The crystal warriors

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Originally posted by Rune_of_Punishment
A dictionary could be your best friend as well as a grammar book. You could use it... seriously.

Is this all you do? Study writing and then flame people when they arent perfect in grammar?
Wel just 2 pis u off i am gona rite badli....
cause ure starting to piss me off.
Most fo the people here are under 15...(there are alot older also)

And for your game. I want to guess why they are the same age (about 2000)
I think its cause they were born/created at the years when the planet was made or something. and they were imortal or something. Am i right? AM I!?! huh am i?
Or wait. was it because they were crystalized?

[samus the fighter]

all of them really kind of by the way this is me karl im at sams ok

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XD
ok lol

[karl3]

need a chara set of a man who is a lord of an army but like to laugh loves evil fun and is demented he thinks he is the best but he is being used  he is only  a sall fry really so plzz help me

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That guy with the greenish hair would be cool

[karl3]

ok thanks now i need a hmm a mon for him
READ THIS IF YOU WANT TO KNOWW MY INTRO TO MY GAMME:
                         The crystal Warriors
                     
                    Chapter1: The clown’s war

The chirrup of the birds in the sky it was such a beautiful day. But this was to be blunted by the blood shed of a great war between a mighty kingdom and a small battalion

  “King King I report bad news our south defences have been torn by the army of orochimaru” cried the major. “WHAT!! IT CANNOT BEEE!!!!!!” the king yelled “no no it can not be true no I must not be beaten by… by… this clown of a man send all men to the front line now go go !!”He ordered high and mightily. “Yes my king as you wish but may I say that this is a very dangerous idea” he replied. “Look naïve listen as I command!!!” he shouted. “yes yes sir” so the major ordered his men to the front line knowing this will fail and it was basically suicide but he would always be loyal to his king .

  “Right men I want you all to go to the south gate and defend the castle now go do not ask why!” he ordered. “But sir” a soldier said timidly. “Shut up just do as I command it is the will of the KING!” he yelled.
“yes yes sir”. “Well off I go to protect my kingdom and my king” the major solemnly said to him self.

“ARRRRRRRRRR” the soldiers yelled as the clashing of the swords echoed through the forest. “Bwahahahahahaah I can’t believe what they are doing its just plain and utter suicide ahahahahah fools, major blank go do what you do best” The rather odd looking orochimaru joyfully said.
“Yes my lord” he said whiles bowing “yes of course” he said whiles grinning in an evil way. The man named blank ran into the group of soldiers clashing he smashed his fist straight through the skull of a enemy solder then used his body as a whip to smash down other foes.
“Hahahahah I love the feeling of blood on my hands on such a lovely day ahahahahhahahahah” he crazily shouted in the battle field.

“huh what’s  this that man seems so powerful he’s taking out my men with such ease not even I could do that hmm I know what to do” he strangely said. “Elite soldiers!! I want you to help me take out that man there we must use all our strength to take him out you understand” he mightily said. “Yes sir!!” the four elite soldiers replied in a low army type person kind of way.

 The four warriors consisted of a man who used a battle axe and brute strength, a man who used a long halberd and wisdom, another who uses two short swords with speed and a man who used and two handed broad sword and bravery in battle.

 As the five men rushed to attack the major blank of the army of kefka the noticed that there chances where null as what slaughter the mad man had done.

“HAHAHAHAHAH so these fools want to play to ha they will suffer hahaha” blank said cockily. As the first man went to charge him blank pushed his fist straight through the mans arm as the man screamed in agony he went for a blow. As he did this blank flipped behind him grabbed the sword of another one of the elites and ran it through him.
in shock the other one froze in fear blank stared at him then decided to charge him when he did he put his fist in to the mans forehead which killed him in one. The other two went on an all out blitz he tripped one and he landed in to the other blank got his foot and used his feet to brake his neck then he got the elites halberd and stabbed him with a mighty thrust to his head . “Hahahahahah who’s next” he said with superiority.

“I’m next you evil demon arrrrrrrr!!!!” the major Howled. Blank went to hit him but when he did the major put his shield in the way but to his dismay blanks fist pieced it. The major through his shield to the floor and went to hit him but blank kicked him right in the stomach which sent him toppling backwards but he did not go down. “Hahah you’re stronger then I first thought but not enough” blank smirked.

“Why you!” the major screamed in agony. “Its time for you to die now good bye!” blank said despondently. The earth beneath the major began to shake, the major curiously looked down then suddenly a spike out of the ground pieced his entire body leaving him on a spike of earth.

“Hahah he should have known that I can control the element of earth ha pathetic” he said in his pride.

As blank went to go back to his lord orochimaru a soldier jumped out to attack but as the soldier did this blank laughed grabbed his sword and thrusted it straight through the mans stomach.

“Hahahah he thought he could kill me alone ha, o well off to orochimaru I go” he said in a tone still giggling with evil.

“Master what should I do now” he asked his lord. “I want you to go to the caves near the city of crenal and take her with you” orochimaru ordered whiles pointing at a figure in the shadows. “Awww man not her she’s pathetic” he said sarcastically. Then all of a sudden an arrow flew pat blanks ear and shot a soldier right in the middle of his fore head. “Next time I won’t miss” the figure said.

“Eeep yes miss I won’t dishonour you again I’m sorry” he said in a scared tone. “Good now off with you two I can handle this place bwahahahhahahaha” orochimaru crazily laughed.

Blank and the mysterious figure ran in to the distance at high speeds bouncing of the branches of the trees in to the distance of the dark woods.
                                         
                Chapter 2: The mercenaries
                                     
In the castle in the kings quarters “MESSENGER I NEED YOU HELP I WANT YOU TO GATHER THE MOST  POWERFUL MERCANERIES YOU CAN FIND AND I WANT THEM  NOW!!” the king screamed. “Yy…yes sir of of course my lord” the messenger stammered in fear.  So the messenger rushed of to get the mercenaries the king ordered (what was his transport to get there you ask well it was the kings pet dragon hyrax). In a town named melkria not so far from the kingdom there was the bustling of a thriving town children running every where not knowing the trouble going on in the kingdom. But in this town lived the two very mercenaries the king ordered. The sound of dragon wings beating was heard as the messenger landed the dragon on the ground and dismounted. The messenger ran to a small run down house he burst in to see only a man lazing about. “Hey what’s all this about man” the man asked suspiciously. “I’m from the… kingdom I’m here for huh the mercenaries” the messenger gasping for breath barely saying it in a quiet voice. “Well then looks like I’m in business so where’s the place you want me to go?” the man replied in a low voice.
The messenger now gained his breath sarcastically replied “Ye and your funny, now really where’s the mercenary’s your to lazy to be the best ha”. “I mean it I swear I’m the one you need” the man tried to tell him in a pleading voice. “Look I maybe a messenger but…”. The man jumped up grabbed a sword and sliced the chair in half. “So you believe me now” the man cockily said. The man stood out in to the light to show that he was a muscular man with short spiky golden hair and full plated body armour. “My god that was very impressive please come no we need you” the messenger quickly told the man. “Wait wait wait where am I going and don’t you need to know my name?” The man asked.
“Look I’m in a hurry so I’ll tell you, you are going to the castle of nylanda and ok what is your name sir (dam this guys annoying)” the messenger answered and in a frustrated way.

“Good very good well my name is Kai warrior extraordinaire”. Kai proudly said. “Good but what the job?” he said confused.
“I’ll tell you on the way please hurry” the messenger pleaded
“I’ll get my stuff and co-worker we’ll meet you at the dragon” he happily replied.

So off ran kai to his co-workers house. “Go go go gota hurry up quick quick got to get there” he said in a puff. Then he came to a huge and glamorous house. “Uhhhh here I am, quickest yet I think” he said catching his breath. He ran in to the building in to a huge walkway he ran through two rooms to the master’s room and there sat a man with long dark blonde hair with it spiked at the front he wore blue cloths which were very grand for a fighter. “Hey Ryan we gota job!” kai screamed to him. “What wow really because we have not had a job for months” Ryan said in astonishment. “Ya really for nylanda castle” kai said happily. “What we doing then?” Ryan asked curiously. “Well his telling us on the trip he-he” kai said embarrassedly. “Well I hope it is not a death trap” Ryan said in a nervous way. “no of course not now come on and get them daggers of yours and lets go kill people for money!” kai said crazy happily. So Ryan got his daggers and off they went they got told on they way by the messenger but they thought it as nothing.      

But while they were on there way things were looking glum for the king as kefka broke through the defences. “Hahahahahah get out my way fool” kefka laughed whiles killing another soldier. Then he got to the kings court room and there sat the king who looked like he seen a ghost but the king challenged kefka. “Orochimaru ill smite thee!” the king loudly announced to orochimaru. “I accept” orochimaru said darkly. Then all of a sudden orochimaru ran up to the king and threw him to the ground. “This will be your burial ground ha ha ha time to go boom hahahahahhaha
EXPLOSION!” orochimaru roared. Orochimaru raised his arms in to the sky and made the ground beneath the king explode and it blew the king away.
“Bwahahahhahahaha it’s my castle now fool” orochimaru chuckled away.

“Sir Kai and Sir Ryan we are now here” the messenger said
“My god its worse then I thought, look messenger land on the outskirts and go back to melkria ok I don’t want you to get hurt” kai gravely told him. “Yes of course right away sir” the messenger sturdily answered.

When the dragon landed, Ryan and Kai jumped off and ran to the gate way. “Cya later man” kai and Ryan shouted to the messenger. As they went through the gate they saw piles of dead body’s and soldiers every where, as they did not want to cause to much uproar they decided to sneak around the premises all the way up to the entrance to the main castle. “Right here we go I’m going to do this I’m ready nothing can stop me now yes I’m ready” kai said self-assuredly. As kai went to go round the corner he saw hundreds of soldiers. “Awwwww crud! Look at them all look at them!” kai said whiles quivering in fright. “Kai quiet down I got an idea” Ryan whispered quietly to kai. “So what’s the idea” kai said confusedly to Ryan. “Well here it is we sneak up on two soldiers and steal their uniforms its pure gold” Ryan smirked because of his great plan. “Come on man that plan wont work they’ll know were not one of them” kai pointed out to Ryan. “I bet you my half of the wages that they are” Ryan said. “Well ok you’re on and if we die it’s all your fault ok” kai accepted. “Well then lets go” Ryan whispered.


So Kai and Ryan sneaked close to two soldiers on patrol near the gate
They quickly finished them off then got in to the soldiers uniforms.
“Man this helmet stinks and the armour has crumbs in it these guy’s are tramps” Ryan said irritatingly. “Come on Kai” Ryan said trying to pull kai. “No no no we’ll get spotted and get killed” kai said in fear
“Your pathetic man come we won’t die there dumb trust me” Ryan said trying to reassure kai. “Ok ok then” kai said with a shaky tone.

So off the two went in to the middle of kefka’s army.
“Hi guy’s nice day isn’t it” Kai said in a low grunty voice. “Hi man” the soldier said in a high pitched voice. Karl looked pretty shocked by the man’s tone. “(That was unexpected)” kai whispered to Ryan.
So kai and walked up to the entrance to the castle but there where two soldiers in the way and they couldn’t attack them because the whole army would attack them. “Dam man what are we going to do now” kai asked impatiently. “Hmmm let me think now” said. “Come on man hurry up” Kai asked impatiently. “I got it we will go up to them and say that kefka told us to swap places there that dumb they’ll never know hehe” Ryan said in a shady tone. “Good idea lets do it” kai replied.

Kai and Ryan walked up to the two soldiers “Ahem err the lord said that we can take this area for now he said you two need a deserved rest” kai said in a low groundy voice. “Thank you for the info you may take the area to protect” the soldier replied. “Well then let’s go in” Ryan said in a cocky tone.

to much writng arrrr cramp

[karl3]

warning reading all that may kill you




























OF BORDEM DU DU DUUUUUH (the shocked tune in most stupid tv shopws or movies)

[karl3]

i knew it every one scared to read it hahahahha

[samus the fighter]

wahoooo finshed it god.. take a while....
good job karl!


 

[karl3]

thanks buddie

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Quote: ok thanks now i need a hmm a mon for him

Did you mean you need a name?

[karl3]

monster for him plzz

[Leon_1990]

heres the title you wanted Karl

[samus the fighter]

karl says thanks!!

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GJ, nice title!