A sad, but blushing, woman

[Dragoon de Sol]

I know it's not very good, but I'm proud of it anyway

http://s173.photobucket.com/albums/w44/GuardianDaniel/?action=view¤t=Picture002.jpg

[Meiscool-2]

You did the hair really well, and that's one of the most important things when drawing a girl.

Just try to make the face more female (mainly, the prominate chin. Most girls don't have one quite so prominate). Better coloring could help too.

But I really like it. I don't see why you would think we would think it's crap. Afterall, MrMister is gone for a day or two.

[Arcanagirl]

Originally posted by Meiscool
You did the hair really well, and that's one of the most important things when drawing a girl.

Just try to make the face more female (mainly, the prominate chin. Most girls don't have one quite so prominate). Better coloring could help too.

But I really like it. I don't see why you would think we would think it's crap. Afterall, MrMister is gone for a day or two.

what he said!


Really looks good, cept for the manly face

[Blue_Strife]

Originally posted by Meiscool
You did the hair really well, and that's one of the most important things when drawing a girl.

Just try to make the face more female (mainly, the prominate chin. Most girls don't have one quite so prominate). Better coloring could help too.

But I really like it. I don't see why you would think we would think it's crap. Afterall, MrMister is gone for a day or two.

Third'd.

[Dragoon de Sol]

I usually have trouble with that, but I'm trying ^^.

And witht he coloring, well, you can only do so much with color pencils from crayola. ^^

[Daetyrnis]

It's overall not horrible, and you can definitely feel her emotion. ^_^
Tip: less flat faces. >_>

[Ben]

This thread reminds me that I should make a couple of new tutorial installments. I have some easy to remember tips for facial structure.


Its good though. You just need to learn the anotomicals of a profile.

[Dragoon de Sol]

I know what you mean by that, but I didn't have a skin colored color pencil, so I had to use orange VERY lightly, and if I had added shadow, it'd be weird looking ^^

[SaiKar]

The coloring isn't the issue. It's the shape of the face itself. I have to agree with the rest of the posters before me; it's rather difficult to tell it's a girl's face.

[Osmose]

Lower and less pointy nose, smaller chin, and longer face. Basically what they said.

Otherwise, great job.

[Dragoon de Sol]

I'll remember these tips next time. Thanks all ^^

[Dominicy]

didn't read the other posts so I don't know if some one pointed this out, but the nose is a bit high up.  the lips should be alittle lower as should the nose, otherwise, for the most part, its perfect.

[Dragoon de Sol]

To tell the truth, if I lowered the nose and lips, the chin wouldn't be a problem ^^

[ZeroKirbyX]

If you lowered the nose and lips, the forehead would become a problem. Her eyes are too wide to be a profile view, and her ear is too small.

[Meiscool-2]

I don't think the ear is to small, but now that I take a closer look at it, I think it's a little low.

With me, around the center of my ear is aligned with my eyes. Maybe that could help next time?