice.

Originally posted by Moosetroop11
You wouldn't expect someone like Hitler to exist in real life!

No you wouldn't... no you wouldn't...

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

dude nice story

wich side i would go for:
hmmmm........... garcer

[Drace]

People who know me for a while know that I previouslly had some projects I never even made 1% off.
So in order to make this one work I'm first going to write the story I want, ask comments, change on bad comments and ask again,  chang again on bad comments etc. etc. till it's perfect.
So till the I won't be working on the game yet, I will post the story, probablly hosting it on a site, per chapter excluding the prolugue.
So, I Hold on Hope that I get some more reactions when I post the first chapter. I won't write it 24/7 as I have other things to worry aboet, but I'll work when I have time.