My new Game

[redwallmax]

yeah well if anyone has any sugestions tell me for anything that would be great and if anyone knows how to make a jump ability for my lancer how would i do that and thanks for all your thoughts

[Emerates]

In future reference, please break your stories into paragraphs.  I couldn't even finish the story because I never had a chance to stop and rewind.  Also, the intro is pretty original (by my n00b standards), so there's +1 Goodness for your game.

However, if you're going make him pick something up, you have to either make sure that he finds it after a certain number of steps, or that there is a fixed path that he has to take in the beginning.  Just some tips to help ya out.

[Lighting Half Dozen]

Whoa...
This makes me wanna quit my own work on my own game (which has been forggoten.) and help you.
Great story. Woderful. Hard to read. The scene is wierd. The charecters are obviously generated and it seems like they clash with eachother from head to toe (pixle head to pixle toe?).

Anyway, great story. I'll be supporting this one all the way.

[redwallmax]

thanks so much everyone im realy going to try and get tihis one to work hope you will like

[Dragoon de Sol]

If you can prove to me that this will go somewhere, I'll give you a code for the jump ability.

[EXO Muffin]

For help with names, storylines, and such:

http://www.seventhsanctum.com/

[redwallmax]

ok so how would i go about proving myself?
because i need that jump ability

[coreystranick]

Start you game and put up screenshots of you game in action. Do mock-ups for any custom systems you might have, tell us what you WILL have in the game.

All of that will prove that the game will go somewhere.

[redwallmax]

well im planning on having a catipiller system if i can find on that works. Im going to have a music skill that can be used by blitzer simmiler to the orcarina of time. ( that will change weather day and night and seasons) Planing on having a season system. A jump system. Steal system. Mime system if i can figure it out. And some other stuff  cant think of anything else at the moment and for screens ill post a coulple im using for practice.

[redwallmax]

so heres some screen one is in the Dragoon Crypt andthe other is a battle

[redwallmax]

Crypt

[redwallmax]

and heres a screeen of latchit

[redwallmax]

I got my day and night system to work im so happy .

[redwallmax]

i made some sprite edits for leif that show some emotion they are sadness, love, nervous, and shocked

[coreystranick]

For that just do what a tutorial says for one chatarter and add that coding again for the other characters. Note that some parts may need alittle changing. Try blade2k.net for some tuts also.
Ohh and as for screenshots load them up on photobucket and copy the code on to one post, just so you don't need to make alot of posts.

Yours maps also seem abit open. Go to the tutorial page and look for Meiscool's tut on map making, that will help you.