the journey

[ancara]

story:

   Fare is a boy who is also a great boxer.  He has beaten every opponent that he has fought.  He also loves science.  He was working on a new invention: a teleporter that can take you anywhere.  One day, during a thunderstorm, a flash of lightning hit the invention while he was working on it, not only teleporting him, but everybody else he knows and loves, to a strange land.  he finds that he is in his boxing outfit, and that anyone who is in this land does get strange powers.  He decides to go around this strange land to find his friends and family.



Characters:

Fare:  a boy who is a skilled boxer and a lover of science.  he uses various boxing skills to defeat enimies.

Poa:  Fare's best friend, who is skilled with the knife.  He can use various materials around him to create elemental attacks to defeat foes.

Tola:  a girl that will do anything to win Fare's heart.  He uses medicines and scrolls to heal others.

Evert:  the school bully.  never make him angery.  He has found how to use powerful weapon to kick the crud out of people and monsters.

King rain:  the ruler of this mysterious land.  he has a good sense of humor and can cheer you up.  he has a strange past.

Hooded man:  little is known about him.  He only fears the king, for some reason.


gameplay:  

basicly, the world is divided into 5 elements: fire, water, earth, wind, and light.  each element cancels each other out.  each monster is weak & is also strong against a certain element.  


Bosses:

there will be more than 40 bosses total.  each will be harder than the last.  Each one will require a certain strategy to overcome.  figure that stategy out and you will win every time.


if anybody would like to help me with this or give me suggestions to make this game better, post here or PM me, ok?

[jynce]

it sounds nice but the theme plot is kinda cliche maybe without his bocxing uniform would be better but other then that i would like to see screenshots

[PyroAlchemist]

Not really. Boxing character is pretty new. But you should make specifics on the story some. Why would a bunch of firends and family get sent also when he is the only one at the teleporter? What are the weird powers that they get? Give it more depth and it might be a good story.

[blaze_shinigami]

I'd guess that the whole house was effected.

and lightining and teleporters are cliche, but still go with it; it isn't a commercial game. I want to see some characters.

[Bluhman]

Not bad, Though i'm a bit baffled at how Light is cancelled out.

A boxing character, eh? Quite unique.

As far as problems go, listen to Blazer.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Originally posted by blaze_shinigami
it isn't a commercial game.

Actually, most commercial games nowadays a chock full of cliches.

[Zerlina]

I don't really understand...why would a boxer one day decide to build a teleporter? Maybe there's exceptions but boxers aren't known for their intelligence.
I dunno, but here's my suggestion- what if he acquires the plans somehow (maybe he fought someone and that was all they had so he took it as a prize). And then he decides to build it, because there's a place he's always wanted to go (use your imagination here and think of a reason why).

[darkrune]

Maybe make him like not a boxer, but a fight club man, or somthing along those lines, a Scientific Boxer is cool, just weird, maybe a fighter who is also intrested in how things work? I like it though, it's origonal.

[ancara]

if you wanted to see the graphics of some of the characters, here they are:


Tola


Poa


Fare


Evert


There they are.  Enjoy!

[ZeroKirbyX]

No, just... no. You have a Fire Emblem, PL, RM2K load screen and Roco faces. Don't mix and match those four styles. It will look like crap in a conversation.

[ancara]

i chose this so i'm using it.  so there.  Nyah!

[Meiscool-2]

Yeah, take that ZKX, Nyah!

[ZeroKirbyX]

Oh, you sured showed me. I'll never criticise your choice in faces again. Of course, its gonna look like crap, but its up to you.

[Ryos4]

Hey you using a character i made. lol. The character tola, i made a while back, with the exclamation point on her back.  Atleast someones getting some use out of it.

[Ruler of the Dark]

Just thought that I'd point out that Tola's charset doesn't match Lyn's face at all.

And for fare, where's the visor thing on the charset?  You could ask someone to edit it for you.