Land of Azhurin

[forgetaboutit]

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- Story:
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- Characters:
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There are 3 classes you can choose: Archer, Warrior, or Mage. Each class has its own abilities and weapons.

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- Running:
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Hold shift to run. It makes you a little fast
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- Quest Menu:
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There are 2 kinds of quests: primary quests, and secondary quests. The primary quests are the ones you have to complete to finish the game. The secondary quests are the ones that you dont have to do, but they can give you some kind of rewards. You can acess the primary and secondary quest menus by pressing 1 and 2.
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- Spin attack:
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Hold the attack button to charge your sword, then release it in a fast and powerfull attack that will hurt all the enimies around you.
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- Lock facing
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Press 0 while facing an oponent to lock facing.
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- Side Quests:
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The most part of the game is based in side quests. Those are the secondaries quests, that there are not necessaries to finish the game, but they can give you all the kinds of rewards.
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- Gifs
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[Moosetroop11]

You absolutely definately NEED to turn the message box transparency off when people are speaking.

[SilverBlade]

Looks good lukas .

But it would be a little bit stupid if every1 says: 'good' or 'bad' so I'm going to give you a little bit advice.

I suggest you should fill up the maps a little bit more. Like in the first screens, put different kinds of grass(darker, mud, flowers...). In the king's throne room, perhaps some statues or flowers...

Besides that, I would like to see some more . Keep up the good work.

 [SHADOW]SilverBlade[/SHADOW]

[Dragoon de Sol]

A) Why does the font suck?

B) I suggest for the intro, instead of the message command for the text, make some pictures, and use a combination of show, move, and erase picture commands. You can use a lot of different fonts and it looks better. And the maps are still empty. Use some shadows, flowers, rocks, and grassy areas to fill it in.

[Robotam Plus]

I'm not a big fan of the burning village scene from looking at that screenshot, it looks very B-ish and unrealistic with the same type of flames everywhere. If you'd like I could help you spice up the burning village a bit, or at least tell you how it's done. Send a PM if you're interested.

With the right features I think this game could turn out to be pretty good.

[Dominicy]

this looks pretty interesting.  the maps are about average, but eh, I suck at maps too.  the face sets are a bit mixed, and the knight's face set's armor is purple, but his armor is grey in game.  I suggest using a purplish knight for him.

If you need help making story and such, I can do that.


also, fail at this, and I'll grind you into powder. :3

[RuneBlade]

you mind sharing the two chipsets you used in those screens? I like em. Looks nice, but I dont approve of the green bright system, I dont think it fits.

[Bluhman]

All of the chipsets of that style can be found at a nifty, japanese RM site by the name of  First Seed Material. It's where Mac and Blue have set up base and continued to make their glorious resources.

[Vidian]

I don't mean to be a bastard
but...

There wasn't enough soldiers in the village
to stop 3 soldiers from burning the place down?

And the whole storyline is A massive cliche
The Whole little "Final Fantasy Tactics scene" with the father Does definetly need more things in it... but the thing I'm really concerned about is:
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King Dude
"Son... Save Azhurin"

Son
"KAY DAD!"
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Not word for word, but pretty much...
Actually what I wrote would have been better.
Your script writing need some work. O.O

Yeah I like the Fathers face set, Im guessing you found the Japanese Face set maker Program? Why not make them all with that?

[MrMister]

anakiiinnn, you're breaking my taaaaaaables

[SilverBlade]

Originally posted by Vidian
I don't mean to be a bastard
but...

There wasn't enough soldiers in the village
to stop 3 soldiers from burning the place down?

And the whole storyline is A massive cliche
The Whole little "Final Fantasy Tactics scene" with the father Does definetly need more things in it... but the thing I'm really concerned about is:
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King Dude
"Son... Save Azhurin"

Son
"KAY DAD!"
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Not word for word, but pretty much...
Actually what I wrote would have been better.
Your script writing need some work. O.O

Yeah I like the Fathers face set, Im guessing you found the Japanese Face set maker Program? Why not make them all with that?

Before I start, I don't want to insult you or anything :p.

You see, when I saw such stories I used to say 'cliché' too, but then someone answered my post(I don't know who) that 'clichés' are always part of RPG's. They were always a part and they still are, even in the RPG's that are published today and are not made in RPGmaker.

To make it short: Most RPG's have cliché's but that's fine as longs as is works out well and it doesn't bother you to much. It has been like this and it will probably stay like this for a while.

[Lainke]

It looks good for me, the only thing I dont like to much are the stairs in front of that house, u should try to fix it, but, it do looks good, upload ur game when u have it ready, so we could try it out ^^

[Prpl_Mage]

I´d say this sounds a bit like Fire Emblen, you are a hier of some nobel family and something goes terribly wrong and because of the parents having a hard time they send you away either to protect you or so that you can raise an army of trusty peole that will help in reclaiming the country.

So yea, just make this a bit improved, more dark and mysterious in a FFXII, Soul Callibur III, FFIX or even Heroes V way.
They use the same base as you do but they evolve it into something so much more, that is the only thing needed I´d say.

Just as most other here, I don´t seek to insult you, I´m just trying to get you to improve.

[SilverBlade]

Originally posted by Lainke
It looks good for me, the only thing I dont like to much are the stairs in front of that house, u should try to fix it, but, it do looks good, upload ur game when u have it ready, so we could try it out ^^

About the stairs, for my game Yin-Yang, I used the same chipset and had the same problem with the stairs. So I took some stairs from another chipset and put it in the village chipset...Feel free to use it, lucas(and other people of course)!

[~Kon~]

Wow. The message box is so flashy... Wow again.

The story is quite classic ( the village gets burned, the kid becomes a great hero and saves the universe by getting enormous powers) but it does look quite good.

Good luck