The Dark Knight

[neb87]

*(Beta-Versin1.0)* http://www.megaupload.com/?d=3UL8PJJ6
Name:The Dark Knight
Platform:RPG Maker 2003
Plot: You are a leader of ruthless knights called the Dark Knights, you try to destroy the central and eastern opposing empires, you sucessfully destroy the eastern empire and make camp to get ready for the attack on the central empire. You are attacked by mysterices knights and are defeated but you live, then you have a flash back off your dad the (old leader of the The dark knights) being attacked but he wins and your father trys to find them. So you sent to live with your unlce.  So you are on a mission to get revenge on these knights and maybe find your father. You will meet various charters and lands but this will be a difficult journey.
 OTHER
CMS MENU
 -With Char Bios and History
 -In game Timer
Arena Battle trainer
Bank System
 
              Characters

Name:Lord NEB
Leader of the Dark Knights
Weapons:Swords,Spears,Axes,
Special Abilties:None that has not been discovered yet
Sex:Male
Neb is impatient and dosen't show mercy but cares for his allies greatly.
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name:Watson
sex:male
class:dark knight(soilder)
Weapons:Swords, and bows
History: Watson grow up with Neb when they where kids after Neb's dad disapered. Neb came to live with his unlce which is watsons neighbor.
Personality: Loyal,doesn't like to be ruthless but will be to show respect for neb, patient.
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Name:Fredrick
Sex:male
Class: Dark Knight(Genral)
Weapons:two-handed swords/axes, axes, swords
History: Fredrick is Lord Neb's loyal bodyguard for ten years hired by his unlce after Neb was attacked.
Personality:Very Loyal, More ruthless then neb but patient and a good leader.
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name-Fargis
sex;male
class;dark lord
weapons;staffs
history;unknow
skill;dark magic
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[Linkizcool]

I like the GFX, even if you are useing the DBS. Keep it up!

[nutter]

count me in

[Moosetroop11]

Looks interesting, I think.

[shadus]

Looks good since I've last seen it.But 8is there going to any that isn't a dark somthing that joins the party?

[ZeroKirbyX]

I'd use another font for the names.

[Jester401]

Looks very cool, I look forward to the demo

[ZeroKirbyX]

Originally posted by neb87
trying to look for a good white text

Then make it. Just download font, type up name, save as png, import, viola.

It's not rocket science. And I'd know if it was because we'd have all kasploded by now.

[chocobomaster09]

Looks very nice. Keep it up.

[Leon_1990]

Harder to read ^^"

[shadus]

Also Neb dosn't look so good now.

[neb87]

Demo on first post...^
Updated cms menu..|
Has in game timer....|.....Now!!

[neb87]

Got a new screenie of a map am working on


--So hows the new text?

_-_-_-AND Did Anybodie Play My Game The Demo IS UP!!!!!

[Meiscool-2]

That map needs love. Lots and lots of love. Perhaps some pity too.

[coasterkrazy]

Originally posted by neb87
_-_-_-AND Did Anybodie Play My Game The Demo IS UP!!!!!

I played it. All I can say is... well... it needs work. Your maps are pretty bland. I especially noticed that with the castle. Also, if the beginning is just supposed to be the dark knights attacking and destroying, at least make the battles easy then. I found that all I could do was attack, and so that's all I did, and I ended up dying... so yeah, try to work on those things. Also, maybe try replacing all the RTP that you used. You don't have to if you wanted to use it, but otherwise I'm sure you can find things in the complete resources and other places on the web. With a little work, I think this could be a nice game. Keep working on it.