Scarlet Hall

[Lighting Half Dozen]

S C A R L E T + H A L L

In the age of magic and witchcraft, an evil warlord, Shazmardei, cast a plauge of strife and war across the land. One witch, Lumena Rena,  stood up against him and set the world free. But before long, she had left on another venture, and returned with a child. A boy of eight, named Murai.

However, it is almost unheard of for a witch to have a son, and thus she hid him with a trustworthy family. She died that very day.

Ten years later, a skilled magician as he was, Murai was unable to protect the women that he loved, Velinda, from the evil Sony Daioh orginization.

With nothing but an old spear fighter for wisdom and the sword that had been his mother's, Murai embarks on a quest to destroy the orginization and recover his beloved Velinda.


MURAI RENA
Age: 18Weapon: Sword
Class: Sorcerer (Spells and Skills)
BIO: He was raised by his grandfather and found by his mother after his grandfather passed away. She gave him her bellm to wear, and then left him on the steps of a Shammar home at the age of eight. He grew up learning to use a sword as well as common simple spells that most humans could do.



JULIAN WHITESAIL
Age: 38 Weapon: Spear
Class: Warrior (Skills)
BIO: A long time friend of Murai. He is a skilled hunter and fighter. He is oblivious when it comes to magic, but does that the abbility to amplify his physical atributes. he helps Murai get through many hardships along thier quest.


VANESSA TRYVOKA
Age: 17 Weapon: Staff
Class: Pathmage (Non Elemental Spells)
BIO: An old childhood friend of Murai. She had gone off to learn magic in a far away city. After fighting the orginization, she sets off on her own quest to fight Kafaread. On the way her path crosses with Murai and Julian once, and then again when the three team up perminantly.


VEMIR
Aage: 61 Weapon: Crossbow
Class: Squire (Skills and some spells)
BIO: A tigrian from a wasteland city. He is an old friend of Julian and a skilled marksmen. He has seen many battles and has thus picked up many skills. He can also use his tiger like body to rip and tare at his enemies.


S C R E E N + S H O T S


Murai walks to the City of Shammar by taking the path from his house.


The potion shop is like sorceror grocery store.


A lady gaurd rests at her post to protect all in need.


Murai waits at the big lake near the mansion.

[drenrin2120]

The way you worded it was odd. I kinda had to decode. May wanan fix that. Other than that, pretty interesting. Of course, anything can be interesting with a good writer. Can't wait to see where this goes. goodluck!

[Lighting Half Dozen]

i did some editing and posted an understandable story. also, lookin for a poet!

[drenrin2120]

Not bad. Oh, and I wrote some poetry. I'd be up for some writing. Plus, I could write a little ditty to go along with it if you'd like, something folk-like.

[Dragoon de Sol]

I can do poetry for you.
If you need a samle of my work,
I have AIM, Yahoo, AND MSN, so take your pick.

AIM: Wing Guardian 11
YM: VoidSlayer11
MSN: Winged-Guardian

[aboutasoandthis]

...I am lovin' this storyline. I'd like to see this one worked on. You gonna use that advice I gave you?

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Yeah, i've got about everythign planned out, but i was so excited i posted the charecters.

[DragonBlaze]

 

the evil Sony Daioh orginization

Sony evil? Never  

The story isn't bad. I think this could turn out to be a good game

[Lighting Half Dozen]

yeah i'm trying to rename them, but "group" names are always hard for me. :sigh:

[Meiscool-2]

Sain Daioh. See, that was easy.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

New screen shots. Woohoo!

[Shadowless1]

looks and sounds quite nice, you might want to edit them a bit tho to make edges not look so flat and straight.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Well the lines around some parts of the town look flat because even thought you guys don't see those anywhere, the people of Scarlet Hall do.

[Meiscool-2]

I'd suggest distorting the path a little bit. Make the dirt path sorta wavy and unconnected in some places.



See how in that screen the white rocks are the path, but they arn't connected in the red circles? That's what I mean about distorting it.

Other then that, looks fine.