Souls of Eternity

[CoolZidane]

I am Laz'rus, risen from the grave. Yes, I'm back.

Anyways, my friend and I are working on a new game, "Souls of Eternity."

The game is about young man, Adam, as he and others fight to prevent evil of the present to repeat the future.

It starts with Adam and his friend, Carlos, as they go to sell a diamond (nothing special about it) in a nearby town. However, after being mugged by bandits, they meet a cleric named Elena. She is delivering medicine to the town of Nekido. They stay at the Inn of Nekido, but are awoken during the night by an argument in the lobby. Two mysterious men, Xerve and Pomades, are searching for a rogue mage. Adam drives them away, but the heroes are left with questions: Who are those two? Who is the rogue mage? Why are they looking for the mage?

Find out in Souls of Eternity.

Characters:


Adam
Age: 21
Sex: Male
Bio: The hero of the game, he is sometimes reckless, but he knows to stick up for his friends

Carlos
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Bio: Adam's best friend

Elena
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Bio: Cleric who is often able to stand her ground (but not always)

Zalo
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Bio: A man skilled in various arts who has learned from Sudhir, a Wise Man who knows more than he tells

Alexander
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Bio: The leader of the Danias (Adam's hometown) Malitia, he is somewhat stubborn, but knows how to work with a team

Grace
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Bio: A travelling summoner, she is clumsy, but still a good fighter

Inox
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Bio: A monk from the Temple of the Elders, he longs to see the world.



The character descriptions are sketchy, but I'm not the best at describing characters without spoiling the story.


By the way, this thread has music (written by me) that is featured in the game:

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=15838&forumid=30&catid=6

[DragonBlaze]

I'm sorry to say, but just one line on the story is not nearly enough for anyone to really even know what your game is about and what it'll be like. So yeah, you should really include a lot more info.

[shadus]

Originally posted by DragonBlaze
I'm sorry to say, but just one line on the story is not nearly enough for anyone to really even know what your game is about and what it'll be like. So yeah, you should really include a lot more info.

[Robotam]

Please shadus, try to use your own words sometimes.

[Bluhman]

Yeah, geez, you silly yes-man!

Anyway... Yeah. We'll need more info to make a statement on your game, unless this game is very early on into creation...

[shadus]

Originally posted by Robotam And edited by Shadus
Shadus!For crap sake try use your own F****** words sometimes!OMB!

ok.

[CoolZidane]

I've revised the plot information.

[Weerd Thing]

So far, the plot is interesting, but there's still not enough info to give us a fresh idea on what the game will be like, at least in my opinion. Try putting in some background info (about the world they live in, beings that live in the world, etc.)

Other than that, I hope this game will flourish into greatness!

W££rd

[Leon_1990]

thank god the heroes are over 20....

[DragonBlaze]

Originally posted by Weerd Thing
So far, the plot is interesting, but there's still not enough info to give us a fresh idea on what the game will be like, at least in my opinion. Try putting in some background info (about the world they live in, beings that live in the world, etc.)

Other than that, I hope this game will flourish into greatness!

W££rd

Yeah I agree.

Though I do believe your game does start off good

 

thank god the heroes are over 20....

Yeah thats nice. In most cultures being 18 is considered an adult, so I wouldn't mind anyone that age. But yeah, its nice to see a game withough a bunch of heros being 14 -17, which I'm starting to see a lot.

[CoolZidane]

Originally posted by Leon_1990
thank god the heroes are over 20....

One main motivation for it was the constant use of teens as heroes. Another motivation was that the hero wakes up with a hangover. So, to create an excuse, we made Adam 21.

[shadus]

Well if all game makers where Jewish 13 be the age of adulthood.
But 13 is rather young and dosn't make good hero.In most FF's they make the hero 17 to 23 years old Excpt in ff4 where he was a old guy in his 40's.That's what he looked like any way.

[Leon_1990]

Ummm, Cecil was 20, one year younger than kain, how you thought he was around 40 is beyond me.

[Bluhman]

Now I agree; ages 20-30 is a good range, but, well, It's rahter a small range. I mean, Almost all of your characters are near the age of 21. Not that you have to change it, it just seems that the majority of characters are in a very tight age range.

[CoolZidane]

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