~Screenshot Central~

[aboutasoandthis]

Please don't mind Meis.

The problem with that screen is that there isn't enough to criticize. With criticism, it's supposed to be a slight tweak. The map could use a total overhaul, no offense.

If it helps, here is an excellent mapping tutorial by yours truely. Page three especially should help you with that chipset. It is also a good idea to go back through the screenshot topic for some ideas.

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=14984&forumid=29&catid=6&page=1

[RPG noob]

Thanks

[Meiscool-2]

Damn that's old.

But yeah, you've got a lot of negative space that you need to fill... and not just random here-ya-go-happy? filling, more like holy-****-there's-a-big-cool-thing filling.

[ZeroKirbyX]

By the way, protip: saying "it sucks" about a map isn't flaming. Just lettin yeh know.

[RPG noob]

Sorry, I just referred to this.

 

~Rules~     1. No Flaming   - When criticizing someone's game in a negative way, you must follow this one rule: State Why In other words, negative feedback toward the game must be backed up by reason. If you just post "Sorry, but your game sucks." then the post will be deleted, because it is considered a flame toward the maker's game. Any flaming or bashing of a person's game, the person making the game or another user in the thread is strictly forbidden and will result in your post being deleted.

Anyway enough about that.  From what most people have said I figure filling most of the space with cliffs and different terrain would mainly do the trick so I'll post another edit in a few days.

[Meiscool-2]

Dudes.... he is right, I was flaming him.

Or she is right, cuz guys have balls and don't cry a lot.

[RPG noob]

 

Dudes.... he is right, I was flaming him.

 

 

[ZeroKirbyX]

I still say those rules aren't right. Saying your map sucks, which it.does, isn't flaming. Saying you suck is, but saying the map does isn't.

[MrMister]

It's some Important Tree

[Fortet]

Holy crap! MrMister?!
Anyways, looks nice. But something about the plateau under the tree that seems a bit strange...

[Red Fox]

I recognize the chara from pixeljoint. Anyway good work looks nice.

[MrMister]

Is that some kind of weapon?!?


It's a Goblin Bitch!

[Meiscool-2]

I love the top one. The bottom one could use less bllllllack

[Moosetroop11]

I really want to have a play of that game once you've got a fair amount done. It looks great.

[ThexXtremeXx]

is this thread only for maps?because i have an intro for my game..