the legend of rirue

[drenrin2120]

To Omega: I suggest writing your story down in MSWord or whatever you have and saving it. Not only will it help you keep track of where your story is going and suppose to go as opposed to remembering it all in your head, it will also always be there fro when you need to explain it to someone or during a thread about your game. Plus, spellcheck will become your best friend.

To Jek: Yeah... [GLOW]that[/GLOW] [GLOW]it[/GLOW] [GLOW]does... [/GLOW]

[omegarirue]

lol thx drenrin2120

[omegarirue]

k every body i have got a raputation for being the worst speller
ever.so starting now im gonna slow down

[coreystranick]

I didn't bother reading due to your lack of correct garmmar. but You need to work on that and what everyone else has said. Also show some screens. Since you have a beginning written up shouldn't you atleast have some type of intro done?

You could even upload a picture of you whole map for the beginning.

Ohh, it is also reputation not raputation. Just get some screens up and fix the holes in you story and I will tell you what I think of it.

[omegarirue]

lol well here is a screen of one of my maps in the game.
it is the temple of crstalia.

[neb87]

Too grassy

[omegarirue]

lol ill fix that

[omegarirue]

here i fixed the guy to the wrong person was in thhat map.also a moved some trees around

[drenrin2120]

I'm guessing this is your first project with rm2k/3. Here's a tip when mapping. Try and layer your grass effects. If the chipset you are using has more than one color grass tile, than use the lighter one as a base and spread the dark one around semi-randomly on top. Such as here:



Notice the multilayer of tiles? Plus, if you have any kind of shrubbery besides trees or matching objects in a charaset, take advantage of them. Also, broken pieces of the path I find can add a more realistic look, too.

[omegarirue]

k thats sweet.this is my first real game with it.thanks ill rember that

[DragonBlaze]

Its not that you're a bad typer, it's that you're a lazy typer. Pressing the spacebar to seperate the period from the next sentance, using the shift key to capatolize letters, using the tab key to seperate paragraphs. No one is going to get mad at you for misspelling some words, thats an honest mistake, but when you don't do the simple things to make your typing easier to understand, thats when people get upset.

Your game is looking pretty good for a first game. Just make sure you are very thourough on the story. A lot of times in games I see complex stories that could be good, but the designer never brings it out. You know the story in and out since you designed it, but we don't, so you really have to work at brining it out.

You're screens aren't really bad, they're a lot better than the crap ones from my first game, so good job there, you'll get better as you work with it more. Take drenin's advice on the maps, also, you may want to look at meiscool's "do and don'ts of map making" in the tutorials section of this forum, it may help.

[omegarirue]

lol i just did and im gonna fallow it

[omegarirue]

k i inproved my temple by a little.

[omegarirue]

sry about that hole in the wall of the temple.its not sopussed to be there

[coreystranick]

Very good improvement, jsut add some more stuff to make it alittle more monotnous(sp?) but otherwise you are doing very well.