heretic divinity

[Noobpwner]

the story takes place on two planets a planet like heaven where a bunch of people with angel wings and fox heads live and a planet that resembels hell where the humans live your a half human half angel who is thrown out of heaven to hell and your on a quest to try to fly back to heaven but god takes your wings.  So you have to go across all of hell looking for your wings but on your journey looking for them you discover a plan that god and the deil put together to join heaven and hell which would result in the death of all the angels cause thwe demons know about it so they are prepared but the angels dont so you and the people you meet must try to stop this from happening and get to heaven and warren the angels.


Main characters:

kanji:

is the main character and is sent to hell stupid thing erased what i said befor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill write it again dont worry.....



senji:

a mischievious angel who was also sent down from heaven he doesnt tell anyone about himself so hes very misturious

is that enouph info?


EDIT: the reason thats poor quality is beacause I had to try and save it as something that i could atach cause i didnt have a photobucket account then ...

[I Have a Sandwich]

Is that story even a single thought?

[Noobpwner]

what do you meen by that??

[I Have a Sandwich]

I mean its a giant mess of incoherent jibberish.

[Daetyrnis]

I tried your game from the link in your other thread.  It's slow because you have an Auto Start event that runs, and doesn't turn off.  All it does is turn on a switch.  The switch ironically activates a common event that is also Auto Start.  All the common event does is change the message settings.

You slow down the game pointlessly, and use a common event for something you definately don't need to happen endlessly.

Are you sure you're experienced with rm2k3?

Also, a game made by someone with little effort put into spelling and grammar (such as you) will be very hard to follow.  So without a decently conveyed story, you will need good gameplay to have even a mediocre game.  You don't.

From this we can draw that you, noobpwner, can't make a good game.  We can also derive from what you've posted recently is that you are full of yourself for skills you don't have, and like to make excuses for things you've done poorly.

You are the weekest link, goodbye.

[Noobpwner]

im sorry if im not perfect but i thought i deleted that common event and im not goin to give up because some **** told me to im goin 2 try to make this game the best i can....

[MrMister]

Originally posted by Noobpwner
im sorry if im not perfect but i thought i deleted that common event and im not goin to give up because some **** told me to im goin 2 try to make this game the best i can....

We are not telling you to give up. We are telling you to stop being a little jerkwater. Sorry if those two sound the same to you.

[Bluhman]

He's right, though. I completley lose understanding of what you're saying by the time you reach the word 'Deil'.

[Meiscool-2]

This deserves a big ROFL.

[Daetyrnis]

I didn't tell you to give up, just that if you don't stop being a stupid person, the game won't be good.  The two play hand in hand most of the time (including your case).

[drenrin2120]

Sorry dude, but I gotta agree with them. You're being needlessly whiny and on the offense for no reason. They're just saying what they see. They are the players man, what they see SHOULD matter to you more than anything.

[I Have a Sandwich]

I've been the only nice person in here. I think I've entered... The Twilight Zone.

[Noobpwner]

duh duh duh......
well then i guess i should stop this game cause you guys are right it is hopeless and a waste of time i wish i knew how to use rpg maker 2k3 better... can someone post a demo of a abs here so that i understand how it works better cause those tutorials give me a headache....

[Meiscool-2]

Don't stop game making... just get better before you post a game that you think is gold and you claim deserves our full attention.

And believe me, though you might not've used those words, making 3 topics for one game seems to me like a scream for attention.

[MrMister]

I'm not posting a demo of an ABS so you can steal it, you have Google for that.