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Originally posted by coreystranickWell, hmm Gary did add alot but you won't have to change you guy all that much just edits of what is aready tere.The shoes are bad, maybe if you angled the right(our left) foot up just alittle it wouldn't look weird. I like the sword due to its originality and it has gotten better since the first one. An eebrow wouldn't hurt either. I suppose he is mad due to the fact he is fighting so add one that is angled with his eye(look at attachement). Oh and the hand that is up in the air look a tad too big for his wrist. As for muscle, just add alittle outline for his pecs, even if he eats ramen noodles(which I love eating I have ate them I was about 8 also) he would still have little muscle from leraing how to handle a blade.
Originally posted by Garyquote:Originally posted by coreystranickWell, hmm Gary did add alot but you won't have to change you guy all that much just edits of what is aready tere.The shoes are bad, maybe if you angled the right(our left) foot up just alittle it wouldn't look weird. I like the sword due to its originality and it has gotten better since the first one. An eebrow wouldn't hurt either. I suppose he is mad due to the fact he is fighting so add one that is angled with his eye(look at attachement). Oh and the hand that is up in the air look a tad too big for his wrist. As for muscle, just add alittle outline for his pecs, even if he eats ramen noodles(which I love eating I have ate them I was about 8 also) he would still have little muscle from leraing how to handle a blade.Hehehe maybe is a little much but he wanted clear honest critique. So I pointed out everything I though needed fixing.
Originally posted by coreystranickquote:Originally posted by Garyquote:Originally posted by coreystranickWell, hmm Gary did add alot but you won't have to change you guy all that much just edits of what is aready tere.The shoes are bad, maybe if you angled the right(our left) foot up just alittle it wouldn't look weird. I like the sword due to its originality and it has gotten better since the first one. An eebrow wouldn't hurt either. I suppose he is mad due to the fact he is fighting so add one that is angled with his eye(look at attachement). Oh and the hand that is up in the air look a tad too big for his wrist. As for muscle, just add alittle outline for his pecs, even if he eats ramen noodles(which I love eating I have ate them I was about 8 also) he would still have little muscle from leraing how to handle a blade.Hehehe maybe is a little much but he wanted clear honest critique. So I pointed out everything I though needed fixing.True, I jsut think he is a bit surprised but all that you have found worng, I tired to help give him alittle bit more clear examples on some stuff that you hve said. If he puts your critque and some of my stuff together he could make a pretty good character.