Final RPG IV

[omegarirue]

yeah how does he find it

[StarBeamAlpha]

hay, whats up guys I am Male Haro's cousin. we thought it would be better to just make one game first. we decided to add in an evil empire that has taken over the world. now this empire is really decandants of an ancient race, and u are the rebel that needs to find the ancient magical articfacts, we think that the island that the hero lands on is really an ancient tomb os this ancient race. now this is really cool we are planning to make it the first and last dungeon. but when it is the last dungeon it actually starts to mysteriously float in the air!

now when in the tomb he accidently breaks the seal of the demon king when he reads the prophecy. so with this knowledge of the prophecy he can set to destroy the evil empire and the demon king. o i forgot to say that the main character lost his parents when his home town burned down when he was 5 we thought we would add some depth to his character. now we are thinking of adding innovate things to the game like monsters that you can get on your team to add some flare to Final RPG IV

[DragonBlaze]

Well its kinda cliche, but not bad. The whole idea of the first dungeon being the last dungeon has been done a lot though, so I hope you have a lot more than that part to make your game cool.

And how were you planning on getting monsters on your party? Do you plan on making an 'ally' system where you can ally with monsters that your fighting, or do you just plan to make some of the party members monster characters?

[StarBeamAlpha]

we are thinking maybe they fuze with you to boost your stats or maybe like an item or we might have like one of the spots taken for a monster then you can have a monster ranch.

[Male Haro]

OK. U guys I am starting over the series at Final RPG I, since U guys think my game sucks, I should start over w/the advice of U.
Check out the new topic, I made: Final RPG.

[DragonBlaze]

We just think your game needs improvement. Remaking an old game won't change our standards (at least not mine) of what a game should be like.

Here, these are three tutorials I wrote a long time ago about stories, gameflow, intos, and endings. I wrote these after playing some really good games, watching some good tv series, and then playing some bad games, I thought about what made the good games good and the bad games bad, and I wrote down my observations. Maybe you can find something useful, and maybe you won't.

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?forumid=29&catid=6&threadid=15557

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=16222&forumid=29&catid=6

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?forumid=29&catid=6&threadid=15456