Demon Gate: Road to a hero

[Sera Avira]

Charecters
Zreyl Fadred
Age: 17
Height 5"5
Background: Not a bad, kid always seen teaching younger kids, lives in a poor family, with his mom.
Keo Tahar
Age: 24
Height: 6'1
Backround: A auron, of the 14th century inspirational, and tough.
His family, are all deceased (dead) he lives alone in a dark, world with Zreyl
Lance Boldenheart
Age: 17
Height 5'6
Backround: A gunslinger, a outlaw, and a pysic!?!?!? HE lived a life of crime, and is now banished to hell if he can't comit 199 good deads within 5 years
Freya Holds
Age: 17
height 5'4
Background: She's a babe, she wears amour much like shadee from prince of persia 2, is a Veira, and uses a bow
Plot: You serve the king, in your first mission, wile fighting Captain black your knocked, off to a strange island, not on any map, further in it's forest you find a magic gate, able to take you to other worlds, Demon worlds
Help with:
Lance's Charset, he wears a tan overcoat with black inside and blue pants, and has red hair
Lance's Battleset: read aboe ^
Freya's Charset: She wears Shadee ( from rince of persia 2) amour, has brown hair and bunny ears ( she's a veira)
Castle tileset ( roman kind) Castle tileset ( old roman kind, cracked and stuff)  modern tileset ( BBQs, pools thats waht i mean) A monster form of each battlecharecter, thats all i need so far PLZ help
 

[NightGlider]

Perhaps you can give a little more to the plot like what he can do in the other realms or he accidentaly overhears a plan from the demons or some other realm that they are going to take over or something. Other than that I see that this is probably your first game, try thinking in the story line first rather than going and immediately looking for graphics and resources.
If you put effort in this game, maybe it'l turn out to be good eh?

[Sera Avira]

He learns from, the Dakai ( an empire, of comunist chinese) prophecy, once the gate is open it never closes, he swaeras to protect the people from the demons, until it came...... Sonurai a huge solar demon, hald the size of the state building emerges, he's screwed, but with another prophecy he find a sword, that started the world, the ikaitzi. I thouhgt out this whole plot before i started, i've started other games but never had enough resources for it to look good.. [SHADOW]Thanks, for the hope, the commitment, and thank you for the bologna sandwich[/SHADOW]