A Knight Soul

[Meoix]

your not very good at creating things are you?

[Blazingheart]

I am good continuing stories,but noty good with intros and strating stories lol

[Blazingheart]

Ok,I made a little update to the characters:


Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Capable of using Thievery Skills,His Father,Rohan,Was killed In war Fighting Two Demons


Name: Azrael
Age: 28
Weapon: Big Blade
Bio: Companion Of Falco,But after Falco Wielded The Climhazzard,He Leave`d Him and Went His own way,He become`s A Pretty good Friend of Blaze


Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Childhood Best A Friend Of Blaze,they got separated when a Demon Attacked Irassia Village


Name: Kiro
Age: 24
Weapon: Dunno,What do you think he could use?
Bio: A Bounty Hunter Who twice tried to kill Blaze,His Reasons are Discovered Within the Game,

What do oyu think about this Character update?

[InsaneJP]

thats better but still you can do better with the bios

[Blazingheart]

Ok,I iwll try,But what do you think Could Kiro Use as Weapon?

[Blazingheart]

Ok,I made a new update to the Characters,Kiro`s bio will stay as it is



Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Blessed By The Wind God,Atlanta,He is Capable of using Thievery Skills,His Father,Rohan,Was killed during war by Fighting two Demons,He Was Born and Lived 12 Years on Irassia,at 12 Years he gont on journey to Windrad to Train.Actually,He has 20 Years and wants to prove his skills on the arena.


Name: Azrael
Age: 28
Weapon: Big Blade
Bio:Falco`s Companion,But After Falco Wield`s the Climhazzard,
Azrael Decides to get his own path,At born,he got separated by his parents,at 7 years,He was adopted by Greg in Jurid and lived there,when he got 20 Years,Became Falco`s Companion and Travelled with him 8 Hard years.


Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Childhood Best A Friend Of Blaze,they got separated when a Demon Attacked Irassia Village,his father also Died in Battle,Helping Rohan.Ray Went to Hirim Ice Mountains to Train With His Sensei: Oroku


Name: Kiro
Age: 24
Weapon: Dunno,What do you think he could use?
Bio: A Bounty Hunter Who twice tried to kill Blaze,His Reasons are Discovered Within the Game.

[Trueform Darkside]

I think the story's progressing well.
Keep up the good work; heres a list of potential weapons you could use:

shurikens
axes
swords
daggers
whips
boomerangs
clubs/maces
staffs
wands
scythes
bows & arrows
knuckles

[Blazingheart]

I changed totally the story again,I will post it in a new thread

[Dragonium]

Try inventing your own weapons. Your game will be a whole lot better if there are weapon which haven't been seen before.

Your character bios are better now. Add a little more detail, and they'll be 100%.

[Blazingheart]

As I said,I iwll reopen a new thread showing the new story