please don't yell or scold me

[Bart_Fatima]

Here is a Idea for a game look at what I have....how does this sound

Chance is an excellent Jazz Musician. He goes to the Jazz Club called 'Blue' every day and plays his music. On a tuesday evening, he meets Maria Davis, a beautiful blonde haired women. They go out to eat and spend nights together and mornings together. Then one day, Seraph, Chance's old friend who is a member of the same Syndicate Maria secretly works for called Fallen Angels tells Chance that she is his and that his life is the price for messing with her. Seraph shoots the unexpected Chance and tosses his body into the New York river. Drifting endlessly, Chance ends up on an island where he meets an old Hermit named Lone Wolf who recovers Chance's wounds and tell him his future that two men shall duel for the fate of a loved one and neither will survive. Not believeing a word he says, Chance leaves returns to his home. Once there he finds Maria in bed waiting for him. Remembering what Seraph told him, he tells maria it wont work out for them and she tells him she loves Chance and not Seraph. that night Maria is called away and she goes to Heaven's Door, the Fallen Angels hideout in an abandonned area. Chance doesn't have a clue that she is going to meet Seraph for a mission to assassinate Chance since one of his men saw Maria enter his appartment and later saw Chance enter it...and neither does Maria. Once there Maria is told and she tells Seraph nothing happened, Chance over hears the conversation and finds a pistol and waits for the ime to strike. Maria is then running from Seraph when a guard hits her to the ground. Chance jumps out and shoots the guy. Seraph laughs and guards sworm out to attack Chance. Chance and maria escape and the whole Fallen Angels group is sent to find and kill Chance. Seraph waits for the oppurtunity to find the man and kill him....


Chance
Age:28
Weapon: Colt 45 XCalibre


Maria
Age:27


Seraph
Age:30
Weapon: Shotgun


I am working on Chance right now..here is what I have so far

[maxine]

then you need modern chipsets if its in NY.. And DUDE this was the most hard text too even hold on.. Many maria did and then chance and then maria lol ... But good luck with it. Seems pretty modern styled

[Bart_Fatima]

thanks you like it....was it really complicated or you got it?

[maxine]

i got it.. Will the whole game be placed in NY.. The actuall escape thingy??.. If i made this game i would have too be real smart too make it last long

[Bart_Fatima]

everything is in NY. I will last long..You meet more people which will be posted later along with picture....you will have to escape to a safe haven and then once ready attack Seraph and then end of the game

[maxine]

hmmm sounds interesting.. You could add me by msn ---> uglykidjohnny@hotmail.com if you use msn... Then i could talk too you about it and give some ideas and help you if i can... I like the idea of the game.

[Darkfox]

Isn't that a picture of Spike from Cowboy Beebop?

[Bart_Fatima]

maybe
*runs away as fast as he can*

[Darkfox]

And that guy from Wolf Rain... <.< or is that Pegasus from Yu-Gi-Oh?

[Bart_Fatima]

no all the above are from cowboy bebop

[Darthcourt]

Yep.
Spike the most noticable of the group.

[Bart_Fatima]

......DOES ANYONE HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY ABOUT MY STORY!

[chocobomaster09]

yeah its pretty good, nice story, but it will be hard making all of that stuff, well for me. Good luck on it man!

[Darkfox]

It sounds errily familiar if you ask me... if he actually died and was brough back as a zombielike thing I'd swear it would sound quite a bit like Gungrave.

[Bart_Fatima]

ooo gungrave i love the game...never seen the show or know the story