Magna Field part 1:: Power Nine

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Okay, scince a lot of games i've trided over the past year havn't been all that great, except Dream Maker, which is on hold, but now i;'ve look at my 5 part movie seris (Lasa-Gina) and i've diside to create a franchise. Magna Field will be a 3 part game based 75 years after Lasa-Ginas end.

for those who aren't firmiliar wit the movies, the first line of the first movie says: 75 Years later. however it is not revealed until later exactly what that means.

STORY:

On Planet Omicron, therr is a secret underground force planning on ravageing the world with a mutative power, known as Power Nine. THe becan that was going to guide this power to the planet was ment to be placed into a single life form, omething that could be kept track of. The becan was accidently split into two brothers, Tetgaia and his brother (Name pending) now have addapted the 9 powers of this force, and these powers will be spread around those that they come in contact with.

Charecters

TETGAIA
Power: Valor- Swift battle, and strength with melle weapons.
Age:: 17
Weapon:: Sword
BIO:: His agression is what causes him to take on the Valor power. Greeveing over the murder of his parents for years, his anger finaly let out.

(Name Pending)
Power: Mystic- emense magic casting abbilities.
Age:: 26
Weapon:: Moonology
BIO:: After his parents murder, he raised Tetgaia from his child hood. His power of Moon Magic has always been small, until his half of the becan granted him stronger spells.

More info later, i hope.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Heres a peek at the first town, not much yet.

[oooog]

It's a nice start, but I'm not going to lie, it needs a little work.  But, you said "more info later", that could be what is missing.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Yeah, i'm planning on there being 9 playable charecters, each with one of the 9 Powers. so its kinda like a Marvel FF game.

[DragonBlaze]

Is it just me, or is there supposed to be houses in a town :p, if you add some houses it'll look fine.

Your story is fine, but it dosen't have that "great" aspect to it, so I'd say its about average. You can't really tell how a game will be though untill you actually play it

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Sorry, its  just the entrence to the town. i'm finding out how retarded the mac and blue map sets are as far as maps go,exactly waht is that weird mettal bar thingy for?