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Offline Shadowless1

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« on: April 17, 2006, 08:32:55 PM »
Story:
---------unknown time = beyond the sky-------------
The 13 star signs were assigned to the planet Zanereth's humans....
to guard and provide them with unique personalities....
they were
Aquarius,Aries,Cancer,Capricorn,Gemini,Leo,Libra,Pisces,Sagitarius,Scorpio,Taurus,Virgo
an another named Ophiuchus, the 13th and youngest one

As life prospered each sign decided on its speciallity in personallities
Opiuchius, the young one, who jealously wanted a higher position due to his
enourmous power put an
evil spawn upon a human.... dubbed as "the first"
the spawn quickly spread throughout the world....
making each human an evil side in their heart....

when the other 12 signs saw what Ophiuchus had done
they sealed him off with thier combined powers
but the knew that somday the seal would break...

they could not destroy Ophiuchus because his powers were far greater than there own,
but all they needed to destroy him....
was a human with an evil side to there heart.... that could compleatly control the
dark side of his heart!

------------125 ZD = planet earth----------
the hero awakens....

Screenshots:
http://www.charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=15971&forumid=6&catid=4


Characters:
Name:Jasper
Gender:Male
Age:24
BIO:(coming soon)

More characters coming soon

thats all so far
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« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2006, 08:45:06 PM »
Sky rocketing with 'Cliche-ness' but I kind of like it. The CBS doesn't look too bad, either.

I'm feeling a mixed vibe of Legend of Gaia and... D*mn what was that other celestial type game?...
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« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2006, 08:45:57 PM »
can you tell me whats cliche about it?
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« Reply #3 on: April 17, 2006, 08:56:19 PM »
By the evil being locked away, which at some point in the game it will be released, right? Very Cliche. Also the 'great protectors of the world and there being a certain number of them? Cliche as well. Although, the fact that they're the Celestial signs kind of cancels out that... 'The Hero awakes...' I won't even tell you how that's cliche.

Just the whole 'The one who wasn't given his chance had a hissy-fit and created masses of evil' is just really done so many times by so many oter people...

Also, kind of tearing off a part of Kingdom Hearts there with the 'darkness in people's hearts' thing.


Now, cliche is not a horrible thing. It's d*mn-near imposible to avoid. But you asked how it was cliche and I told you, so don't be coming back with an ***hole responce... Saying I'm wrong or what ever.

Have any non-combat screenshots?
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« Reply #4 on: April 17, 2006, 08:58:34 PM »
um, i didn't get that from kingdom hearts, plus who cares if its cliche its a different and possibly unique story to others that have used simmular things
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« Reply #5 on: April 17, 2006, 09:00:36 PM »
Why are you getting so pissy? I said I liked it, eh...
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« Reply #6 on: April 17, 2006, 09:25:41 PM »
i wansnt getting pissy if i was i would of used " !!!!!! "          thanks
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« Reply #7 on: April 17, 2006, 09:29:07 PM »
'Truly, if there is evil in this world, it lies within the hearts of men.'
Anyone remember that phrase?
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« Reply #8 on: April 17, 2006, 09:42:39 PM »
No, no. You were getting pissy.
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« Reply #9 on: April 17, 2006, 09:47:06 PM »
heh... I helped you write that =P
give credit where credit is due =[

Maybe it got a little effected by KH   :sweet:
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« Reply #10 on: April 17, 2006, 10:59:25 PM »
i see, sorry for not giving credit , i mustve forgot,
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« Reply #11 on: April 17, 2006, 11:20:42 PM »
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Originally posted by RPG LORD
'Truly, if there is evil in this world, it lies within the hearts of men.'
Anyone remember that phrase?

Only because it was at the start of Tales of Phantasia..
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« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2006, 01:41:33 AM »
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um, i didn't get that from kingdom hearts, plus who cares if its cliche its a different and possibly unique story to others that have used simmular things


Being cliche means its something that isn't original. While the story may be original, the actual concept isn't. Personally, I especially don't like the particular cliche of a bad guy being sealed away. The moment you mention it, you're giving away an event a lot later in the game. Anyone can figure out that if you say "a great evil has been sealed away" that you're going to go out and try to stop this evil from being released, of course, it'll get released and you'll have to fight it.

Other than that though, your game sounds pretty good :)
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« Reply #13 on: April 19, 2006, 01:47:03 AM »
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Originally posted by RPG LORD
'Truly, if there is evil in this world, it lies within the hearts of men.'
Anyone remember that phrase?

Only because it was at the start of Tales of Phantasia..


Wasn't that one: If there is evil in this world, then it lies within the hearts of man?

I just bought it for the GBA, so I'm pretty sure that's what it was. Not like it matters though.
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« Reply #14 on: April 19, 2006, 02:30:03 AM »
 Lookit!

Its an entire wiki page of quotes about evil and its on there. XD
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